Random Poem

[Kurono]

This is one of my brother's poems that he made about reality...It isn't bad so I'd like to show it here..

Reality

When you open your eyes, what is it you really see?
Is it an image of what might truly be?
Or is it a fantasy that you want to make reality.
What is it that we want? You never get,
Yet when you get it, the reason why you wanted it you forget.
Are our lives a game of chance or is it roulette.

The harder things are to achieve, is it worth it all?
The struggle, strain, and stress just to be met by a wall,
A wall that is so tall it breaks us and makes us fall.
Sometimes though we break thru still standing holding the key,
Just to realize it was never reality.
When you open your eyes, what is it you really see?

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Copyright ©2002-2005Antonio Perez.
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It's actually funny after the first few times.. don't ask me why though...XD

[Cybex Mewtwo]

This makes a lot of sense. Tell your bro that he has a good choice of wording and he is a good poet.

[TheOnly]

this is great no parts to improve at all! Good job.

[Kurono]

I'll be glad to tell him. I'm sure he'd like to know people like it.. ^_^

[Datriot]

I love this poem, it's brilliant and I think it's sorta true to....

[Smarties-chan]

I love this poem, it's brilliant and I think it's sorta true to....
I agree with every word in your post datriot.

[Nagoyaka Aikouka]

It IS a good poem, your brother has talent!