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Yellow-Chan
August 4th, 2005, 11:14 AM
I was bord, please be nice. ^_^
Prt. 1 (http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y163/Yellow-chan/WBComix.png)
Prt. 2 (http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y163/Yellow-chan/WBComix2.png)
Prt. 3 (<img src="http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y163/Yellow-chan/WBComix3.png" alt="Image hosted by Photobucket.com">)
I don't own pekemon, the spirtes, or the charitors, Blah blah
And I know my spelling stinks so don't rub it in my face

jambo
August 4th, 2005, 11:27 AM
Whoa thats really good i likes XD whateva specially like the part With prof oak sheeesh! 8/10 reeely gd

Thomas
August 4th, 2005, 11:39 AM
It looks pretty good, the text from the first frame "Your Pokemon Journey is about to unfold" doesn't match the rest of the comic. The last frame doesn't reacht the end of the picture. A dividerline is missing at the top. But other wise, funny and pretty well made. 7/10!

Allstories
August 4th, 2005, 12:35 PM
I like how the dialogue is poorly constructed and the grammar is terrible and the events are pointless and inconsequential. But what's with the adequate visuals? WHAT WERE YOU THINKING.

Yellow-Chan
August 4th, 2005, 04:00 PM
Not at all, my friend, not at all. :P well I better get to work on Part 2 now.

Yay, people actually liked it, I feal so specail! ^_^

Draik
August 5th, 2005, 02:05 AM
I didn't like it.
Well, you used different font. What's the story? Here, search for a FR/LG fontset.

Signomi
August 5th, 2005, 03:06 AM
You must continue o-o Really. -urges to know what happens next, faints from too much urging- x_x

Alex_
August 5th, 2005, 03:10 AM
It's really overall poorly and n00bly made,as Sykora said you should have used the Fr/Lg font set. The grammar looks like that of a five year old. There aren't any text bubbles. And you used a chat smilie ">: (" in it which makes it even worse. And the storyline/plot is pointless and dumb. Overall it was pretty bad and needs tons of work 3/10. You can only hope to improve.

B.U.N.N.Y
August 5th, 2005, 09:39 AM
its about time someone told prof. Oak no-one cares about what he says
ill give it 6 out of 10

Yellow-Chan
August 5th, 2005, 01:06 PM
I finished prt. 2http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y163/Yellow-chan/WBComix2.png
Thank for the coment, and your honesty, I started prt. 2 after post #5 so it dosn't have many changes, next one will. (I hope) evil text won't go in Paint. XP

Signomi
August 5th, 2005, 10:53 PM
o_O;

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Ok. Green seems a bit OOC. But ohwell, can't wait for Part 3...really o_o

Draik
August 6th, 2005, 04:41 AM
Your spellimg sucks, work on it.

the skate board kid
August 6th, 2005, 08:34 AM
Whatevaa? hahahahahaha, priceless

~TSBK~

Yellow-Chan
August 8th, 2005, 03:55 PM
Sykora, What is this "Spellimg" you speak of? In other words check your own spelling before you say anything about their spelling. any way part 3 is up!
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y163/Yellow-chan/WBComix3.png

Thomas
August 8th, 2005, 04:05 PM
Better, but you should get the FRLG Font set...will look better with that...

Yellow-Chan
August 8th, 2005, 05:20 PM
Yea, about that. <_< EVIL FONT WON'T GO INTO PAINT!!! Besides that how was it? ^_^ (evil font)