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ScArLetSkye
February 15th, 2004, 07:49 AM
:pokeball:This story is about a 11 year old girl, Scarlet Sanders,who was held back on her 10th b-day because her mother was against her becoming a pkmn trainer, because of her father,who left 6 years ago, on a quest to complete his pokmon journey....Rated PG or G.I don't know...there will be a few kisses in the future...Maybe that'd be PG.
Oh yeah,and this takes place in my imaginary region-the Criptic region which has a bit of pokmon from each "real" region.So don't be suprised if the starter pokemon are Evee,Mudkip and Pichu.Kay?:pokeball:

I was held back.My mother didn't want me to start my Pokmon journey on my 10th birthday.I asked her as we ate brekfast on that day."No!" the simple, yet horrible,anwser was given to me as Mom served pancakes with cinnamon, my favorite fav food of all time back then...the food I expected to be sweet and delicous, tasted somewhat bitter and cold after I heard that dreaded single word.

She did give me a birthday celabration that day, but after the party lights had dimmed, crumbs of chocolate cake left on every plate and presents unwrapped, she chided me, gave lectures and told me that I was lucky that I was safe at home, rather, than being on the so called "dangerous" path of a trainer.Everytime I asked her why not,she told me the same thing: "No.Your father left 5 years ago to finish up his pokmon journey,and he never came back." and I always anwsered "Dad didn't come back-not yet at least.He's finishing up his travels." That allways earned me a small glare.

And she held me back that year, became overprotective and watched me like a sharp eyed bird Pokmon every day.Social life? Nix, nada, I didn't really have one.Exept for my best friend,Kerri Parks,I didn't have too many friends.

Kerri's birthday.A month ago.
She turned 11.Last year, she told her mom and dad that she would start her pokmon journey when I did.I was afraid that she'd never get to,because of me...

Now here it was again.My birthday.The day I turned eleven.
As soon as I woke up, I realizized it was this day.And as I got ready for the day, I dressed into my jean capri pants, lime green tanktop, a pair of matching lime socks, and combed my waist lenth wavy "dirty"blonde hair, as I washed my face and looked into the mirror on my bedroom wall,into my lavender-ish eyes,some thing stopped me.My eyes.They looked like...something was missing.And I then knew what it was.Exploring.Pokmon.Fun.The life of a trainer.I knew what I had to do.

MeLoVeGhOsTs
February 15th, 2004, 08:26 AM
It's a normal pokemon journey start, dificult to judge right now, but i hope it get's excitted!

ScArLetSkye
February 15th, 2004, 08:49 AM
Yay!I got feedback!Thanks!:):):)
Oh well,I have 2 go 2 church now.
If NE1 wants 2 comment on the begining please do so.
I'll start adding on after church(in 1 hour or so) Bye!(4 now!!!!)

SkarmoryRider
February 15th, 2004, 10:11 AM
Interesting... can't wait for more!

ScArLetSkye
February 15th, 2004, 12:56 PM
I'm back!!!:D
Italics=Scarlet's thoughts
:cheeky: Okay...here we go...Hope you enjoy! :)
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That moment one thought raced through my head:GO.NOW.POKEMON JOURNEY.
I ran to the bedroom door which was wide open and quietly closed it.Then, since there was no lock on the door, I pushed the purple chair next to my bed against the door.Just for security... I thought. I raced to my closet and pulled the doorknob.Okay.I said making a mental list in my head. Socks, t-shirts, jeans....The sun was fully up now,and Swellows outside were starting to chirp.A bead of sweat ran down my forhead as I heaved the clothes pile into my neon yellow backpack.Just a couple more things...I panted to myself. I walked over to my dresser.I pushed aside the various gum wrappers, hairclips and other tiny trinkets that were there.In the midst of of that, lay a crumpled picture.

It was the one were my parents and I were at a small carnival in...were was it?...I couldn't quite place it.It showed me, as a little 5 year old girl, in my father's arms, eating cotton candy.My mom stood beside us, laughing,seeing that I had a bit of cotton candy fluff on my nose.She looked...happy...sure she is happy now,but it seems so....

I shook my head, raced over to my bulging backpack and stuffed the small photo along with my hairbrush in.
"Scarlet!Are you in there?" my mom's voice floated in through the closed door.
Oh no...
I heaved the backpack up onto my shoulders, then ran to my desk and grabbed a piece of stationary from a small wooden box labeled STATIONARY. I reached into another box next to the first one, and pulled out a purple pencil.I began scribbling a quick note:

Dear Mom,
By the time you read this, I'll be gone.
Were?
On my pokemon journey.
I'm sorry,but this

I stopped writing and search my void of a mind for the next thing to write.Oh!Got it!

seems to be my destiny to travel with pokmon.To be a trainer, like Dad.
I'm going to explore the Criptic region.
Don't worry about me.I think I might travel with Kerri.
I'll come visit,after I explore Criptic.Then I'll explore a new region,maybe Hoenn.
I love you.If you get mad that I've left,please Mom,remember that.

Love,Scarlet

There.Done.Owwww, papercut.My finger started to bleed slightly.I laid the note onto my desk were mom would find it."Scarlet?!?!?" Mom pounded on the door.

I bit my lip.Panic surged through me.I raced to the window next to my bed and opened it.The huge elm tree beside my bedroom window came into view,its long branches beconing to me, waving in the breeze.I started to climb out the window a thought hit me: was I forgeting something?

Yes.The necklace! The pokball on the simple gold chain that my father gave to me after the carnival!! I climbed back through the window and ran to the bed.I flopped onto my bed,tossed a few pillows aside....got it!I hastly put on the necklace,my hands shaking.
ClIcK!
After it was in place I rushed to the window, climbed out onto the tree, onto a branch, down,down...
There. My feet were securly on the ground.Upstairs I heard Mom finally get into my room....giving out a shrill little cry of....anger,dissapointment? The saying "You always hurt the ones you love" made crystal clear sense to me now...I began running to Kerri's house,not daring to look back....

