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Shadow
July 5th, 2005, 06:59 PM
Weird Gengar. Tired. Have headache. Couldn't find non-dark duals (not on PPN) or else this would've been grass/psychic like my old Gastly and Haunter. Why do I care? I'm a helicopter!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v22/RocketShadow/mTCG/gengarcopy.jpg

Forci Stikane
July 5th, 2005, 07:22 PM
Good, but the term "after this turn" can be taken as a permanent affliction, which is definitely illegal. It should probably be something more like "Your opponent cannot flip a coin to wake up their pokemon until after their next turn" or something more specific like that.

Frostweaver
July 5th, 2005, 09:55 PM
"after this turn" should probably read as "for the next in-between turn." Normally, there's 2 coin flips for the opponent to try to wake up until it is your turn again. I think that you're trying to reduce this 2 coin flip down to one... I think "for the next in-between turn" should be the right way of saying it.

The title mistakens me to be a Dreadlord card from warcraft 3 again or something O.o; afterall, "the night beckons" is one of his quotes...

Gokey Shuckle
July 6th, 2005, 05:43 AM
Mistakes have been pointed out. Good work! Another star card from you! You are one of the best newcomers i've seen faking! 9/10. Yeah, sometimes wording gets to me too.

Shadow
July 6th, 2005, 06:17 AM
"after this turn" should probably read as "for the next in-between turn." Normally, there's 2 coin flips for the opponent to try to wake up until it is your turn again. I think that you're trying to reduce this 2 coin flip down to one... I think "for the next in-between turn" should be the right way of saying it.

The title mistakens me to be a Dreadlord card from warcraft 3 again or something O.o; afterall, "the night beckons" is one of his quotes...
If I have wings, why am I always walking?

Fixed!

Datriot
July 7th, 2005, 01:27 AM
very good card! pic looks nice, looks real! 9/10!

Charizard_Fire_God
July 7th, 2005, 05:58 AM
W00t! 10/10, no further questions! ^_^
Great pic, great background an' great attacks too. W00t for tha second attack! ^_^