Pokemon Seal

[sobeman459]

Pokemon Seal
On the continent of Odion , A great festival is happening in Julioun City to celebrate the race known as the Legendaries who sealed a great relic known as the Halo Feather Underground in a great temple in the ancient times. The Halo Feather was said to be the key to a Pokemon Utopia in the sky. Where a great pokemon rested.
Team Magma And Aqua, Hearing of this Legend Fled to Odion in search of these ruins to find the Halo Feather. Although, Everything goes wrong. Team Magma and Aqua Fight over the Feather. And in the end, it is destroyed. with the Halo Feather destroyed. The Seal was broken, A giant beam flies out of the temple into the sky awaking the Legendary Beast and distroying the temple the beast desend and now lives in the Ruins. 5 years later Professor Mull discovers a tablet with ancient writings. between him and his co-workers discovered it said:

The Seal shall be bring peace to the world, The land of Heavelation watches over the seal. If somehow it is broken. The Legendary beast will destroy the world in 5years. Only the last of the Ancients can defeat this beast.

It has been 5 years and it has been sent out that the winner of the Odion League with confront this beast.
You must gather the badges and win the Odion league to confornt, defeat the beast and save the world!
Opening Scene:
You start by seeing a cave robed man runing into a cave and on the inside it shows more of these men circling a platform. On this platform a robed man is standing in front of a stone case and says,"From now forth the "Halo Feather" shall not torment anyone with its lust for the utopia of the sky Heavelation, With this said we now will lock this feather away forever!" then with a flash of light the cave is empty.
Features:
Choice between boy/girl
New Region
Night/Day
Laptop(pc on the go)
Collect badges to enter the Odion league
Odion League(new league to replace the elite four)
New legendary pokemon
Surfing/bike/walking/and fly
Back to the basics of pokemon(first set of pokemon)

Towns:
Neboun Town
Syrice Town
Charsle Twon
Meriad Town
Hinox Town
Julioun City
Yerday Town
Percose Town
Fasilage Town
Tranic Town
Darmajh Town

:dead: Sorry i didnt do this before i thought i did but please give credit to sion for helping with the story Thanks :D

[Dawson]

It's a nice story and all, but you clearly haven't read the Rules.

New Thread Rules

As of this point, all new game threads must contain a fairly detailed story and at least one in-game screenshot in the opening post. If any new threads are made and do not obide by this simple rule, they will be closed.

I'm also closing your other thread too, since that also breaks the rules. Anyway...

*Closed*

[Dawson]

Well, as requested by the thread starter...

*opened*

[TheAbsol]

Nice storyline, ya seriously need some screenies though.

[PokeCreator_09]

yeah. you need to put a screen up, Believe me they'll close the thread. My Cable Modem had been going off and on all day and it came on for a few minutes so i posted my new thread, and right after i sent it in, my cable stopped working. I didnt have the chance to put screens up so they closed my thread, Pokemon: A Legend is Born..

[TheAbsol]

It was closed then opened again so he might have a screen.

[rm2kdude]

I request that you change the name because it's the name from my friends pokemon game clearly you didn't come up from it first. If he does not change the name I request that this thread is closed.
Kyle_katarn thought of it first.

[Neo Genesis]

I request that you change the name because it's the name from my friends pokemon game clearly you didn't come up from it first. If he does not change the name I request that this thread is closed.
Kyle_katarn thought of it first.
Dont be so harsh man. Other fan games have the sames names, if you didn't know theres two pokemon lights so why is it such a big deal?? :surprised

[rm2kdude]

yes maybe but I got banned from a forum for having the same name.

[shadow909]

here if you want a sprite for pokemon seel, ill give you one, i can give you more if you want.

