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blue eyes white dragon
August 11th, 2005, 04:18 PM
You Are My Only One


All day long I think of you
How i want to be with you
Your skin so smooth
Your Hair so soft
Your eyes like diamonds
Sparkling in the sky
I tell you I love u
You say 'I love u too'
Then we go our separate ways
Until we meet some other days
I will conclude my phrase and say
I will never ever go .

Midori Chi
August 11th, 2005, 04:48 PM
Wow..nice poem, as always.. *thumbs up*

Nagoyaka Aikouka
August 12th, 2005, 02:03 AM
I liked it, BEWD, but it wasn't one of your best. The ending kind of just, well, dropped off. Still had all the emotion that I've come to expect from you thought!

blue eyes white dragon
August 12th, 2005, 02:04 AM
yes it is not my best. I was to tired to do more.

Cybex Mewtwo
August 12th, 2005, 12:21 PM
This reminds me of one of those cliffhanger episode...where it drops at the last moment leaving you wondering...whats gonna happen? But other than this, pretty good.