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Cybex Mewtwo
August 9th, 2005, 01:13 PM
Deep inside my mind
I sit and wait
bound by fates chains
hoping to escape...

Locked up tight
and the key thrown away
I lie in wait
until that fateful day...

Deep in my mind
where images haunt me so
I pray for an opening to
emerge from the dark and then I'll know...

The time is right and
I am set free...
but in the meantime...
I am bound by the chains...

chains of destiny...
chains of light...
chains of hope...
chains of might...

One day they will fall
and then I will be set free...
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l_l...I have no idea if this is to have any meaning...but listening to Resident Evil Save Room music made me think of this...

Dark Magician ruler
August 9th, 2005, 04:29 PM
Niceness I new that music would make you write or draw something this is pretty good and I don't like poetry that much :cool:

Cybex Mewtwo
August 9th, 2005, 04:49 PM
Wow...when I get a response from you like this...it makes me feel like I did an incredible job.

Dark Magician ruler
August 9th, 2005, 04:50 PM
Hey I'm full of surprises ya know

Nagoyaka Aikouka
August 9th, 2005, 05:10 PM
Nice poem. It doesn't flow terribly well, but then again, my poems never do either. I really did like it, it was pretty powerful, considering it came from feelings you got from a song! ^-^ All in all, good poem Cybex Mewtwo!

By the by, I would love to be your friend, and I'm sorry you couldn't PM me, I'm not allowed to PM anyone

blue eyes white dragon
August 9th, 2005, 05:13 PM
this is so good . you are very good at this bravo!


~kasey

Cybex Mewtwo
August 9th, 2005, 09:17 PM
Yep. All of my poems come from the top of my head. So even tough they may not be the best sounding, they have some incredible impact.