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blue eyes white dragon
July 26th, 2005, 08:32 PM
I want you to know
one thing.

You know how this is:
if I look
at the crystal moon, at the red branch
of the slow autumn at my window,
if I touch
near the fire
the impalpable ash
or the wrinkled body of the log,
everything carries me to you,
as if everything that exists,
aromas, light, metals,
were little boats
that sail
toward those isles of yours that wait for me.

Well, now,
if little by little you stop loving me
I shall stop loving you little by little.

If suddenly
you forget me
do not look for me,
for I shall already have forgotten you.

If you think it long and mad,
the wind of banners
that passes through my life,
and you decide
to leave me at the shore
of the heart where I have roots,
remember
that on that day,
at that hour,
I shall lift my arms
and my roots will set off
to seek another land.

But
if each day,
each hour,
you feel that you are destined for me
with implacable sweetness,
if each day a flower
climbs up to your lips to seek me,
ah my love, ah my own,
in me all that fire is repeated,
in me nothing is extinguished or forgotten,
my love feeds on your love, beloved,
and as long as you live it will be in your arms
without leaving mine.


~kasey

Cybex Mewtwo
July 27th, 2005, 12:41 PM
wow...incredible...it's like you get better and better for each poem you write. I comend your skill. You have far surpased my own. *round of applaud*

Midori Chi
July 27th, 2005, 03:07 PM
That was so touching! ^^ It seemed like a real poet wrote it! Great job!

fallen_angel
August 3rd, 2005, 06:46 PM
Wow that was good. :D I could never do one like that

Nagoyaka Aikouka
August 10th, 2005, 10:16 PM
*laughs* A real poet DID right it! If you write a poem, you are a poet. You may or may not be a great one, but you are all the same.

BEWD, that was a wonderful poem. Very touching, and awesome choice of words with each line!