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TheOnly
July 23rd, 2005, 11:51 PM
When I am alone;
When I am tired;
What keeps me on;
Is you;
When I Fall;
You Pick Me Up;
When Everything Fails;
You Succed;
My Savior;
My God;
Jesus Christ;
Son Of God.

How Is It?

Cybex Mewtwo
July 24th, 2005, 12:34 AM
I'm not in the least bit religious, but this got me praisng god. I felt a little energy with this one. I like it.

TheOnly
July 24th, 2005, 01:23 AM
thank you. I was waiting for people to say it isnt that good. But thanks.

TheOnly
July 26th, 2005, 12:29 AM
new!

Molding

I Mold every day;
Whenever I hear you;
Whenever you say;
I love you too;

I Mold Whenever we feel;
Boy the only thing that stops;
Is whenever I peel;
The Fire Inside Me says to go to the tops;

Only if i can cool down;
Do I ever mold.



Is That Ok?

Cybex Mewtwo
July 26th, 2005, 01:31 PM
hmm........not as good as the one you first did, but it still is good nonetheless. Kinda liked it. The only thing is, I can't get a message out of it...unless there wasn't one to begin with...

TheOnly
July 26th, 2005, 01:34 PM
Exactly there isnt one. I didnt make a meaning.

Cybex Mewtwo
July 26th, 2005, 01:38 PM
Then I feel like a dope for trying to find one! So disregard that part...

TheOnly
July 26th, 2005, 01:39 PM
i gave u good rep for liking these.

Cybex Mewtwo
July 26th, 2005, 02:09 PM
I would do the same for you...but I already gave you rep, and I haven't 'spread it around' enough yet...