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Roy-Kun
August 13th, 2005, 04:06 PM
Well this is my first sprite comic, it will be rated PG-13 for violence, and foul language... maybe some young members must not check the comic (in some scenes)

Plot:
The history tells about a boy named Renato, that was about to start his journey when he moved to Hoenn (unknown reason). While he's in there, he quickly heads to Littleroot Town, when he was about to leave, he meets Stephen, and they go together to Littleroot. While the story is passing away, they meet new friends, and new rivals, also new dangers.

Main characters:

http://img465.imageshack.us/img465/9245/red6hy.gif Name: Renato Age: 11 Hometown: Pallet Town
Formerly known as Red, he is very energetic, sarcastic, almost nice and strong. Renato is a boy of Pallet that starts his journey with a Charmander, but before he could start, he moved to Hoenn, most of his friends didn't knew that he moved. In there, he learns about Prof. Birch and goes to Littleroot, before he could go there he meets Stephen and they go together to Littleroot but they split up because Renato faces a wild Seviper, then he's helped by May, after that he is bothered by her because she wants to battle her, he agrees after a while but a girl interfers, he tries to remember her, and he reminds that she is Kathy! his old-friend of school! He battled Sapphire and the battle ended as a draw, now both have a dislike to each other.

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y109/PKMN_TRN_Red/Sprites/Stephen.gif Name: Stephen Age: 15 Hometown: Blackhorn City
Formerly known as Diamond, Stephen is funny, smart but very hasty. Stephen was a strong Pokemon trainer while he was younger, he won the 8th Silver Conference in Johto, and after that he moves to Hoenn with his Family, leaving all his Pokmon with Prof. Elm. In there he forgot to pick any of his Pokmon to keep his journey, but in his lucky day, he meets Renato and they go together to Littleroot Town, he goes to the lab of Prof. Birch but he doesn't finds him, so he searches him in route 101 (reason: screams) and he finds him, he helps both he and Ruby of the Poochyena attack but he recieves some help of Brendan.

http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/2866/yellowfrlg7wk.gif Name: Kathy Age: 10 Hometown: Viridian City
Also known as Yellow, she is hasty, a bit timid and nice. Kathy was in the Viridian's School with Renato until she moved to Hoenn and met two special friends, when Renato saw her again, she didn't remembered him, but quickly she remembered that he was a good friend in her school in Kanto. She recieved a Pikachu as a gift of Birthday so she can go to her own journey.

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y109/PKMN_TRN_Red/Sprites/Ruby.gif Name: Brendan Age: 11 Hometown: Somewhere in Johto
Known by his friends as Ruby, he is cool, hates battles and loves Pokmon beauty, Brendan is Norman's son, he seems to dislikes battles by some reason (...), He is an expert on making some clothes, he made Kathy her current clothing, and he seems to know May a bit, he meets Stephen while he and Prof. Birch were going attacked by a group of Poochyena, even if he hates battling, he doesn't likes seeing people in trouble, so he helps Stephen with a Treecko, now they have arrived to the lab...

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y109/PKMN_TRN_Red/Sprites/Sapphire.gif Name: May Age: 10 Hometown: Littleroot Town
Known by everyone as Sapphire, she is frantic, wild and very serious. May is Prof. Birch's daughter, she meets with Renato when they battle a wild Seviper together, after that, she wants to battle him. After a long "chase-me-if-you-can" game, Renato agrees to battle but the battle is interfered by Kathy, still they Battle in the Lab, the battle ends in a draw and May seems to dislike the result. Now she seems to totaly dislike Renato, same goes for him.


Chapter one: V.S. Seviper

Comic 01 (http://img105.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comicone6ql.png)
Comic 02 (http://img186.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comictwo2qh.png)
Comic 03 (http://img186.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comicthree0qc.png)
Comic 04 (http://img369.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comicfour7lu.png)
Comic 05 (http://img235.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comicfive6go.png)
Comic 06 (http://img235.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comicsix4en.png)
Comic 07 (http://img106.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comicseven2gt.png)
Comic 08 (http://img304.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comiceight6rh.png)

V.S. Poochyena

Comic 09 (http://img304.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comicnine0ud.png)
Comic 10 (http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/87/comicten4rc.png)
Comic 11 (http://img266.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comiceleven9ec.png)
Comic 12 (http://img266.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comictwelve0lg.png)

V.S. Mudkip

Comic 13 (http://img449.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comicthirten5dc.png)
Comic 14 (http://img460.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comicfourteen9my.png)
Comic 15 (http://img493.imageshack.us/img493/609/comicsixteen7ui.png)
Comic 16 (http://img493.imageshack.us/img493/609/comicsixteen7ui.png)
Comic 17 (http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/5540/comicseventeen7ah.png)
Comic 18 (http://img393.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comiceightteen5pu.png)

V.S Pikachu

Comic 19 (http://img393.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comicnineteen0wb.png)
Comic 20 (http://img465.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comictwenty1dm.png)
Comic 21 (http://img168.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comictwentione1aw.png)

Fan Stuff:
Stephen's fan art (http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/5885/stephen2af.jpg) (Made by Rukari0)

Thanks to:
The Spriter resource.
Renji for the Stephen/Diamond Sprites.
Coronis for the Diamond/Yellow original Trainer Sprite.
Signomi for the Yellow OW/Back sprites.
Myself for the Red/Renato sprites.

