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Thomas
July 15th, 2005, 04:09 PM
Listen Before It's Too Late

Voices tell me where I should go
Thoughts still wander on how much I have to grow
Noises surround me dying to be heard
I won't listen it is my turn for words

Lend me your ear I have things to say
One way, or another I will get my way
You turn and wander of to another place
My thoughts go to a place not far away

I've tried to get you to listen to me
I want just one chance to speak
It's time for me to voice out completely
But now it's to late, my future is bleak

Don't you see that I have nowhere to go
Can't you help me down this lonely road
I plead for a light at the end of this
I want something to fill this abyss

I've tried to get you to listen to me
I want just one chance to speak
It's time for me to voice out completely
But now it's to late, my future is bleak

Time is fading darkness fills my soul
Now it seems that I no longer feel whole
One more day left in this place I feel safe
Now I know that there is no escape

I've tried to get you to listen to me
I want just one chance to speak
It's time for me to voice out completely
But now it's to late, my future is bleak

Kyosuke
July 15th, 2005, 06:05 PM
Suicidal thoughts come to mind after reading this poem, I'm not exactly sure but by the title of it and the way you ended it, seems as if that suicide is what is about to soon take place.

It seems like a whole mental process with your conscience telling you what to do, and with the situation of what looks to be a break up, it just adds more to the whole thought process on whether or not to end it all.

Overall, great job I enjoyed it ^^