My munchlax sprite!

[Shiny Munchlax]

I based it off a drawing I found, it could use a few more colors but I think I did fairly good on it, what do you guys think?

[MegaFuz]

Hmm. It needs work. The lower half of the body is just odd looking to me. For the way the body is facing, the head is too far turned as well. It has potential though.

[Shiny Munchlax]

and a little bit of magic...

[MegaFuz]

Ehh...a little better. All I can see is you made the chest patch a tad bigger. It didn't really fix the problem, though.

[EDIT] Oh, I see the head was changed now. Still...try moving the eyes and mouth farther. I'd even move the left eye so it was wrapping around the back side that isn't visible.

[Shiny Munchlax]

i also moved the eyes over about 2 pixels and moved the teeth over some too.

Edit: I once again revised it.

[MegaFuz]

I edited my message. Look above.

[EDIT] Much Better! Good job. Now, like you mentioned in your first message, add some more colors. But good work!

[Shiny Munchlax]

Thanks alot for helping me. Thanks to your suggestions, it looks a whole lot better! :D

[MegaFuz]

No problem. I'd say this is maybe a 7 or 8 outta 10 right now. But with some shading touch ups and added color, 9 or 10 is not far away. Good job.

[Shiny Munchlax]

shaded...this will probably be the last or second to last one...

[MegaFuz]

Excellent! Perhaps some minor tune ups, but an awesome improvement! Definately 9/10!

[Shiny Munchlax]

And here it is...(without the back pics, havent done them yet, lol), Munchlax(Non-shiny and Shiny) for Ruby and Sapphire! PS If you use any of my stuff please give me credit somewhere :)

[Kenji-san]

Very nice sprite!
Definately a 9/10! :D

[Shiny Munchlax]

If anyone wants to try to give it some more shading or whatnot, please do and post it here. If i like one that i would like to put in my game i will certainly give you credit too.

[FoxHound!]

I;ll do it
it's nice to see fresh talent around here

[PokemonChampion2K4]

too darn big but good just fix shadin. ok