[sobeman459]

ok i probly will change the name because i want an origonal game and i will have screens up soon im taking them now

[Superiority]

yes maybe but I got banned from a forum for having the same name.

no that was because picceta didnt like you,he was talking to me on msn when you got banned.
and the screen is kinda small..O.o

[sobeman459]

sry for the small screens i will have better ones soon

[Peekimon]

The story's nice! But, the PKCenter and PKMart are a bit too big, I suggest you make 'em smaller an all, like in the real games. Good luck on this :)

[sobeman459]

yea im in need of a better inner set then i will fix them

[sobeman459]

sry fo the double post but updated pics

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y220/bigbg459/pokecenter.png pokecenter

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y220/bigbg459/pokemart.png pokemart

[Datriot]

it seems like an intresting game, good luck, nice town names.:)

[sobeman459]

Thx i started mapping towns last night i will have them up soon:D

[sobeman459]

I have new screens:

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y220/bigbg459/NebounTown3.png
Neboun Town
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y220/bigbg459/Route101.png
Route 101
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y220/bigbg459/SyriceTown.png
Sryrice Town
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y220/bigbg459/Route102.png
Route 102

Hope you enjoy:D:D

[Peekimon]

Nice screens but, they look a bit empty and all. fill 'em with flowers, paths, etc ^-^ Even more trees would look nice. Anyways, they're great maps :)

[sobeman459]

yea im working on that i will have a graphics demo out soon and i will have this fixed

[Innocence]

Wow! Pretty good. I rate the screens 7/10. You use just square patches of grass throughout the routes. Are you making a CBS? And maybe a CMS?

[Renagadez]

the screens are a little spacey but other then that keep up the work ^^

[Chimou]

You're making a common mistake: do not use massive maps. Just because it's in RMXP, doesn't mean you have to make everything so big.

I can tell these are supposed to feel like small towns. There are small towns that are spread out, but you have to put things in to fill the gaps. Use trees. That's what I suggest. Trees, paths, and bushes are your best bet.

[sobeman459]

yea im looking for someone to help scrit to help with the cms and cbs and i will work on the maps

[sobeman459]

Ok the cbs is up and the cms is almost done need pokedex and options fixed and all i need is a catching system i will have more screens up later i did alot of remapping and new maps so i hope u guys will like it:D


EDIT sorry for the 2x post :'(

[MurkrowLover]

How is Nurse Joy going to heal your Poke'mon? She can't operate the PC with Chansey in the way..o.o

[sobeman459]

oops i will fix that and im working on the demo release that will be comming up

[sobeman459]

ok as i promised the updates are here

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y220/bigbg459/yourroom.png your room
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y220/bigbg459/SyriceTown2.png updated syrice town

more comming soon

[Ionem]

Your screens look a lot better now. The inside of the house, particularly, reminds me of the "real" ones. It looks better.

I'd still like to see more in your maps, though. In that last Syrice town, one, you could easily stik in some flowers and stuff.

For example, here's a screen from my own game. Click here. (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v167/Evincar/town.png)

Notice all the little flowers and things? Granted, it's not perfect, but there are some little details.

I also can't wait to see screens of your battle and menu systems.

[sobeman459]

yea i did that i just got the auto tile for it i will update soon

[sobeman459]

-EDIT: Forum links aren't allowed in posts-

forums are up and sometime tomorrow i should have the demo up:D:D:D

[Sorye HK]

I guess we all have a demo to look forward to!

[sobeman459]

acctully all i need to get is a title screen and it will be released lol

[Smarties-chan]

Couldn't you just send the demo over without a title screen? btw is the battle system up yet?

[sobeman459]

ok fixed and updated Pokemon Seal Demo (http://s52.yousendit.com/d.php?id=XJTV7SLQ0N442KNNZ5ATT8AOW) i hope you guys like it let me know how u like it, i think i fixed everything if there is anything messed up let me know thx:D:D

[Smarties-chan]

I just downloaded the demo and came up with a question, what program are you using for this game?

[sobeman459]

im using RMXP and plz dont download it yet i uploaded the wrong zip file and that one has alot of glitches and im working on getting the fixed i should have a better realease in about an hour

[sobeman459]

Pokemon Seal Demo Updated (http://s52.yousendit.com/d.php?id=1YLC2TPTIW5CW22LWXP08TROGC)
Okay i think i got all the bugs worked out plz tell me what you think

[spike6958]

i cant download it it keep's telling me that it's not there

[sobeman459]

ugh hold on i will try switching hosts

[sobeman459]

ok new demo up and running if there are any bugs or gliches plz let me know thx

Pokemon Seal Demo (http://s37.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1YBTVW1OGTR8H2SMJICDN0WW6R)

EDIT: sorry for the double post

[Webmaster Tyler]

Sounds like a good game i hope you finish it

[sobeman459]

ok new story keeping the old story in mind

Game overview: Capturing the adventurous and carefree energy from the original Pokemon games, Wind Grey is a fan project that takes the best elements from the classics and works on making them even better to provide an experience that doesn’t fall short of expectations. Wind Grey introduces its own original features and enriches the universe of Pokemon with an all new story that follows the two main characters on an epic quest that gets more dangerous than ever before.