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That was exausting!*huffs n puffs*It took me 15 minutes to get this down! :knockedou
^_^;
Maybe I'll write more later.
And also KEEP THE COMMENTS coming! :cheeky: I like hearing what things people think about this fanfic.:)

Sankari
February 15th, 2004, 04:07 PM
[font=arial]Looks like I have a rival...Even though you're my buddy! I need to start going on my stories!!!!!!
*runs frantically towards her beloved stories*

ScArLetSkye
February 15th, 2004, 04:19 PM
O__o
Uhoh....
I'm scared.:P
-Oh,I promise to write more if a bit more people like and respond/comment on it.
I dunno,it kinda bUmPs me along that way...-

Ice demon
February 16th, 2004, 11:32 AM
Its going really well.....can't wait to read the rest...

SkarmoryRider
February 16th, 2004, 11:46 AM
Wow... Nice going story there!

ScArLetSkye
February 16th, 2004, 12:34 PM
Yay,some very nice people responded!!!^_^ Very well,as I promised......
I'm still working on it.I'll edit it into my post as soon as posible though....
Okay done!:D
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DiNg DoNg! The door opened."Scarlet?!?" Kerri stood out on her doorstep of the Parks' house,still in her red Teddiursa pjs, fuzzy pink slippers, green eyes exausted and sleeping looking, tangeled red hair moving gently in the breeze, like it had a life of it's own and all.
I tried to awnser, but my heart just seemed to stop at that moment,and my vocal cords didn't seem to be working.A strange little sound came out of my mouth.When I didn't respond, my best friend inquired: "What happened to you?"A pause, a silence, then fed up with my quietness, Kerri dragged me into her house.She dragged me all the way to her living room,then Kerri ushered me to sit down.I sat on the orange family sofa.Kerri looked at me with a look of pure concern and whispered "I'll be right back;I have to get dressed.And be careful to not make any noise,my parents are still sleeping." With that she silently raced up the stairs.I was truly amazed at how she could make such little noise,while doing the thing I made so much noise with.And I was amazed that I had such a interesting friend.

Kerri Parks had always been my best friend, ever since a eventful day at the park.

On that day, I was happily playing on the swings blissfully not knowing what event was going to occur, cooing and laughing gleefuly. Suddenly from out of almost nowhere,a messy haired boy came up to me. He looked about eight, and I was only a tiny 6 year old.He started teasing me, bugging me, with a playful, yet mean smile on his face. The bully wanted me to get off the swings so he could play on the swing. The other one was broken, so there was a small line of 6 and 5 year olds, a foot away from the usable swing. Of course most those other kids had at least one or two Pokmon (thier parent's no doubt) "pok-sitting" them,so no bigger kid bothered them. Plus all those boys and girls in the line were well aquainted with each other, so even if a girl or guy didn't have a Pokmon with them, their friend's Pokmon protected them as well. "Come on girlie,gimme the swing.I want it." I looked at him and at the line of waiting kids and lied "My Mommy's Pokmon is right over there behind that tree.It's tough and will beat you up.Go away!"

But at the time,sadly, I didn't have my own little "body guard" so the older kid found out a few minutes later, by running over to see my Mom's "Pokmon".Then,seeing no Pokmon beyond the tree, steaming mad, he rushed back over.He gave me a glare and then before I knew it...Umphh!I lay in the dirt, on my back below the swing,not relizing what had happened.The guy was sitting in the swing were I had just sat a few seconds ago.
I started to cry, a torrent of tears issuing from my eyes, blinding me temporarly.The boy started laughing and jeering at me.I opened my eyes.I fainted (a wierd thing for a little girl at that age to do).

The last thing I saw and heard,was a girl,about my age who had long, red,curly hair, alarming green eyes, coming to my defense and kicking the bully's shin,which caused him to leap off the swing in pain, howling, and running off.
When I woke up a few minutes later,I saw a pair of deep green eyes staring at me.I jumped up onto my feet in fear.But then I saw it was the girl that had "rescued" me.After the sweetly asked "Hi,what's your name?Are you okay?" a new friendship had begun that day...

"Scarlet!" My deep thinking was interupted Kerri's sudden outburst."Hey,I'm back and dressed!So what on earth happened"Kerri asked me, grinning curiously.And so I began to tell the story of my escape from a confined life...
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So,whaddya think?A bit of action,although in a flash back/memory. :bandit: :rambo:
It's not much but oh well...

Sankari
February 16th, 2004, 02:11 PM
Most of those words I don't even know...I should try better at my stories...
*stores your words in her brain*
He he he...

ScArLetSkye
February 16th, 2004, 02:17 PM
Heeheehee.:P:P:P:P:P:P:P:P:P
LOL

Ice demon
February 17th, 2004, 01:42 PM
Its going really well so...whats next?

ScArLetSkye
February 17th, 2004, 02:54 PM
You'll see...:P
Sorry,but I can only add on to the story on weekends,with all the homework and stuff.Bummer. :tired: :\ :confused:

Sankari
February 17th, 2004, 03:30 PM
Oh no! I'm going to blow up if I don't hear anymore!
*holds breath*
That's why you should...uh...do your homework at school, like I do...
*pops*
(In pieces)Well, crap...

ScArLetSkye
February 17th, 2004, 05:22 PM
Oh no! I'm going to blow up if I don't hear anymore!
*holds breath*
That's why you should...uh...do your homework at school, like I do...
*pops*
(In pieces)Well, crap...

Uhhhh...they don't let us do that at school....

