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Cybex Mewtwo
July 17th, 2005, 01:18 PM
In the middle of nothing
I have become something
I float amongst the dead
Waiting for life
I sit with the ordinary
Beacuse I'm extrodinary
I walk amongst the normal
Because I'm not
I try to fit in
But it doesn't seem to work
I break away from the norm
And become my own person
It fails...
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I have NO idea what the heck I just wrote. If anyone has any ideas, say somjething cause I am confused.
Midori Chi
July 23rd, 2005, 12:29 AM
No idea whatsoever..Seems to be about a person dying but is unable to go to heaven for some odd reason..Even though it's odd, I liked it! ^^
Chase Leader
July 23rd, 2005, 03:51 AM
Its ok, trying to find out who you are and become your own person just to realize that it just brought you to where you started...thats what I got out of it anyway...maybe I missed the message but thats what I got out of it.
Charizard_Fire_God
July 23rd, 2005, 05:02 AM
Hmm... tch, sounds like one o' those too-deep-ta-understand writings, well maybe there is some sense to it that yar subconscious wanted ta speak out... o.o
00Zero
July 23rd, 2005, 07:00 AM
its kinda confusing ya kno^^ well its cool but how does it start with people dieing and such??^^
Cybex Mewtwo
July 23rd, 2005, 04:46 PM
Uh.....I have no idea what I was thinking when I did this......this poem belongs on my wall of shame...
Sumomo & Kotoko
July 25th, 2005, 03:55 AM
In the middle of nothing
I have become something - Your going about your life and out of no where some thing happens.
I float amongst the dead
Waiting for life - I think this part is trying to say that every one is normal (dead) and your waiting to become diffrent(alive) from the rest.
I sit with the ordinary
Beacuse I'm extrodinary - You hid your true self from the rest off the world cause you have a great gift.
I walk amongst the normal
Because I'm not - you are diffrent from the rest.
I try to fit in
But it doesn't seem to work - Just what it says. :D
I break away from the normal
And become my own person - You try to be diffrent from the rest of the world...
It fails... - ...But it doesen't work.
^^Thats what I got out of it^^
It was truely a great poem. :classic:
Cybex Mewtwo
July 25th, 2005, 11:21 AM
Give a cookie to Raven's Pheonix for making the most sense.....even I HAD no idea what to make of this...