Features:
* Pokemon Wind Grey keeps the battle system that every one loves and is fond of and adds some special attention to a new class of Pokemon...
* ‘Catching them all’ may not be the all time focus of this game’s story, but it still plays an important part in your quest. In addition to the standard trainer equipment, expect some new surprises that make catching Pokemon fun and exciting.
* A larger focus on the story that in some cases is more limited and in other cases has a large openness. In the end the game tells a story while the player won’t feel restricted and will have more than enough share in the choice of actions of the characters.
* Play as a confused young boy with a hard past or a confident girl born into a rich family of respected trainers. One begins their quest in a small and quiet town that relies on many traditional methods to get work done. That is, until the large company of ??? takes notice of them and begins their new campaign... Meanwhile the other begins their quest in their mansion of a house, and finally gains the right to become a new Pokemon trainer. The family is famous for being some of the best trainers in the region, and she wouldn’t want to fall low of those expectations but at the same time wants more then fame...
* The game story is full of twists and surprises with the back-story full of legends actually playing a huge role in the game. As the two characters make their own paths in their travels they find out more than they could ever imagine.
* Wind Grey uses the smartest and most fitting Pokemon from the whole Pokedex to put into its locations, and they won’t be the same old choices either. Along with this, Wind Grey introduces a few new Pokemon of enormous power....
* The locations all have a nice, distinctive with the mapping skills to top it all off.

(This is where I need you, the users, to tell me what you think. It obviously won't kill the Pokemon game system since you'll have the same gameplay, and the locations will remain the same size. But it all depends on what you guys want for the story and exactly how much like the originals you want this to be...)

[Dudedude]

Still cant download your demo.It is expired!

[sobeman459]

whats a good site to host?

[mewX]

It's German, but I think you can find the Upload-Field *g*
http://www.rapidshare.de/

[sobeman459]

i've tried that it expires too

[Arkayne]

Hey everyone. I'm helping sobe write the story for this game, and design it. There are a few things he hasn't got to yet.

#1: We are thinking that Pokemon: (The) Platinum Gale would make a good name.

#2: I don't really know, just wanted to make my post longer :P . Expect a ton more story updates soon though.

[sobeman459]

yea arkayne is a very talented writer and i hope everyone will like the plot thx

[sobeman459]

update i have all the battlers now

[bob5000]

Its lookin good, gettin better and better, Well, cant wait reli lol! Gd luck!

[sobeman459]

i should have new screen shots soon

[Webmaster Tyler]

I cant wait till the game is done it looks really good

[sobeman459]

thx im workingon the scripts right now once i get a cbs and menu done the demo will be out

[shadowmastermarcus]

hey go to the "RMXP starter kitt" thread and Webmaster Tyler has posted an almost finished CBS, and the kitt has an almost finished CMS

[sobeman459]

i know i have it i cant wait til its finished

[sobeman459]

ok i've been off for some time over a month and 1/2 but im bk and should have updates tomorrow maybe a demo soon i just got the intro working so i will post updates soon

[Waudby]

ive officially join the team! hopefully we will get deoms out soon, got to say soberman has out done himself

[QFred]

Hope a new demo soon!

This game has a very interesting story but before you release a Demo you should get every basics (Systems, at least 45% of the world mapping, 75% of the important houses and event for everything you do!)

[sobeman459]

yea im working on it,im waiting for the menu and cbs pc system and catching system, and i've been mapping my @$$ off i badly need a gym tile set thx

[Sorye HK]

Well, have you checked the resources thread?

[sobeman459]

no i will right now, and does anyone like visual demos just to see the maps and stuff? if so i will have one sooner if they would like

[Waudby]

Soberman, i have the updated version of the complete jhoto set from fangking, if u want it, it has a new ice section and a bit more.

