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Abskull
July 23rd, 2005, 07:52 AM
Thanks to Cybex Mewtwo who encouraged me to continue writing my poems ^_^!
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Anger is a pain
A volcano that's about to erupt
An ember
Which when you hold,
It burns the flesh of your palm
A needle to the brain
Trying to confuse you
Trying to hurt you
Like a knife to the heart
Making you unaware of your friends' and family's feelings
Like a gas
Poisoning the soul
Choking the spirit
But anger can be defeated
With a hug
Some friendship
And some courage
Anger can be destroyed
Which clears the mind

Eon-Rider
July 23rd, 2005, 02:21 PM
*claps* that was brilliant! I enjoyed reading that.

Abskull
July 23rd, 2005, 03:07 PM
Hehe... thatnks! ^_^ It's one of my more darker poems.

Cybex Mewtwo
July 23rd, 2005, 04:49 PM
I actually pictured a small movie to go along with this. Very well done Abskull. Simply brilliant.

fallen_angel
August 10th, 2005, 01:33 AM
That's a really great poem!

Nagoyaka Aikouka
August 10th, 2005, 05:58 PM
It was a nice poem, Abskull, thanks for sharing it with us. I really enjoyed the different ways you explained anger to be harmful, and each of them was as true as the next. Again, thanks for sharing it with us!