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blue eyes white dragon
August 12th, 2005, 02:09 AM
I tell you how I feel on this or that,
As simply as a child confesses at
His mother's knee. You tease and ask me why,
Smiling down on me with quizzing eye.

I do not answer, or I say, "because",
Which is a woman's way and always was.
I state a truth a fact I know full well:
The cause, the "why", I don't attempt to tell.

Philosophy explains, what ere I think,
I can resolve to causes, link by link___
Not what I feel. Emotion is a king
Tyranical, who bears no questioning.

I lay mute reason by upon the shelf,
Feel so and so, and cannot help myself.
Then, when I tell you, do not put your "Why?"
Smiling down on me with your quizzing eye.


~kasey

wishirulz
August 12th, 2005, 02:36 AM
ice poeme its realy nice just the last vers i dont get with the squizzing eye? its real nicely made

blue eyes white dragon
August 12th, 2005, 02:39 AM
whaa? I have no clue what you said.

Kurono
August 12th, 2005, 02:50 AM
I think I can decipher what he said.

"Nice poem its really nice, just the last verse i didn't get with the quizzing eye? It is real nicely made."

I guess that's it...anyway you really have a skill for poetry, I can probably think up a good poem when I don't have writers block..keep up the good work. ^_^

blue eyes white dragon
August 12th, 2005, 02:51 AM
thank's good luck to find you writer block.




~kasey

Cybex Mewtwo
August 12th, 2005, 12:25 PM
Hmm.......not bad...not bad......pretty good. Really don't have much to say for this though.