Well i hope that you enjoy it... comments?

I'll update every weekend

Thanks to ImageShack for Free Image Hosting (http://www.imageshack.us/)

Dragon-Chan
August 13th, 2005, 04:18 PM
It's a pretty well-drawn comic, but I can't find the humor..if it's supposed to be funny, I don't see how. 6/10
Keep making comics, though. They may not be funny, but they're good otherwise ^^

Rukari0
August 13th, 2005, 04:22 PM
I like this comic because it's one of the very few non-humor comics. Could I draw some fan art?

Roy-Kun
August 13th, 2005, 04:23 PM
yes if you want ^^ well i'm not good at jokes but i'm adding some soon

Rukari0
August 13th, 2005, 04:30 PM
I tried-

http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/5885/stephen2af.th.jpg (http://img74.imageshack.us/my.php?image=stephen2af.jpg)

I haven't draw a male character at all so it sucks.

Roy-Kun
August 13th, 2005, 04:54 PM
take your time... try doing an ahnd drawing then post it

Omega Latios
August 21st, 2005, 12:00 AM
These Comics Are Cool! I Can't Wait For The Next One!

Signomi
August 21st, 2005, 07:20 AM
I can't wait for the next one either =D Keep at it!

Roy-Kun
August 21st, 2005, 11:25 AM
a reply is a reply XD here is only one comic

Comic 04 (http://img369.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comicfour7lu.png)

Omega Latios
August 21st, 2005, 11:31 AM
That Was Kinda Scary! I Wonder What Will Happen!

Signomi
August 21st, 2005, 11:51 AM
Ooh, a scream!? It must be bad...especially if it's a girly scream! o_o XD Keep at it Red-san!

~Amethyst_Callista_Moon~
August 22nd, 2005, 06:02 PM
These are amazing! I can't wait for the next one!

Omega Latios
August 25th, 2005, 11:28 AM
I Can't Wait For The Next Too!

Roy-Kun
August 28th, 2005, 10:41 AM
i'm posting because i've already got an idea for a title >_> i'll post later a new chapter

Signomi
August 28th, 2005, 11:27 AM
Tsk tsk, stalling stalling XD Jk. -can't wait-

Roy-Kun
August 28th, 2005, 11:46 AM
tsk tsk, here's the update!

Comic 05 (http://img235.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comicfive6go.png)
Comic 06 (http://img235.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comicsix4en.png)

Signomi
August 28th, 2005, 11:52 AM
Interesting ^_^ Though it is a bit unnatural to see a Seviper on that route XD Ohwell. Keep at it Red-san! =3

Roy-Kun
August 28th, 2005, 11:56 AM
i'm trying to make it as the special (but i don't know too much about the R/S sagas) well in there Sapphire appears and... whoa! *covers mouth* o.o;;

Signomi
August 28th, 2005, 11:58 AM
Blabbermouth XD -giggle-

To you viewers out there: PAY ATTENTION TO THIS COMIC! It's going to get /really/ interesting =3

Omega Latios
September 1st, 2005, 08:29 AM
Uh-oh! The Seviper Attacks! I Can't Wait For Next Comic And See What Happens!

Roy-Kun
September 7th, 2005, 06:03 PM
is time to update! i think this will be like the anime style attacks

Comic 07 (http://img106.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comicseven2gt.png)

Signomi
September 9th, 2005, 02:13 PM
Hm. That part is magnifiqu! Keep at it Red-san ^_^ Since I can't wait to know what happens next.

jc_rcw
September 9th, 2005, 03:33 PM
Hey its very nice(specially the seventh episode)*sits and waits for more*

Sheepnut
September 9th, 2005, 03:52 PM
Ummm how come in the 7th comic mudkip and charmander come out and then may and the freakish hair dude throw the pokeballs? Oh and the text is a little hard to read...

Roy-Kun
September 17th, 2005, 06:13 PM
i skipped that part, is hard to add effects,

BTW here's an update

Comic Eight (http://img304.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comiceight6rh.png)

V.S. Poochyena

Comic Nine (http://img304.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comicnine0ud.png)

Karasuma
September 17th, 2005, 06:15 PM
Not bad Red-San. Can U tell me what's the secret Pokemon?

Roy-Kun
September 22nd, 2005, 01:54 PM
well i had added some Bios, but it's not complete, when the comic show enough info i'll do it completed

Signomi
October 1st, 2005, 04:36 PM
Okie Renato, time to add the new update ^^

Roy-Kun
October 1st, 2005, 04:38 PM
thanks a lot ^^ here it is... (sorry for just adding one, i was in exams so i wasn't able to do more comics...)

