My first custom sprites

[Black Gligar]

These are some of my first custom sprites ever. I know they're small but I'm just a beginner. Plese rate them. (And don't ask why I left the color palettes on.)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v290/1exodia1/bellsprout.bmphttp://img.photobucket.com/albums/v290/1exodia1/torchic.pnghttp://img.photobucket.com/albums/v290/1exodia1/gligarc.pnghttp://img.photobucket.com/albums/v290/1exodia1/azumarill.pnghttp://img.photobucket.com/albums/v290/1exodia1/luvdisk.png

[Pincushion]

There actually really cute, I like them, need alot of work and should be abit bigger, but yes, I do like em' very sweet!

[Black Gligar]

Thanks ^^ (Message too short)

Edit: Here's another one I judt made: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v290/1exodia1/magnemite.png

[Alex_]

They're all pretty good. Although ther outlining needs to be darker.

[Black Gligar]

Ya you're right. I'll make my next one with a dark outline.

Edit: New sprite, is the outline good this time? http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v290/1exodia1/gulpin.png

[Valdorath]

Keep up the good work and you will get really good i like them =)

[Alex_]

It' good but there's a big bump on he bottom of his stomach.

[Black Gligar]

*looks at gulpin* Oh... ya.... xD I'll go fix that

Edit: there we go http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v290/1exodia1/gulpin.png

Edit 2: Come on people post! This thread has 98 views and 7 posts!

[MegaFuz]

Not bad...some of the poses look a bit odd, but for your first ones they are pretty good. Keep working at it.

[Kain Fury]

Wow! You made those yourself? Those are pretty good for doing them without basing them on something...

[Omega Latios]

Wow! Pretty Good Work! But I Know You Can Do Better ^^

[Frostbite]

The Bellsprout is out of proportion, and it looks like it only has one leg. The Torchic is okay, but the head feathers need to look more feathery and the toes had to look a little sharper, it dose have claws on it's feet. I don't know what the third one is, but the face looks a little fat, you might want to trim it down a little. The Azurill looks allot out or proportion, try making it rounder. Again, same with the Luvdisc but a little better then the last one. The Gulpin is the most decent out of those sprites IMO. A little rounder and it would look good. You also need to work on shading; most of them look 2-Dish. Overall they need improvement but you definitely get an A in effort.

[Pincushion]

I like them so much because there drawn free-hand and are very unique, you should start a request thread -wants squirtle-
XD

[Black Gligar]

Thanks everyone ^^ And arctic, the third one is a very sad gligar head xP