The Triumphant Return of G/T

[Mooshykris]

G/T IS BACK!

This is the best and most advanced thread of all time for:

Pokémon
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+=-Last Update-=+
+=-7-31-2005-=+


+=-THE FEATURES-=+


New Riegon Pavvailion & Part of Northern Kanto
Chosing between boy and Girl
About 130-150 new Pokemon (I can handle it)
A customised DBS
Countless Sidequests
50 more TMs and 4 more HMs
About 120 new moves
A Riegon Database, all riegons accepted (good for fangame advertising, PM or Post if you want yours here)


+=-PLOT-=+
(This game takes place about 1 year before R/B/Y/FR/LG)


Part I:
You are a young boy/girl who just turned 10. You can finnally become a Pokemon Trainer. You go to Prof. Magnolia's Lab to get your first Pokemon. Prof. Magnolia has a errand for you to run. He sends you to the Mid-Night forest at the Kanto/Pavvailion Boarder to escort his friend Prof. Oak back to the lab. Upon arriving, you find Oak being ambushed by the notoroius Team Pavvailion who has their minds set on taking over everything. You battle them and drive them away. But, you overhear a grunt say their plans.

"once we take over the Pavvailion League, we will have acess to the International Pokemon League Headquarters!"

So the race is on! Can you stop Team Pavvailion before it's too late?


+=-Characters-=+


Major

Scott:
Gender: Male
Peronalaty: Irresponsible, Has a Bad Scence of Humor
Occupation: PKMN Trainer
Scott is the main boy of G/T, He rushes things and sometimes does very stupid things.

Nicole:
Gender: Female
Peronalaty: Serious, Cares only for herself
Occupation: PKMN Trainer
Nicole is the main girl of G/T, She takes things slowly and steadily, but she thinks she can do anything.

Proffessor Howard Magnolia:
Gender: Male
Peronalaty: Kindhearted
Occupation: Pokemon Proffessor
Prof. Magnolia is the head Proffessor of the Pavvailion Reigon. He is a very close friend of Prof. Oak.

Proffessor Samuel Oak:
Gender: Male
Peronalaty: Kindhearted, Smart
Occupation: Pokemon Proffessor
Prof. Oak is known worldwide as the "Pokemon Proffessor". He is the creator of the Pokedex and a Good friend of Prof. Magnolia. Rumors say he is also a powerful trainer.

Christopher Magnolia:
Gender: Male
Peronalaty: Kindhearted, Smart, Stubborn
Occupation: PKMN Trainer
Chris is a mysterious trainer. He is said to be one of the most experienced trainers in the world.

Sarah:
Gender: Female
Peronalaty: Kindhearted, Fast, Strong
Occupation: Team Pavvailion Admin
Sarah is a Team Pavvailion Admin, but she is really spying on them to stop their plans.

Timothy:
Gender: Male
Peronalaty: Kindhearted, Smart, Fast
Occupation: Team Pavvailion Admin
Like Sarah, Timothy is a secret agent to stop Team Pavvailion.

Team Pavvailion Leader Cody:
Gender: Male
Peronalaty: Evil
Occupation: Team Pavvailion Leader
Cody uses Brawn over Brain, he uses his destructive powers to create chaos.

Team Pavvailion Leader Sean:
Gender: Male
Peronalaty: Very Evil
Occupation: Team Pavvailion Leader
Sean is Cody's older brother. He choses Brain over Brawn. His Brain power causes sorrow and Dispair throughout Pavvailion.

Minor

Mrs. Magnolia:
Gender: Female
Peronalaty: Kindhearted, Brave
Occupation: Assistant to her husband
Mrs. Magnolia is the only girl reasearcher in the reigon.

Scott/Nicole's Dad (no name yet):
Gender: Male
Peronalaty: Brave, Strong, Stubborn
Occupation: Prof. Magnolia's Assisstant
Scott/Nicole's father is the one who suggusted him/her to escort Prof. Oak to the lab.

Scott/Nicole's Mom (no name yet):
Gender: Female
Peronalaty: Kindhearted, Peranoid
Occupation: Housewife
Scott/Nicole's Mother is always over-concerned about her son/daughter's heatlh.


+=-Rips-=+


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http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/7042/mooshykrisrip8qa.png
http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/6179/theadventurecontinues8di.png
http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/2058/rmxp9jb.png
Intro
(No commenting on my MK Entertainment Font, That's MY Logo.)

http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/6843/pokemonshine3za.png
http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/9928/titlescreen0mc.png
Title Screen
(I haven't got the good logo from nicoleb yet.)

http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/187/oakintro1rg.png
Oak Intro

http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/7074/gender7mp.png
Choose Your Gender.

http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/5391/scottready5re.png
Choose Scott

http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/5593/nicoleready7cq.png
Choose Nicole

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Talking to a Database operator in Prof. Magnolia's Lab.

http://img283.imageshack.us/img283/7823/sedimentcave0yw.png
Sediment Cave outside.

http://img283.imageshack.us/img283/5508/shrine18su.png
http://img283.imageshack.us/img283/132/shrine24eg.png
Sediment Cave Shrine

http://img283.imageshack.us/img283/4105/bikeshop7fu.png
Bike shop in Scarlet City.

http://img283.imageshack.us/img283/2399/bridge4ai.png
The Scarlet City bridge isn't Finished.

http://img283.imageshack.us/img283/1430/you4wi.png
Team Pavvailion is attacking the Scarlet City Gym.


