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Smarties-chan
August 28th, 2005, 08:20 AM
This is my first attempt at a sprite comic please tell me what you think and what I should improve... and please do remember that I suck at coming up with jokes.
~Part one~ (http://img374.imageshack.us/img374/1148/comicpart14rk.png)
~Part two~ (http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/725/comicpart19hn.png)
~Part three~ (http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/8186/comicpart22nc.png)
~Part four~ (http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/9168/comicpart44pv.png)
~Part five~ (http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/1116/comicpart56er.png)

*NOTE* the comics are only three screens big because otherwise they exceed the limit imageshack allows.

Crystal Walrus
August 28th, 2005, 08:34 AM
not bad but your pics are to big try and make a smaller pic of where he is and add in speach bubbles

Smarties-chan
August 28th, 2005, 08:57 AM
Thanks for the comment but, my speech bubbles are horrible so I'll just use ''the color tells wich person is speaking'' system.

Crystal Walrus
August 28th, 2005, 09:06 AM
seems ok if you put it that way whell its still better than what i did last time i made a comic

hey smarty do you have trainer sprites of yourself like the ones in games?

Fox♠
August 28th, 2005, 09:13 AM
it's not terrible, I really ahve nothing against it, i just don't find it that ammusing, you made 1 typo, which is in the slide where he knocks the old man iover, the Y looks like a V

Signomi
August 28th, 2005, 11:55 AM
Well, you just started the comic so I'm not really going to rate it just yet ^_^ Though, Part 1 confused me a bit..shouldn't the first panel be on the right? o_O Well, keep at it smarty_arty! =D

Smarties-chan
August 29th, 2005, 07:07 AM
No it shouldn't. The first panel shows what happened after he got out of the lab the lab part was a flashback.

Signomi
August 29th, 2005, 08:05 AM
Oh..well I see ^_^ Well as I said, keep at it =D

Smarties-chan
August 29th, 2005, 09:13 AM
I will but, not before tomorrow I'm feeling really lazy today ^__^

Smarties-chan
September 5th, 2005, 08:58 AM
Okay since no one has replied in a long time and I'm done with the two next parts I'm going to make my first double post. The parts 4 and 5 are now up.

Karasuma
September 5th, 2005, 10:33 AM
Hey, they're not bad. The first ones remind me of how I started, but don't worry, I can see you doing better in the future. If you want some trainer sprites just tell me, OKAY?^.^

Smarties-chan
September 6th, 2005, 02:52 AM
Well I can make my own trainer sprites, but thanks for the offer.