I'm really sorry everyone.I'll try to write more tommorow though.:)

ScArLetSkye
February 20th, 2004, 05:53 PM
Okay!I'm back!Please wait a couple minutes...I'll edit it into this post....time people!TIME....:P

Kay,Kay!.....And remember,italics=Scarlet's thoughts!Plus it=Scar's dream thoughts too...And the non spacing in the sentence Kerri says,well it's intended.
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When I finished my action packed story, Kerri gasped and gaped at me.The expression on her face showed that she was down right suprised.
Her eyes grew wide "So you did it....mostly for ME?" she sqeaked.I nodded,pushing a strand of blonde hair back that had fallen into my eyes.

"Kerri, listen....if you were me, what other choice would you have?A confined life? NOT for me."
Kerri didn't speak for a minute.
"Umm...Kerri?"
".....OHMYGOD!WEAREGOING!COOL!IGOTTAPACK!WhATTOWEAR,WHATTOWEAR?" A whirlwind of words found it's way out of Keri's mouth.

She stood up rapidly, so quickly that the prized Parks' heirloom vase on the glass table behind her trembled, along with the bottle green colored glass table. Kerri grinned at me hugely, and sauluted like a blue Pokmon I had once seen on TV.
"Scarlet, that was kinda rash, what you did...but oh!I really do have to pack!See ya in....15 minutes!"
Before I could say anything, Kerri bolted up the stairs,once again.
I blinked.Whoa!She's fast.No, faster than fast...
I stared at the stairs were Kerri had dissapeared.
She may be fast but, at packing...oh boy, Scarlet.Get ready for a looooong wait.And I continued staring at the stairs...

20 minutes later, my head started to droop,shoulders started to sag.My eyes got really tired of looking at the staircase, waiting for Ker to come down.Must not fall asleep,must not....

"Scarlet!"My mother was screaming at me, her face crimson.I awoke in my bed.I quickly sat up and pulled off the bed covers.Kerri, her parents and Dad were also standing there, also crimson faced."Scarlet!I can't believe you!Why would you do that?"Kerri in turn,yelled at me."Bu...but Kerri-"
"Silence!" roared Mom, her eyes holding an evil glint."Scarlet, you DARE disobey your mother and go off?!!?????? "But who did you know?"I shook violently.Suddenly Dad leaned in, his eyes somehow having that menacing, blood shot look as my mom had."A little Swaillow told me...."He leaned back and gestured to Kerri.The others, including Kerri, smirked at me."But...I thought you were...were...my friend!How could you?!??!?" I stammered out, looking at Kerri, who's eyes as well had a strange look in them. "Yes, and I only have your best interests at heart..."Kerri grinned nastilly,and walked up to me. "Whha...Kerri, your eyes!!! They're...red!!!!"I gasped out. Slowly, Kerri and the others morphed into hideous bird like, scaly, red eyed creatures. "Oh, I'm not Kerri at all..."the horrendous creature in front of me snickered."But SHE is..." the monster pointed at the window.I gasped again.There was a huge steel cage,with the REAL Kerri, Dad, Mom and her parents inside.They all were unconcious."Let them go!NOW!!!" I screamed."Yesss.But first...your punishment!" the so called "Mom" rasped."Gggget hhher!" the creature that was "Kerri" screeched.They all flew in on me, grasping me with yellow talons.I took breath and fainted...

"Scarlet!!!! Wake up!"
"Huh what......?"
I saw Kerri in front of me and screamed, expecting glowing red eyes.
"It's just me, Scarlet!!!" I raised my head sleepily and rubbed my eyes.
Instead friendly green eyes were looking at me.
"Yes?"
"I'm PACKED!And...I talked to Mom and Dad...and they said we CAN go today!Oh Scarlet, I'm SO excited!" She gave a shrill squel of excitement.
"Wow!Let's get going!" I said, emmitting a high pitched squeal of joy of my own.
Kerri held out her hand.I reached out, grabbed it, and stood up from the couch, were, I guess I had fallen asleep.
"Not so fast girls!Not without food!"

Mrs.Parks suddenly bustled out of the kitchen, flaming red hair the same color as my friend's flying everywere. "Not without snacks, at least." Mrs.Parks beamed at us and pushed granola bars, napkins, and plates into our hands."Umm...gee, thanks, Mrs. Parks?" I said, trying not to laugh.Kerri's mom smiled at me."Why, you're quite welcome Scarlet!Now, shoo, you girls, go!Or you'll be late!!!!"She ushered us to the door and opened it, letting bursts of sunshine stream in, revealing the day.
"Mom..."
"Yes?"
"I don't think we need the plates and napkins."
Kerri took her plate and napkin and gave it to her mom.I did the same thing.Mrs Parks blushed a deep red.
"Now hurry, girls, you don't want somebody else to get the remaining Pokmon,or you'll have to wait untill tommorrow!Hurry on to Proffesor Blossom's lab!!!"
Kerri and I burst out laughing, granola bars in hand, started to walk quickly to Prof. Blossom's place.

On the way I said "I can NOT believe it, Ker, I'm getting my own Pokmon!!!"
Kerri looked at me and replied "Well Scar, ya better believe it.'Cause we are about to do it!!!" We continued to laugh, growing very pink."Lets hurry!" I said between giggles. "Kay, Kay, Scar,no need to fuss!" And we started to break into a run together.
I'm-no,we-are going...at last....
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Oh and,Scarlet-in the story-is me,pretty much.Just HAD to tell you that!:P

Ice demon
February 21st, 2004, 10:43 AM
The story is really great so far...u had me going for a minute with the dream thing.So whats next?

ScArLetSkye
February 21st, 2004, 11:06 AM
The story is really great so far...u had me going for a minute with the dream thing.So whats next?

