Better

[愛Forgotten Angel愛]

There have been better days
There have been better nights
There have been times when I was
Better

There have been better voices
There have been better screams
There have been people who cried for
Better things

There have been better mothers
There have been better fathers
There have been familes that were
Better

There have been better voices
There have been better screams
There have been people who cried for
Better things

There have been better sights
There have been better sounds
There have been lands where a
Better paradise was found

There have been many better things
Better things to cry for
To die for
To protect

There have been many better things
Better things to search for
To long for
To love

There have been many better things
Better things to see
To smell
To hear

But!
Those better things are gone
Because better isn't the best
And darkness consumes better things

Better things like light
Better things like happiness
Better things like joy
Better things like peacefullness

Better people don't understand
That better things like these
Were torn apart by better things
That were better

Better things than light
Better things than happiness
Better things than joy
Better things than peacefullness

Better things
We aren't apart of the better things
We are apart of the things that consume better things
We are darkness, so we are better than better things

I almost ran circles around myself writing this...still unsure of what it exactly means to me...but...hope you like it...I don't think it's that good...

[Kratos]

OMG, that was super good. I loved it. I like your poems alot.

[Chase Leader]

There have been many better things
Better things to cry for
To die for
To protect

There have been many better things
Better things to search for
To long for
To love

There have been many better things
Better things to see
To smell
To hear

But!
Those better things are gone
Because better isn't the best
And darkness consumes better things

Better things like light
Better things like happiness
Better things like joy
Better things like peacefullness

Better people don't understand
That better things like these
Were torn apart by better things
That were better

Better things than light
Better things than happiness
Better things than joy
Better things than peacefullness
This part of the poem I loved it tells the reader exactly what you were trying to express... Over all this poem was just too long for me some of it could have been cut out. Great poem!

[Cybex Mewtwo]

I love how you emphisize on BETTER. This gives the poem more force and thus more meaning to the reader. It gives me some sort of mental image, but I can't quite get it to the front of my head. Nonetheless, this is a very well written and orginized entry. Keep it up.