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TheOnly
July 25th, 2005, 03:25 PM
A RPG about 4 friends who invark on a adventure to rule the world. They start in New York city in a apartment with a night party disscussing where to go next!

Name:
Age:
Sex:

Me!

Name: Laura Rewfer
Age: 21
Sex: F

Chikara
July 25th, 2005, 03:30 PM
Im not sure if the plot is really a plot...Ill wait for a MOD to check this out.

RexRaptor
July 25th, 2005, 03:34 PM
Name: Shane
Age: 13
Sex: Male

Finnaly, I can conquer the Vorld.

blue eyes white dragon
July 25th, 2005, 03:38 PM
er''; (report) did a mod come bye here?

TheOnly
July 25th, 2005, 03:38 PM
I ahve a question do u report everyone?

Chikara
July 25th, 2005, 03:40 PM
Me? No, i just try and help ppl. I only report spam, and I didnt even report you!

RexRaptor
July 25th, 2005, 03:42 PM
She was speaking of Blue-Eyes.

Chikara
July 25th, 2005, 03:43 PM
whoops...sorry, but now were spamming, so Ill shut up now

Kurono
July 27th, 2005, 06:22 AM
Erm well I live in New York so I guess I can give it a try...but it needs a plot...or at least a better one..then I may come back..

Kurosaki
July 27th, 2005, 06:59 AM
Yeah, generally, an RP has a plot with more then 1-2 lines, so you'll need to work on that. Also, your form needs more then what it has. How are you gonna know how everyone looks without an Appearance section, or acts without a Personality section?