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Gohan
July 4th, 2005, 12:15 PM
Gawd! The only poems I can write are love songs!

Leave Me Alone

Leave me alone,
Stop following me,
Go stick your head in a cone,
What do you want with me?
I'm sick of you,
Go die in that corner,
See what I do,
See if I care,
You aren't my friend,
You took mine away,
Under a cheap mask,
No one would ever ask,
You to be there friend,
What do you want with me?
I'm sick of you,
You aren't my friend,
You took mine away,
Who would ask,
You to be their friend anyway...?

I wrote this one as I visulized it as a song.

Sumomo & Kotoko
July 4th, 2005, 12:25 PM
Its good. I like it. I'll give it........a 8.9/10. :D

Is it about any one who liked you? :\

Gohan
July 4th, 2005, 12:47 PM
Nope. I only thnk I do good on ones about love and somehow all of my poems seem to lean that way. Even if I wanted it to be about Dogs or something I could somehow manage to fit stuff about love in there.