Oh....the girls,are,of course,going to get thier starter Pokmon,and start thier journey,and meet a boy who Scarlet will get a crush-Oops-I'm telling to much....:)

~Can NEone guess what Pokmon each girl's gonna get?Guess....^_^....~

oni flygon
February 21st, 2004, 03:05 PM
Nice story and very original... I hope you keep continuing it! ^^

ScArLetSkye
February 21st, 2004, 03:33 PM
Nice story and very original... I hope you keep continuing it! ^^
Thankies,oni flygon for the compliments!Yes, I will continue the story. Soon...

SkarmoryRider
February 22nd, 2004, 03:27 PM
Wonderful story! *claps* Keep this going, it's great!

Sankari
February 23rd, 2004, 03:25 PM
That dream thingy was creepy...What did they turn into? Scarmory? Ho-oh? WHAT!?

Ice demon
February 27th, 2004, 06:35 PM
Why aren't there any new installments :'( ....anyway i'm sure school work etc. is keeping u busy

ScArLetSkye
February 28th, 2004, 05:27 AM
Yes Ice demon...you are right, but I'll try ta update today.;)
Ummm...how to put this....they turned into half Groudon, half Articuno, half Garados and half Scarmony?I guess...
0-0

The X
February 28th, 2004, 06:00 AM
Nice. If only I could write that good... :)

ScArLetSkye
February 28th, 2004, 06:26 AM
Nice. If only I could write that good... :)
Aw...thankies for the compliment.That's so sweet of you.:) :knockedou

The X
February 28th, 2004, 07:45 AM
Aw...thankies for the compliment.That's so sweet of you.:) :knockedou
No wonder you're such as good writer... You use words like 'thankies' and 'happifully'! :)

ScArLetSkye
February 28th, 2004, 08:20 AM
:D
What does that mean?:P

The X
February 28th, 2004, 08:23 AM
:D
What does that mean?:P I'm not being sarcastic, honestly. I just think 'thankies' is an awesome word.

ScArLetSkye
February 28th, 2004, 08:27 AM
Oh.
Kay,people, I'm starting to work on it!I'll put the next part into a post!Workin' on it, be patient....

The X
February 28th, 2004, 08:29 AM
Yay! I can't wait. :classic: I might continue my story just now, too.

ScArLetSkye
February 28th, 2004, 08:44 AM
Kay,I'm editing it into THIS post.PATIENCE please!;)
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"Ker, are you sure you know were it is?"
"Positive Scarlet, I've seen it loads of times, I mean, the market is close by..."
"Kay, kay...I trust you..."

Completly out of breath from running, Kerri and I arrived outside the white, clean, dome shaped building, known as Professer Blossom's lab to the residents of Azure Town.

The building's lawns were lush and green, and flowers bloomed everywhere you looked.A painted white picket fence surounded the area, and, near the back of the lab, a wooden gate remained closed and sometimes when you least expected it, Pokmon stared through at you behind the gate, watching in wonder.
Few people went into the lab , Kerri told me, unless they were kids getting thier starter Pokmon, or some of Prof. Blossom's helpers that lived and worked there.

"Soooo....are we going in?" Kerri questioned.I looked at her, then at the prim building.
"Ummm..."I gulped and tugged on a stray strand hair nervously.
"Scarlet!You know you want to!It's your dream to become a trainer!You told me that at least a million times in your lifetime!!!Are you just going to back away from-" Kerri's yelling was cut of as I replied "Alright, alright.I know.We're going in." I breezily replied, pushed the lock of hair back and started walking as slowly as I could torward the lab.
"SCARLET!This isn't a death walk to your doom, come on!"
"Okay.." I sulked for a second and started dashing torward the alabaster colored dome, with Kerri right at my heels.

"STOP!" I shrieked to Kerri.We skidded to a halt at the door in the front of the building.

A enourmous sized red door was in front, so big that five people could have easily walked through it when opened.
"Scarlet......um....do you think we should knock?" Kerri asked me as we stared at the huge door in front of us. "Well...uhh....." my eyes searched the wall in front of me.
Ahah!Found it!
I saw a doorbell right above one of the many flowerpots scattered all over the place.I turned to Kerri and pointed to the doorbell.She shrugged.Inhaling a great deal of air, I pushed the little button.

DiNg DoNg!

A sharp chime emerged from the doorbell and pierced the air.
A pounding of feet was heard from inside the house.
Then the footsteps stopped right behind the door.
And it slowly opened.
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Bit short, sorry 'bout that....

Ice demon
February 28th, 2004, 07:13 PM
Its really good so far - whats next?
I hope u take eevee, that is one of the starter - i'll go check.
Nice work I need to take writing class from u and SPon11....^_^

ScArLetSkye
February 28th, 2004, 08:14 PM
Its really good so far - whats next?
I hope u take eevee, that is one of the starter - i'll go check.
Nice work I need to take writing class from u and SPon11....^_^

Lalalala.... I might, I might get an Eevee.;)
You'll see t'morrow...
You're a VERY good writer yourself, ya know.... :classic:

The X
February 29th, 2004, 08:45 AM
*Applause* Yeah, this story's great. Keep it coming. :)

ScArLetSkye
March 2nd, 2004, 06:44 PM
Kay, t'morrow.*yawns*It's late were I live, and I'm just 2 lazy 2 update it today...
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ScArLetSkye
March 3rd, 2004, 08:58 AM
Okaaaaay!Hello, hi, bonjour, HELLO! I'm back and as I said before:Kay,I'm editing it into THIS post.PATIENCE please!:P

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The crimson door then was fully opened, and it revealed a woman, who looked as prim, proper and neat as her house.
Wearing a freshly pressed white lab coat, blue glasses hanging on a piece of creamy silk cord around her neck, a pale blue dress with pink flowers embroidered on it and short chocolate colored hair, this lady was standing in the doorway looking at us.

