Waiting for Eternity

[Cybex Mewtwo]

I stand by the waters' edge
Waiting for the one thing that I never had...

I stand by the waters' edge
Longing for the one memory that I never knew...

I stand by the waters' edge
Wishing for the return of the person who never loved me...

I still stand by the waters' edge...
hoping that what I want returns from the beyond...

Time passes...
And I am still there...
But I remain empty-handed...

[Caroline]

It's very good. ^_^
I love how you repeated the words, 'I stand by the waters' edge' in most of the lines. It gave it a stronger effect.
You have done a great job with it and I hope to see more work from you in the near future.

[Sumomo & Kotoko]

I loved it. It showed how you can love someone but they don't love you back....its a sad feeling really. :(

But the poem was great! 9/10.

[Midori Chi]

Like anger, it is also very good! ^^ Keep up the good work! 9/10

[Cybex Mewtwo]

Wanna know hat's funny? Most of these I make up on the spot.

[Midori Chi]

I did that with one of mine! So you're not the only one..

[Cybex Mewtwo]

Yep. I pull this stunt all the time.