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Lily
July 21st, 2005, 12:45 AM
I was soooo bored. oO;







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I will sanctify the world [...this is a vow, not a lie
I will not give in my best [ ...for heroes must win, but never tryI shall vanquish empty souls [...to them, the blade I must bestowI shall cry without a rest [...the blood of friends that makes it so




You will smile once again ~described radiant and benign
Dance across the sand once more ~with an elegance so divine
Fall inside another trap? ~woe is the life of a princess
And distress me like before ~the irony! (a laugh I must suppress)



A circle is where we’re at
-it never runs askew
How foolish! people exclaim
-as if they even knew No one really understands
-the game tag’s surrealism None has won the unfair game
-running in a pallid prism



So I will weep forever /the despair drives me insane/
Just another perpetual chase /hopeless and in vain/
Tell me, princess, in your words /promise you won’t run (again)/
Will you come or will I replace?

/this pain I must sustain?/





~




I will tell the wholesome truth - x※x - this is a l i e, not a vow
I am pretty, not a fool x x and questions I simply shan’t allowYou, prince, who so forsaken me x betrayal to his only ‘love’I am a serpent, not a jewel ※ swallowing the precious dove



I am lovely, so you speak? ¤ oh prince, you are much too kind!I cause great distress for you? ¤ you idiot, please do not mindSuch is the jester’s irony ¤ of what irony is there?Who has asked you to pursue ¤ a person, you do not know where?



So the game is tag, I see
※ who is tagged and who is ‘it’?
Do you know the rules by heart?
※ or are you plainly using wit?
No one really understands
※ this damsel’s thoughts on a hoax
A game, a book, or an art
※ or is this all some pathetic joke?


Weep for all I care, my Prince ~ /true, despair loves you dearly so/
Yet you still are ignorant ~ /ignorant, for you still do not know/


You see, I run fast ~ /the game’s just begun/

Can’t take a hint?


.. ////you know I w o n///

Jeff_PKLight
July 21st, 2005, 12:48 AM
Wow. That poem is awesome. o_o Good job!

Cybex Mewtwo
July 21st, 2005, 02:58 AM
This is one weird poem...but I like weird. You have a strange sense behind this, and it makes me feel good just reading it. very nice work.

Lily
July 22nd, 2005, 01:48 AM
Wow..thank you. I thought at some parts the beats were a bit irregular, but nevertheless, thank you!

Cybex Mewtwo
July 22nd, 2005, 01:49 AM
Always glad to say something. Do me a favor though.....and please write some more. I would love to see more if you wouldn't mind me asking.