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FaerieEsqueThing
July 7th, 2005, 04:02 PM
Episode 1: King Of the Elevated Land Mass (http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/274/comtext5bb.jpg)
Episode 2: McPAIN
(http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/3230/mcdonaldscomic6em.jpg)
Episode 1 is a remix of an old comic I read a long time ago.

This is a new comic series I'm doing.

Jeremy
July 7th, 2005, 04:24 PM
w00t! A King of the Hill spoof. Funny, sweetie.

blue eyes white dragon
July 7th, 2005, 04:25 PM
(tilts head) great but I do not wach it.

~kasey

Draik
July 7th, 2005, 05:04 PM
Well, the styles dont match. Maybe you could use the regular Trainer Sprites :\

armadilloHD
July 7th, 2005, 06:20 PM
The sprites are blurry, resizing with not paint programs is messy. I suggest writing a script as well, don't just make it up as you go along. Ask other people if your jokes are funny while creating a script. The king of the hill characters don't move at all. Find some good video game bgs for sprite comics. Really this wasn't funny. You don't get an A for effort. Since I could have made this in about 5 seconds. Rated: 2.3

FaerieEsqueThing
July 7th, 2005, 07:03 PM
The sprites are blurry, resizing with not paint programs is messy. I suggest writing a script as well, don't just make it up as you go along. Ask other people if your jokes are funny while creating a script. The king of the hill characters don't move at all. Find some good video game bgs for sprite comics. Really this wasn't funny. You don't get an A for effort. Since I could have made this in about 5 seconds. Rated: 2.3

Alright, I don't CARE if YOU think it was funny, so be quiet.

Also, You focus on the details not the idea. Quit being a humor nazi. You're not an almighty god of what's funny or not.

armadilloHD
July 7th, 2005, 07:29 PM
Alright, I don't CARE if YOU think it was funny, so be quiet.

Also, You focus on the details not the idea. Quit being a humor nazi. You're not an almighty god of what's funny or not.
That last sentance contradicts your first dude, I think you do care. Listen, if you don't take critism, then stop posting comics! We aren't going to stop calling them crap until you get better!

Plus, I don't have to, mr. minimod

FaerieEsqueThing
July 7th, 2005, 08:04 PM
That last sentance contradicts your first dude, I think you do care. Listen, if you don't take critism, then stop posting comics! We aren't going to stop calling them crap until you get better!

Plus, I don't have to, mr. minimod

First of all, it's MISS. Second of all, I'm getting a mod on your butt.

Sapphire Skitty
July 7th, 2005, 08:16 PM
HILARIOUS COMIC!!!! Love it!

BTW, don't start a fight here, when someone picks on you, ignore them.

FaerieEsqueThing
July 7th, 2005, 08:26 PM
New comic! Episode 2! Check top post.

Lokhlan
July 7th, 2005, 08:39 PM
Alright folks, here's the deal:

XxTour, please, please, try and work on accepting ANY form of critism (good, bad, hateful) a little better.

armadilloHD, giving out critism is great, but make sure it's reasonable. The line "You don't get an A for effort." was definitely not needed. Save the more mature/hardcore critism for the more mature/hardcore forums. This is Pokemoncommunity, not Ages 16 and up forums. Most people can't take crap like that here.

If there is any further BS from either of you in this thread, it'll be locked.

Have fun you silly willies! XD

Draik
July 8th, 2005, 07:51 AM
Yay! It's pretty good! Just like Jeremy's. All you need to do is make some word bubbles and it'll be great ^_^

FaerieEsqueThing
July 8th, 2005, 11:42 AM
Yay! It's pretty good! Just like Jeremy's. All you need to do is make some word bubbles and it'll be great ^_^

The speech bubbles didn't really work. :/ It looked better without.