"May I help you two girls?" the woman inquired with a dazzling pearly white smile on her face.
Nervous breakdown!I was lost for words.
But then,Kerri looked the woman square in the eye and started to speak for the both of us.Kerri to the rescue!Thank you Ker!
"Well, m'am, my best friend, Scarlet and I, well, you see...we've come to get our starter Pokmon and trainer equiptment from Proffessor Blossom.Is she in? "

The brown haired woman laughed and said "Oh, yes dears, Professor Blossom is indeed in.Infact, she is I."She beamed at us, her eyes starry and twinkling.
Kerri and I stared at her.

Professor Blossom then became serious and said "Come in, come in, we simply can not stand here just talking.You came to get your starters I do believe?"
Kerri and I looked at each other for a split second and then nodded to the Professor.
"Well then, follow me girls!"
Professor Blossom urged and headed back inside, with us tailing behind her...
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Hahahah.I'm so evil. :badsmile: I will torture you guys forever, and you'll never find out what my/Scarlet's starter is....oh yes my duckies, I'll torture you with short, boring posts...

Just kidding.:P

Ice demon
March 5th, 2004, 07:21 PM
How could u???I need to know the starter.......

ScArLetSkye
March 5th, 2004, 07:36 PM
You'll find out....TOMORROW.:P

ScArLetSkye
March 15th, 2004, 06:37 AM
Oh I'm such a lazy person.I STILL haven't updated this.:/
But to make up for it, here's a pic of what Scarlet kinda looks like.
Thankies to:KingpiN for making it!

Fox_Die
March 15th, 2004, 08:20 AM
Hey that pic is just an edited version of may from pkmn advance

anyway I think that your story is very good so far

keep up thegood work

ScArLetSkye
March 18th, 2004, 07:53 AM
Well, yeah...but hey, he's WAY better at editing than I am!^^;
Oh, I'm working on it.Will edit into this post...
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At last, we came to a small room.
Book piles were everywere, various posters of Pokmon were on the walls and a strange, silver and crimson machine was in the very heart of it all.Three pokballs were on it, forming a triangle.

"Aaah...I apologize for the mess, but I have been extremely busy lately.Do come over here, girls." Proffesor Blossom pointed to the device.We walked over to it.I gazed at the three balls, wondering what kind of Pokmon were in them.

"Now," said the prof, startling me. "This is very simple.Just choose a b-"
A very cute boy with sparkling azure eyes dashed in through the ajar door, so fast he made the air whirl Kerri's hair blow about.
He ran over to the proffesor, gasping for breath.

"Mom, I'm sorry I'm late, you see,-"
'She's his mom?' I thought.
The woman glared at him.
"David, did you oversleep AGAIN?"
"Er..." said the boy sheepishly."Yeah..."
"We will discuss this later, David." Proffesor said cooly.
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More 2morrow!Hopefully!:)

pokeseeker
March 18th, 2004, 07:55 PM
WOW!!! That's amazing! can't wait for the next part.

Ice demon
March 19th, 2004, 07:44 PM
Why do u keep stalling? Please tell us what the starter is........please

ScArLetSkye
March 20th, 2004, 02:36 PM
Er...things have been hectic at our house lately...that's why, ID.I'm working on it.

ScArLetSkye
March 20th, 2004, 02:59 PM
Then she turned back to us, David edging a bit over to were we were standing.

"Now, back to were I was...cut off.It is VERY simple: Just pick a pokball, any ball.Now, Kerri, you shall go first, secondly, you, Scarlet and last of all David.Now, miss Kerri, if you please." She waved her hand over to the balls.Kerri shot a 'oh-my-gosh-I'm-so-nervous-AAAH!' look and made her way over.Ker streched her arm out and grabbed the middle one.

"Aaah...very good, now you, Scarlet." she looked at me, and I quickly strode over to the counter.I paused for a minute, as I surveyed the two remaining pokballs.I looked at Kerri."C'mon Scarlet, it isn't that hard to pick.Just choose." she mouthed.I turned back around and grabbed the one off to the right.

After I had mine and ran over to were my best friend was standing, I looked to see the remaining ball.But it was gone.As quick as a streak of light, David had the ball in his grasp."Good...Now kids, say 'go pokball!' and throw your pokball onto the ground, or, just hold it.Now, one, two three..." three cries of "go pokball!" mingled in the air.

A streak of light issued from my ball, which I had held in my hand.Then, it dissapeared.In it's place, was a adorable brown, little, fluffy Pokmon with black starry eyes that looked up at me sweetly. "Viii?" it uttered.I knelt down and patted it on the head.

Proffessor Blossom beamed at me when she saw that it had jumped into my arms.I stood up, the little creature nuzzled me and chirped again:"Vi?Eee?" . "Scarlet....that there, is a little, female Evee." the Proffesor said and turned back to the others.I looked into the Evee's eyes."I think I'll call you......Serene." I whispered to the small Pokmon. Serene licked me on my cheek.

:pokeball::pokeball::pokeball::pokeball::pokeball:
And it's an :7:!!!;) :D

ScArLetSkye
April 6th, 2004, 04:55 PM
Kay, I updated it!
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I stood up slowly with the little brown bundle of fur now called Serene, the little creature nestled in my arms. I patted the foxy little Pokmon on the head, and she chirped happily. I gazed down at her and smiled again. Eager to see what Pokmon Kerri and David had gotten out of their choice of balls, I looked up in the direction of my best friend.

Kerri had gotten a tiny marigold colored Pokmon, with black tipped ears that was squealing Chu chu! and jumping on top of a counter top, its tail bouncing up and down. Kerri was desperately aiming to catch it, as the fuzzy little yellow blur was leaping around, tabletop to counter, tabletop to counter, over the Magikarp tank.
SPLASH! "Piii!"