Comic 10 (http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/87/comicten4rc.png)

O
October 2nd, 2005, 04:14 AM
[SIZE=1]Influenced by the manga? Yay. Keep it up man.[/SIZE}

Karasuma
October 2nd, 2005, 04:20 AM
Yeah I relly like it. I may give it a 10/10 for being good.

Roy-Kun
October 10th, 2005, 03:45 PM
Influenced by the manga? Yay. Keep it up man.
Just by some reasons, is kind of linked with it, some parts are made by me ^^;

Recknin
October 15th, 2005, 04:00 AM
yeah...those were alright coz of the spech bubles
that's what comics is soposed to be not writing
undernief it

Roy-Kun
October 21st, 2005, 04:21 PM
well time for an update, but i had to erase my disk drive, so i had to make them again... here it is:

Comic 11 (http://img266.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comiceleven9ec.png)
Comic 12 (http://img266.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comictwelve0lg.png)

Why isn't anybody posting?

Signomi
October 23rd, 2005, 02:25 PM
Hrm. =/ I wonder why people aren't posting. Ahwell. Still, you must continue ^^

Roy-Kun
October 23rd, 2005, 04:41 PM
here's the new update, sorry for the being late

V.S. Mudkip

Comic 13 (http://img449.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comicthirten5dc.png)
Comic 14 (http://img460.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comicfourteen9my.png)

Signomi
November 6th, 2005, 03:02 PM
Sapphire = Pain in the -bleep- backside XP;

Well, I know you've an update Renato ;x So update! XD

Roy-Kun
November 6th, 2005, 03:05 PM
Meh you discovered me xD

Comic 15 (http://img493.imageshack.us/img493/609/comicsixteen7ui.png)
Comic 16 (http://img493.imageshack.us/img493/609/comicsixteen7ui.png)

Signomi
November 6th, 2005, 03:10 PM
Neh, enough with ze suspense! XD Man..Sapphire is as stubborn as hell, If I was Red I would've given her a muzzle X3 But it was sweet how Red and Yellow/Kathy met up again =D Well keep it up Renato ^^

Roy-Kun
November 13th, 2005, 06:30 PM
well to keep you busy for now i had made the plot and another comic! (it was hard to find the battle efects, so i took the entire week looking for it)

Comic 17 (http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/5540/comicseventeen7ah.png)

And people, please comment...

Signomi
November 14th, 2005, 12:32 PM
Nice looking ^^ Though, I think you ought to go back to speech bubbles...

Roy-Kun
November 14th, 2005, 12:51 PM
I had figured out that i don't like too much speech bubbles ^^; so i changed, hope you don't mind

jc_rcw
November 19th, 2005, 01:29 PM
So any new eppys Red? I really want to see more.

Roy-Kun
November 20th, 2005, 02:03 PM
Yep, here's an update:

Comic 18 (http://img393.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comiceightteen5pu.png)

V.S Pikachu

Comic 19 (http://img393.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comicnineteen0wb.png)

And i had updated other two Bios, ^^

jc_rcw
November 20th, 2005, 02:07 PM
Awesome new eppies, and the bios look great.

Roy-Kun
November 29th, 2005, 03:11 PM
Well for now i will update with this, i had been having problems with exams... and i will for two weeks more

Comic 20 (http://img465.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comictwenty1dm.png)

Fateful
November 30th, 2005, 05:36 AM
It's great I wonder what happens next!

magnus dhl
November 30th, 2005, 10:52 AM
Can I Have Venusar + Articuno Articuno Base Pleas!!!!

EDIT ~ Please take that to a Home of the Sprites request topic, not here, this is somebody's comic thread. ~Signomi

Signomi
November 30th, 2005, 10:54 AM
magnus dhl: Sorry, wrong place to ask. This is somebody's comic thread, you look for a request thread in the Home of the Sprites section for that.

Roy-Kun
December 6th, 2005, 10:33 AM
Can I Have Venusar + Articuno Articuno Base Pleas!!!!
Urgh... what?

Well people, i will be busy until Monday, but then i will give you an update ^^;

Karasuma
December 6th, 2005, 12:29 PM
I gotta say Red-Kun this is beter than reading the manga I'm reading...Gotta love those yellow sprites....so cool..Keep it up Red-Kun, I'll be keeping my eye on this one.

limy85
December 6th, 2005, 11:26 PM
I like the comic series it's realy good.

Roy-Kun
December 9th, 2005, 01:51 PM
Well i'm having more viewers each time ^^

Here's an update, i hope you like it for now =P

Comic 21 (http://img168.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comictwentione1aw.png)

And for Yellow's scratch, it had been modified a bit ^^;

Please comment

Shijuukara
December 9th, 2005, 07:23 PM
I've been having my eye on this Comic and I like, keep up the good work.

P.S. I'll be watching

Signomi
December 17th, 2005, 01:11 AM
This thread is closed on Request.

~Closed