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blue eyes white dragon
July 25th, 2005, 03:46 PM
When you are sad,
I will dry your tears.
When you are scared,
I will comfort your fears.

When you are worried,
I will give you hope.
When you are confused,
I will help you cope.

And when you are lost
and can't see the light,
I shall be your beacon,
shining ever so bright.

This is my oath,
I pledge till the end.
Why you may ask,
because you're a friend.

In a friendship
We're free to expose,
Parts of ourselves
Nobody else knows.

The thing that sustains it,
And sets it apart,
Is not something spoken,
It's a bond of the heart.

True friends are rare,
In a lifetime two or three,
I'm so glad it happened,
Between you and me!

~kasey

Natsuki
July 26th, 2005, 12:49 AM
When you are sad,
I will dry your tears.
When you are scared,
I will comfort your fears.

When you are worried,
I will give you hope.
When you are confused,
I will help you cope.

And when you are lost
and can't see the light,
I shall be your beacon,
shining ever so bright.

This is my oath,
I pledge till the end.
Why you may ask,
because you're a friend.

In a friendship
We're free to expose,
Parts of ourselves
Nobody else knows.

The thing that sustains it,
And sets it apart,
Is not something spoken,
It's a bond of the heart.

True friends are rare,
In a lifetime two or three,
I'm so glad it happened,
Between you and me!

~kasey

Awww, Kasey, this poem is wonderful! =D It does remind me of a poem that Claire wrote a while ago. ^^ I believe it was entitled "Spirit of the Wolf." =3 Though this poem may not be about wolves, it shares the same basic meaning. Friends are so important and no one deserves to be without one. It's always nice to have someone you can confide in when you are down, or just someone to hang out with and enjoy life. <33 Though perhaps the best thing you can do for a person is just be as good a friend to them as you can. ^________^

Awesome poem Kasey, I didn't see any punctuational problems or any defficiencies in spelling or grammar or anything. :33 Great work Kasey~! ^_~

~Kelsey

Charizard_Fire_God
July 26th, 2005, 07:20 AM
Wow, such a wonderful way ta express such a touching emotion... so beautiful. ^^
*takes off hat* Wonderful poem, BEWD, superbly done. ^_^

Cybex Mewtwo
July 26th, 2005, 01:25 PM
I bow to you. You may have more flair than me! I'm like a master of this place, and you may have toppled me here! Bravo.

Midori Chi
August 4th, 2005, 09:52 PM
That poem is the same thing as a friend from my school gave me!
*she's a member of the PC too*
It was good, but I'm just saying...