The mischievous little ball of yellow had fallen into the hazy water. It waved its small hand like paws around, bobbing up and down. Apparently, it was not a water type.

Spluttering and a bit less hyper, the Pokmon was fished out by a relieved Kerri. The little animal jumped onto its owners head. Kerri sighed, took a green scrunchie out, put her drenched, red mane of hair up into a messy pony-tail, taking care not to make the Pokmon fall off and said wearily "Scar, meet Bolt, a hyperactive boy Pichu." I looked at the Pichu that was eying me.

"Cool! A Pichu huh? Ker, hes so cute!"

Kerri rolled her eyes but smiled.

"Yeah. Hes a bit hyper, but really sweet and cute, I agree. Whats that Pokmon called?Did you name it? I mean, its not too special not to name your starter Pokmon..."

She pointed to the resting Eevee.

"Shes an Eevee. Okay, say hi to Kerri, Serene."
The Pokmon curiously looked up as I spoke its newly found name. She stared at Kerri with her big, black, almond shaped eyes.
"Vee?" Serene said shyly, then ducked her head back into my arms.
"Looks like ya got a shy baby Pokmon there."
David had come up to us, with his blue, calm Pokmon tailing behind him.Not knowing what to say to the guy, I just stared at his equally calm cobalt blue eyes, for some weird reason.

He stared at me in return, all: Why is that girl staring at me?.
Oh my gosh.
How embarrassing.
Geez.

Why does this always happen to me? AAARGH! I yelled inside my head.
I blushed rapidly. I just know it; I could feel the fiery color starting up on my cheeks.

Trying to change the subject I stuttered "Er, yeah, anyways, uh, wellwhat s your Pokmon called?"
David smiled.
"A Mudkip."
Kerri pulled herself into the conversation.
"A Mudkip!" Kerri repeated. "Nice!"
I didnt know what else to say, so I murmured "Oh."

David looked at me, and asked: "So, whats your name? Mines David, as you already know, 'cause of my mom's yelling." He laughed. Good thing the Prof wasn't around us at the moment, or he would have earned another piercing glare from his mother.
Cheeks still as crimson as my name I nervously said "Scarlet. And this is Serene.And thats Kerri and Bolt."

Venasaur
April 6th, 2004, 09:57 PM
Eeeee! Where's the rest? It was getting good, too! I should start my own story, another story, different from the one I already have...

*goes away to write story and sulk about abrupt ending to Scarlet's adventure*

ScArLetSkye
April 7th, 2004, 03:23 PM
Oh I'll continue on Friday...heh heh....
Wow, my first reviewer in a LONG LONG time!Horray!:D

oni flygon
April 7th, 2004, 04:04 PM
Nice chapter. Keep it up. But try to make your chapters slightly longer... ^^;;

ScArLetSkye
April 7th, 2004, 04:12 PM
Hmm...well, I kinda go for detail and well....quality, rather than quanity.;)
They're not really chappies..hmm...what are they?^^;

oni flygon
April 7th, 2004, 04:13 PM
Good idea! But somethimes, people want a sudden urge to read more. Keep up anyways!

ScArLetSkye
April 7th, 2004, 04:15 PM
Thankies!:)
Whee!Two new reviewers!I guess this thread isn't so invisible anymore...

oni flygon
April 7th, 2004, 04:16 PM
lol, you should be patient... well, my fanfic is up for 5 months and I only have one solid reviewer... XD

ScArLetSkye
April 7th, 2004, 04:21 PM
:D
I'll try...........:P

emeraldslay
April 8th, 2004, 01:06 PM
Cool story! As soon as I finished the last bit I was so depressed when there wasn't anymore! I like the way u are doing it, just enough to keep people occupied and intrested! I like it! I hope the first fight is soon!

ScArLetSkye
April 8th, 2004, 03:37 PM
It'll be soon alright...:D

Cassie-chan
April 8th, 2004, 04:12 PM
HURRYY UP!!!!!!!

I can't wait for the next part!!!!! Hurry!

I loved the beginning a lot.

ScArLetSkye
April 8th, 2004, 04:31 PM
Wow.
You did?
I'm in shock...^^

ScArLetSkye
April 9th, 2004, 06:14 AM
Kay, next part up!:)
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"Sooo. Scarlet and Kerri? Who are you guys going to travel with, on your journey? Me, Im 'swimming alone' for now."
David replied as I had finished introducing us.

A streak of panic surged through me as he said that.
I hate being alone.
Absolutely.
Let alone, traveling by myself.
It creeps me out, major.
Its like, some creepy little spinach colored aliens with purple antennae will leap out from their flying saucer thing, and abduct you any minute, while youre just laying on your bed, staring at the ceiling.
Yeah right.
But still, I dont like it very much.
This is odd for me to say, since Mom always tagged onto me, every single minute of my eleven year old life.

"Uh...well"
I glanced at Kerri, hoping that she would be willing to travel with me.
Duh, shes my best friend, but still, you never know.

She paused, a look of thought passed across her face, then she nodded her head yes.
I pushed a stray strand of hair back and looked at David once more, Kerri the same.
Bolt interestedly jumped down from Kerris head with a thump onto a nearby counter, and looked down at the Magikarp that were swimming in the tank nearby.

"Im going with her."
We both quickly replied at the same time.
David, on his part, stretched his mouth into a 'U' again.
"Cool. Are you guys sisters or somethin'?"
Kerri tapped her foot on the floor (its a bad habit of hers, so people usually think shes annoyed, or impatient. But she can be really impatient...) , then the red head answered:
"We are B Fs -best friends- but Scar here, is the sister I never had."
She looked at me, and at David.

