Nature

[Jeff_PKLight]

~Nature~

The winds hiss,
The clouds glides.
The trees sway,
And a bird flies.

The sun shines,
On the blanket of grass.
As well as the river,
That's running pretty fast.

The leaves rustle,
The skies are clear.
This is nature,
There's nothing to fear.

As time goes on,
Like nature today.
Things will change,
But nature will stay.

[pkmn-master]

Pretty cool poem i'd give it a 6/10

[Jeff_PKLight]

Thanks! :) I just want to know what you disliked about it.

[Chase Leader]

I get a good feeling of how nature is active...however it would have been nice if you added more about why things change, you know mix them together and start the poem over...if you get what I'm saying. The only thing I really liked about this poem was the last stanza, but at least the poem isn't horrible.

[Cybex Mewtwo]

Eh...not bad. Makes me feel serene on the inside...makes me want to relax...if it was a little longer, it would have been worthy of a ten, but here's a 9. Enjoy!