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PokéSithLord
July 10th, 2005, 08:19 PM
I don't take requests

These are some of my sprites :bandit:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v144/insaneSammi/charlie/eiltepsychicrasaseuin.png
this is a psychic I made.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v144/insaneSammi/charlie/BLADESTAFF.png
I made this weapon. It is a bladestaff (a staff with a blade on it)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v144/insaneSammi/charlie/BLETEAMOF.png
This is the main characters of FRLG in blue.

Umbreon's Shadow
July 10th, 2005, 08:26 PM
They are good.

The psychic looks good but could use some more work like,try some custom things.6/10

Bladestaff sucks.No offense at all.The idea is cool but the shading needs LOTS of work.0.8/10

The characters are just recolors.As recolors they are great but as sprites,recolors are cheap.9/10

Draik
July 10th, 2005, 09:24 PM
1. Make something original. Don't just crop something and put it on another avoid using black in sprites. 6/10
2. Horrible. Needs to be less smooth, more detail and shading is needed. .3/10
3. Cheap >.> need some more originality. 5/10.
Overall: 2.1
The main thing you need to fix is improve your originality. Try to avoid black and replace it with a darker version of the base colour.

Frostbite
July 10th, 2005, 09:50 PM
Well the first one is nice, I like how you colored the pants and shirt. Your wepon one looks bad. The hook needs to look more sharper and try to trim down the handle. It has no shading what so everm, you might want to work on that. The final ones are just recolors, nothing really special. Try something more original next time.

Pincushion
July 10th, 2005, 09:53 PM
Your shading needs alot of work, it needs more than just to diffrent shades of colour, the first one is good though, I like it.

Second as Umbreon's Shadow nice idea, needs alot of work, more shading and it needs to be less straight it needs more 3-D-ness.

Sykora you've been abit harsh here tbh there not all that bad.

The last ones are okay but needs more orignality,
you need alot more practice.

Alex_
July 10th, 2005, 10:04 PM
Yeah,as everyone has already stated,you need to work on your shading and outlining.

Crystal Clair
July 11th, 2005, 01:37 AM
The psychic is pretty good. As Umbreon's shadow said, custom stuff is good.
The bladestaff: needs shading and make the black lines a few tints darker than the object's color.
For the recolors: recolors are cheap, anyone can do them. Try changing their clothes
Keep at it, practice makes perfect
Crystal Clair~