[sobeman459]

i have that one i just need the gym tile set

[Arkayne]

Well people, I am still writing for this project! Tell me what you think of this story:

Backstory:

In the ancient times (think prehistoric, with creatures like Kabutops, Relicanth, and more just being common Pokemon), there were three Pokemon of extroadinary power. One lived in the peaceful seas and swam with the hordes of water Pokemon. Another lived in the rich lands and forests of the earth, where it slept near the core, in the hottest and deepest of caves. And the last was of the calm skies, where it would circle around the mountain, Aerius, and look upon the lands. It was in this world, where Pokemon and people were created to exist equally.

In the beginning, all was well. Humans would love the Pokemon and treat them respectively. But as the Humans would progress with technology, faster and faster, they began to look at Pokemon and land as items.

Land was destroyed, the water was their 'big bucket of waste'. The air would have to hold their pollution and even worse, the Pokemon were abused or enslaved by most people. The highest point of the midland, Kuwagi Crater, was inhabited by people fairly quickly. It was there that the headquarters of the world, Kuwagi City, was claimed to be the 'Watchplace of the Gods'. It was because of this, that the three Pokemon of the world would rise from their slumbers.

The world was ravaged by Groundon's earthquakes, with the largest being so powerful that it had uncovered a new layer of water in the ocean, and split the land into two regions. Kyogre could not rest at the depths of the ocean any more either, and its wrath caused a series of waves, one so powerful that it covered the land with water, and completely changed the atmosphere of the Selsus Desert that had surrounded Mount Aerius.

Furious that it was waken from its sleep, Solus unleashed a tornado so large that it could be seen even from the those people shielded by the Kuwagi Crater. The tornado collected water and debris, and by the time it reached the crater, it completely devastated that part of the region.

The world went quiet, in an awkward peace that would last centuries. The region of Orion was completely purified and in time, the water was absorbed, and the land flourished. It was then, that the people and Pokemon that had seeken refuge in the caves emerged... ready to start a new life that was free of abuse.

Q&A
Q: Oh, my goodness! This game story is nothing like the Pokemon story!
A: This is simply the backstory, the game gets a lot more similar to Pokemon while having a very original and story-based feel. Don't worry, it in many ways will have more freedom than the original game.

Q: Why is this game so agressive?
A: It isn't. It's not bloods and gore and all, it's the simple way of life!


Q: What happens next?
A: You'll have to see soon!

[sobeman459]

thx again Arkayne more updates comming soon

[Arkayne]

*ahem* So... what do you all think of the un-Pokemonish story (Expects to get attacked by fanboys)? I actually think it's actually quite fitting and nice for this game.

To make a more productive post, here are the things to come!
*Backstory Part 2: A New Land
*Story: A Devastated Trainer
*Story 2: A Clan with a Vengeance

And besides that, well, just expect a feature on the first main town, and I'll reveal the new gameplay element soon enough ;) (heh, even Sobeman doesn't know about it yet, have to run it by him first).

[sobeman459]

yea that would be nice so i can start on it lol

[sobeman459]

sry for the double post but i have a working bag script now more updates soon, demo once i get the pokegearscript

[Swizzler121]

nice, I love tne new plot, but it seems similar to S/R/E, just a little more violent, maybe you should get a mod to rename this thread since you renamed the game...or did you decide to stick with pkmn seal? it thought pokemon platnium gale sounded much more interesting.

[sobeman459]

its inbetween right noiw idk yet

[Waudby]

Soberman i need a map tht has all the towns labelled so i can continue mapping the towns.

[Arkayne]

IDK. Personally I like Platinum Gale a lot better too, but its all up to Sobe.

[bob5000]

I cant wait for the dem, hope you get the pokegear script soon!!

[sobeman459]

yes Platium Gale it is and im having no luck with a pokegear script and we now need a 6 member party script if anyone can help thx

[DarkDoom3000]

Hope you find 6 scripters , I cant script, I use RPGmaker 2003 where you dont need scripting....

good luck

[sobeman459]

No 6member Part A Script For That But I Got That Working Now I Just Need To Find The Pokegar Script

[Minorthreat0987]

nice game i really like it cant wait for a demo.

BTW can you plz tell me how you did the 6 party member script thing?

[satoshi06]

vos gueulle!!!bande de pti pd!!!

[sobeman459]

huh? whats that say?

and i almost got the full menu working still in need of pokegear though