A miserable look crossed his own face for a second, making those merry, twinking with excitement, blue eyes seem sad, like eyes of a hurt Pokmon.
Kerri and I both shot puzzled looks at him.
Trying to cheer him up, I scooted next to him, and questioned;
"Whats the matter?"
"Nothing. Itsits something personal, I dont want talk about it."
"Oh"
Then, his face brightened up again.
"Say"
He stuttered, apparently getting both nervous and shy.
"I-is it okay if I , you know, err, g-"
Kerri grinned, and bounced up and down, her own green eyes practically jumping, too.
"YES, YES, you can! Sure, you can come with us!!!!"
At the sight of his new mistress leaping up and down, Bolt gave a little Pokmon sigh of relief.
Guess he was glad he wasnt perched upon her head now.
I gave out a little giggle.
"Cool. Thanks a lot you guys."
David said with the calm returned to his voice.
"Lucky, that I got my backpack right here in the lab. Lemme go ask Mom to get it out of the closet for me.I do NOT know were it is."
He chuckled back.
Then, the guy yelled to an open closet nearby:
"Moooom! Can you get my backpack for me??!?!"
A muffled voice was heard from inside the tiny room.
"Yes dear! Let me find it first!"
David sighed.
"My mom-or Professor Blossom to you- always keeps important stuff in her lab. The problem is, even though shes a well known Pok professor, she just doesnt always remember stuff, and isnt too organized....LOOK OUT!"
A purple backpack came hurtling through the air towards us.
Kerri and I ducked, David as well, but he was too late. It hit him squarely on the head.
"OUCH! Moooom!"
The boy cried out, as he rubbed his head, and picked the purple object up.
A sheepish looking P.B. was looking at us apologetically, dusting herself off.
"Sorry about that kids. Anyways, you see, I was looking in the closet for six certain things..."

emeraldslay
April 9th, 2004, 10:40 AM
Its a really cool story, but I think it would help if the action was speeded up. I want the first Poke fight real soon!!!

ScArLetSkye
April 9th, 2004, 11:26 AM
I know, but it kinda takes time to think of a good battle scene...;)
It'll be in the next part.

Ice demon
April 9th, 2004, 06:41 PM
I had forgotten how well u write ^_^.So when are u going to add the next installment - i can't wait.

emeraldslay
April 10th, 2004, 06:03 AM
Oh yeah, could you please read my story? I have read yours and took the time to comment on it.

Legendary_Pokegirl
April 10th, 2004, 06:21 AM
Good story ScArLeTSkye! Seems pretty interesting......

ScArLetSkye
April 10th, 2004, 06:31 AM
MewMan-Yes, of course!:)
Anything for my precious revievers!:P
Lengendary Pokegirl-Thanks!:classic:
Ice demon:It's coming up very soon!I've started to work on it already, no fear!;)

paige pelletier
April 12th, 2004, 03:58 PM
coool cool cool! I love it keep posting!

ScArLetSkye
April 13th, 2004, 05:09 PM
Kay.^~ As soon as I can....maybe this Thursday or Friday, 'cause I have no school on those days!:)

ScArLetSkye
April 16th, 2004, 06:04 PM
As promised!:D
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"Here." Mrs. Blossom gently dropped six mechanical devices onto a nearby whicker chair.
Davids eyes bulged as he saw them.
"Poknavs! And Pokdexes! Cool-ieo, mom!" he exclaimed, pumping a fist up into the air, excitedly.
Kerri and I exchanged confused glances.
Poknavs... Pokdexes HUH?
"Yes, yes, Davidnow, girls, I noticed that you look a bit confused.well.let me explain." She said, tenderly placing a hand on Kerris shoulders.
She looked at us carefully, blinked, and cleared her throat as she stepped away, so that all of us could see her.
"These, as David said are Poknavs, and Pokdexes." The professor stooped down, and picked one up.

The item had a little blue light at one end that was currently dim, was mainly a deep red, and looked like one of those schedule thingies Mom always used.
And it looked kind of like a book, with the cover thing.
Only books dont have really hard, mechanical covers.
"This here, is a Pokdex." The lab-coated woman said calmly, and held it up.
She flipped open the small cover and held up the Pokdex, revealing a small screen, a couple of flat buttons and some little sound hole things.

"I will turn it on now."
Kerri gawked, so did I.
"But, Professor Blossom, um, can you, um, you know, explain how it works?"
"No need for that."
The lab worker pressed a small button on the side of the small, flat machine.
The blue button on the end beeped, and sparked to life.

We- A small voice was just barely heard, and, seeing that it was too quiet, the Pok proffesor smiled sheepishly, tossed her hair back, and pressed a small grey button. The tiny sound instantly became louder, this time a womans voice was heard. -elcome. Young trainer, I see you wish to learn how to operate this machine, or, how it works. I will give you a small tutorial..

Kerri and I both widened our eyes, giggled, and came closer, with both our Pokmon watching interestedly.
In turn, David rolled his eyes and sighed, grinning a bit though. His Mudkip yawned and sat down next to his feet.
You need not to know much. This machine voice activates when, or, you are on your travels. It activates when you point it at a certain Pokmon, and instantly records it, and gives you data about it as well. It should never, ever be put into-
My best friend and I stifled laughs.
"-chemicals."

The machine rambled on for what seemed like an hour (the Prof assured us it was only 10 minutes) giving the necessary (yeah, right) info about how to use it.

"And so, in conclusion, thank, you, and have a nice day."

