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Cybex Mewtwo
July 21st, 2005, 03:04 AM
Up high in the sky
lived four dragons

one of ice and snow
who controled the wind flow

one of spitfire
able to burn the sky asunder

one of natures release
floral fallal and pistils sheath

one of the sky at night
with a star inside burning broight

They all lived in harmony together, but
one began to think,
If I kill of the other three
then I'll be left...like a king...

The spitfire dragon
blasted the nature one
he fell to the ground in a blanket of ash
and crippling debri well over a ton.

Ice came to fire and froze it
deep in it's tracks
frozen solid he did lay
bundled up like a frozen snack

The star blinked out the ice
it was knocked out of existence
the ice melted and became
nothing more that a puddle of incense

Nature managed to cover the star
vines thick and thin
overtook the dragons will
and he was taken in

four dragons lived in peace
but greed took them down
their tale was heard throughout
because they all no longer make a sound

why couldn't they just get along...

Chase Leader
July 21st, 2005, 03:51 AM
To be honest, I just wasn't feeling it. The whole poem didn't flow and it was almost like a story than actual poetry. Sorry I didn't care for it.

Cybex Mewtwo
July 21st, 2005, 12:20 PM
To be honest, I just wasn't feeling it. The whole poem didn't flow and it was almost like a story than actual poetry. Sorry I didn't care for it.No sweat. Eventually I would do a bombshell and it would all come back to haunt me...so don't worry. And to say another thing, I wasn't feeling it either! No wonder you aint got a feeling as well!

Midori Chi
July 23rd, 2005, 12:22 AM
It seems you were rhyming..Which I like and dragons are cool! The poem was a little..well..I agree with Overload a little...Just a little though...It was a good poem! *smiles*