+=-Final Words-=+
I hope you like this new thread, If you have any comments, don't hesitate to mention them.

Also, please don't be harsh on me this time, I won't take a flame war this time!!!

Finnally, If you would like to help, please PM Me.

[Chazzy]

I think you spelt Region wrong but apart from that it looks good, the professor Oak picture looks like he was resized a bit strangly, but other then region's spelling and that pic, it looks good, like the fog effect in the cave :)
And i would like a new region in the Database named Zenai (region in my game) Thanks in advance and good luck

[Burninating_Torchic]

yeah, there are lots of spelling errors, among them is Region...

[Mooshykris]

Thanks guys,

I'll fix them.

[Raccoon]

I'm really sorry, but I'm not impressed at all.
Spelling mistakes, empty maps, horrible tileset problems, dodgy pictures used, and what on earth is that RIPS part at the top of my your post about? Why would you want to rip a Windows XP glyph?

[Mooshykris]

I'm really sorry, but I'm not impressed at all.
Spelling mistakes, empty maps, horrible tileset problems, dodgy pictures used, and what on earth is that RIPS part at the top of my your post about? Why would you want to rip a Windows XP glyph?

*sigh* I guess you can't make everyone happy.

With the XP, I want it to look like the gameboy intro. And what dodgy pictures?

*sigh* I failed again to have a thread with no people who think it's bad.

[Dawson]

Really, was there any need to make another thread for your game? Your last one was barely 3 weeks old.
The first 5-6 screens are a bit...bleh...if you know what I mean.
The others are pretty decent, though some maps are fairly empty and could use with a bit more filling up.

[Jeff_PKLight]

Intro may need a bit of work... like the Boy/Girl box. There are a few mapping errors, like the bridge tileset errors.

Anyways, good luck with your game! :) Hope this time it becomes successful.

[Mooshykris]

Really, was there any need to make another thread for your game? Your last one was barely 3 weeks old.
The first 5-6 screens are a bit...bleh...if you know what I mean.
The others are pretty decent, though some maps are fairly empty and could use with a bit more filling up.

I couldn't find my old one. Also, from where I come from (Serebii forums) It's against the rules to reply to month old threads. (So I don't take chances with 3 and a half weeks)

p.s. If I can't ever get any good reviews, I will drop the project. This is my 8th thread.

[Dawson]

If you really want to make this game, try not giving up and restarting whenever you receive a few constructive criticisms. You're never going to get anywhere like that. Just take on board the comments made by people since we're only trying to help you to improve your game. Everybody gets constructive criticism, most people welcome and ask for it. That's what you should be doing too.
But if you don't have the inspiration and enthusiasm to carry on with the game because you want to, then I don't know why you're even starting these threads. Game makers make games for fun, because they enjoy it. And part of the enjoyment is being able to share your work with other people. But if you're not enjoying making it then there's not much point doing it.
Of course, that's just my opinion.

[Mooshykris]

If you really want to make this game, try not giving up and restarting whenever you receive a few constructive criticisms. You're never going to get anywhere like that. Just take on board the comments made by people since we're only trying to help you to improve your game. Everybody gets constructive criticism, most people welcome and ask for it. That's what you should be doing too.
But if you don't have the inspiration and enthusiasm to carry on with the game because you want to, then I don't know why you're even starting these threads. Game makers make games for fun, because they enjoy it. And part of the enjoyment is being able to share your work with other people. But if you're not enjoying making it then there's not much point doing it.
Of course, that's just my opinion.

Yeah, but what to say about the comments like Racoon whosaid that my pictures were "dodgy"?

[Webmaster Tyler]

Just Ignore what people say if its a bad comment

[Mooshykris]

Just Ignore what people say if its a bad comment

It's hard when (take notice in my early threads) the criticizm (some is un-constructive) piles up against you.

[Dawson]

Yeah, but what to say about the comments like Racoon whosaid that my pictures were "dodgy"?
Well, the first two screens aren't all that great. The first one, is it really needed for a Pokemon game? It seems a bit unnecessary really.
The second one has "When MSPaint Attacks" written all over it. Don't make stuff like that in Paint, use a real graphics program like PhotoShop or something. It'll look a LOT better and more professional for it. Same goes for the title screen too.

Don't ignore comments, learn from them and improve your skills based on what's been said.

