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Cybex Mewtwo
July 20th, 2005, 02:43 PM
The fire burns bright
echoes throughout the land
touching all it sees
and gleams on all it touches

But the fires' light
Can't reach far enough
to touch the souls of the dark
and release them from thier mortal coil

They represent all the oppresion of the land
They are the ones who suffered
They seek revenge upon the fire
And upon the light

They seek and destroy the lands
as they travel on, but
the light slowly changed them
the closer they go

Soon, the accept it, and once again
the fires' light does the trick
Evil changes to good
and hope this principle stays the same.
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eh...not my best...

(yuuka, your PM inbox is full. You need to delete them.)

yuuka
July 20th, 2005, 02:54 PM
dont think that,I say its your best.

Cybex Mewtwo
July 20th, 2005, 02:55 PM
Did you read the small message in parenthesis?

(yuuka, your PM inbox is full. You need to delete them.)

yuuka
July 20th, 2005, 03:02 PM
I know just deletd a few.thank for reminding me.

Cybex Mewtwo
July 20th, 2005, 03:02 PM
Good. Now then, anyone else to comment on this?

Sumomo & Kotoko
July 20th, 2005, 07:07 PM
I love it! Your work is always so cool! :D