[Mooshykris]

Well, the first two screens aren't all that great. The first one, is it really needed for a Pokemon game? It seems a bit unnecessary really.
The second one has "When MSPaint Attacks" written all over it. Don't make stuff like that in Paint, use a real graphics program like PhotoShop or something. It'll look a LOT better and more professional for it. Same goes for the title screen too.

Don't ignore comments, learn from them and improve your skills based on what's been said.

2 things,

1. I don't own Photoshop and I'm not paying 600 bucks for it!
2. How do yuo keep popping up out of nowhere and replying like that?

[kaihachi_mishima]

^ Just download it illegally (what most people do) or just download the trail one..

By posting you should accept critizm...infact critizm helps you and the game.

Anyways for me it looks okay...the sceens arent really that great so try getting better ones. The areas are to like simple, add more to it, its to empty. Other than that I hope you complete this and stay comitted to it if you need any help just contact me through pm or aim at Kaihachi2 and I ll help you out with the mapping.

I too am planning a Pokemon game but im using the RMXP normal graphics so its different. Im still figuring out how to add like the introduction thing...so please if you know how to do this help a brother out :P

[Webmaster Tyler]

Mooshykris what RPG maker r u using?

[Mooshykris]

Mooshykris what RPG maker r u using?

RPG Maker XP.

That's the best one that is simple. (Although I want to learn coding)

[TheAbsol]

XD: The is the Reigon Database.
Noice screens. Love the fog effect...title needs a bit of work.

[Chimou]

Good scripting, but the graphics are horrible.

You can't take a boy sprite, add a skirt and expect it to look like a girl. It doesn't. The Prof. Oak sprite used is bad. the black is missing at the bottom.

This game looks worse then Pokémon Purple.

[Mooshykris]

Good scripting, but the graphics are horrible.

You can't take a boy sprite, add a skirt and expect it to look like a girl. It doesn't. The Prof. Oak sprite used is bad. the black is missing at the bottom.

This game looks worse then Pokémon Purple.

Are talking about the Nicole Sprite?!! My friend made that one!!!

Why?!!!!! I can't make a good game!!!!!
:( :(

Project Cancled!

[Webmaster Tyler]

How do you add a begginning to the game

[TheAbsol]

I kinda agree. Work on the graphics more.

[Chimou]

Giving up? Instead of throwing a tantrum, you should use bad criticsm to strengthen your game. Work on your weaknesses so they'll become your strengths.

[Mooshykris]

Giving up? Instead of throwing a tantrum, you should use bad criticsm to strengthen your game. Work on your weaknesses so they'll become your strengths.

Well, in case you haven't noticed, I tried 8 times to follow what you said.


edit: If I can get 10 supporters, I'll stay open.

[TheAbsol]

...guys we all know a mod is gonna tell you guys to stop and to focus on the game. And Chimou just wait he'll prolly have better gfx.

[Webmaster Tyler]

Stay i think ur game looks really good

[TheAbsol]

STAY! Your graphics will improve.

[Mooshykris]

Ok, I might stay... (THAT'S 2)

[Webmaster Tyler]

Not trying to be mean anybody but just stop arguing and stop saying his graphics suck cause it takes a while to put it all together and what if people were sayin that about ur games U would probally be mad

[TheAbsol]

Who was that aimed at, pokemonhelp???

[Sorye HK]

OK, let's end it at that.
The maps could use some filling up, and some tiles were misused though. Still, I can see a lot of effort, and it definately should stay.

[Raccoon]

Well, even though I've pointed some bad stuff out.
I'll support your game! :D

[Chimou]

If your confidence is blown so easily, and you need to make a rule for you to stay...

Don't mean to be the bad guy, but your immaturity won't be missed.

[Mooshykris]

If your confidence is blown so easily, and you need to make a rule for you to stay...

Don't mean to be the bad guy, but your immaturity won't be missed.

I'm just angry that most of the people's games are instant hits. And I'm on my 9th thread. And it's still unpopular.

[mattgcn]

Hey, ous only had a small burst of popularity way back in the day when Serebii was clogged with projects like it (Which, we were one of three that survived, both of them now affiliates) at the announcement of the Pokemon Online Engine. The only thing that kept it going after the thread went down was constant work on the part of the team at the board and my outside advertisments.

That's what you need is a team, a board and ads.

[Dawson]

Well, your attitude isn't helping you at all. Most peoples games aren't instant hits. Most games start off fairly mediocre and get better and better as the maker(s) put more time and work into making the game as good as they can. I can name only a couple of games that were instant hits when they were posted here, and that's only because they were worked on for weeks and months before they decided to showcase them on PC.

I disagree with the above post. You don't need a board or advertisements. What you do need is dedication and enthusiasm for your own project. All you can do is keep working on it, continue to improve on it and eventually more people will start to take notice. Just don't go whining because your game didn't instantly reach the popularity of C.O.L. It makes you look bad for one thing.

[Raccoon]

Why on earth did someone just give me a negative reputation point for posting that last message? It was positive feedback...