The voice stopped, and the button blinked again.
David, Ker, and I all sighed in relief as it stopped.
P.B. now looked up at the ceiling.
"Kids these days" she muttered. Then her stare flew back, and locked onto us.
"Now, these are Poknavs." The irritated Professor said, placing the Pokdex back onto the wooden chair and picking up the other object.
This one, wasnt as flat though.
"The explanation for what these are is simple. Turn them on-" she punched a button, and, another screen appeared.
".And here is a menu. These will help you find your way to various towns and places, much better than maps.Just click on 'Map', and scan the area. Im afraid though, that, you'll have to see what the other options do."
I leaned closer in interest.
Some more options were 'Trainer Eyes,' 'Contests' and some other stuff.
Before I could see anymore, P.B. pushed the button once more, and the screen faded.
She put that down as well, and walked over to a desk, opened a drawer, and pulled out a brown, tattered bag.

Breathing heavily from all the talk and work, Mrs. Blossom made her way over to us.
She opened the bag. "Take one Poknav, one Pokdex, and five Pokballsyes, now, the last question is: Were will you put your Pokballs? You have two options.1-carry them around in your backpacks, or 2, on your belts.-"
"Backpacks!" we said in unison.
"Aah.very well."
We all unzipped our backpacks, hurled the trainer stuff in, and zipped them again.
"Now, call back your Pokmon, dears."
At that, I placed my Eevee onto the ground, Kerri doing the same.

"Cmon back, Bolt!"
A streak of light and a squeak.
"Come, Slash."
Oh, so that was his Mudkip's name...
Another flash of light.

I rubbed my eyes.
The light was kinda INTENSE.
No joke.

Now, everyone looked at me, all: Why arent you doing it?.
Feeling squeamish I muttered "Um, okay?"
I knelt down onto the tiled floor and said softly: "Come on back, Serene."
A flash of light came, and enveloped the Pokmon.
Then, it faded a couple seconds later.
WHAT?
Looking stubborn, Serene hadnt moved or disappeared! Wondering why she hadnt gone back into her Pokball, I looked at her.
"Vee, vee!"
I sat down, and called her name. Serene came bounding over happily, then pounced onto me, toppling me over, and started gently licking my forehead like a Growlithe a person in my neighborhood had.
As she licked me face, I sighed, looked up at the cleary astonished faces, and said "I guess that Im gonna keep my Eevee out, if its.um, okay, Proffesor that is."
P.B. sighed, then nodded her approval.
"I guess so, some trainers do that if their Pokmon are stubborn. Now"
Walking briskly toward us, Professor B. gestured for us to follow her, Kerri and David up ahead with the prof, me, at the end, tailing them with Serene right at my heels.

She led us out of the front door, into the warm sunshine.
As we stood there, the Prof beamed at us, and began to finish her sentence.
"It is time for youto go on your Pokmon journey." stated the strict, but kind woman.Prof turned to David ."As your mother, I will miss you, David. Did you pack EVERYTHING? "with that, she kissed him on the cheek. A look of sheer look of embarrassment came over Davids face. To not make him more embarrassed by watching the big scolding/goodbyes scene, I bent down again, took off my back pack, unzipped a bit and whispered "Serene, come." Strangely, as if she had understood, she leaped into my backpack. I zipped it up a little more, so Serene wouldnt fall out, hoisted the pack onto my shoulders, and stood up.

We started off, Professor Blossom shouting goodbye every few minutes, waving, my Eevee happily trotting after us.

Looking at my best friend -and my new one- as we headed over to the woods at the end of the city, I grinned. Kerri and David grinned back.'So this is what its like' I thought to myself as we stopped in front of the opening of the cluster of trees and flowers, each of us eying the sign that said Welcome to Woods!...I thought, as we slowly strode in, Kerri chatting with David about his Mudkip- 'to be on the path of a trainer.'What could I say? "WHOOOT!"-the chatting boy and girl noticed, understood at once, and also yelled OH YEAH!".I smiled as we continued into the leafy forest.
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A battle in the next part!Whee!

Abolishing Flames
April 16th, 2004, 08:02 PM
Very god work! Please keep up! ^_^

oni flygon
April 16th, 2004, 08:56 PM
I agree! Keep it up! Your work's amazing!

ScArLetSkye
April 17th, 2004, 04:22 AM
Um, okay!^.^
I'll do my best!

paige pelletier
April 17th, 2004, 05:01 AM
Do more do more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 your work is perfict! .....unlike my spelling............

ScArLetSkye
April 17th, 2004, 05:04 AM
OKAY!OKAY!:D
People, have patience....say it with me....patience...:P

emeraldslay
April 17th, 2004, 05:13 AM
I love it! I can't wait for the battle! It will be great!

ScArLetSkye
April 17th, 2004, 05:15 AM
Hopefully, it'll be okay!:P

paige pelletier
April 17th, 2004, 04:13 PM
Banana! that thing where you can wait! ha same thing!

ScArLetSkye
April 17th, 2004, 05:44 PM
Banana! that thing where you can wait! ha same thing!

O_O
What did you say, paige?

Anyways, I drew a chibi Scarlet head.:P

ScArLetSkye
April 23rd, 2004, 02:05 PM
Wah!
Do to several stupid school related things, I cannot work on my story until May.
Or the end of May.
Things i have to do:
-Finish a Science project
-Finish a French class project
I'm really sorry you guys.:( I havn't any time at all.Just enough to post.But not enough to work on the story.:'(

ScArLetSkye
May 19th, 2004, 06:12 PM
Now everything is over!YAY! I will post more next week(I hope!).

??????
May 20th, 2004, 01:54 PM
need to read

write more fan fic quick

ScArLetSkye
May 22nd, 2004, 08:40 AM
Editing this! New part comin' up! Don't post yet!
Oops, gotta go to Pet Co to buy food for my dog, Chanel.Will post shortly!Cya!

emeraldslay
May 22nd, 2004, 12:21 PM
Im baaaaaaaack! I have had a short break from this forum but now Im back - for good! I can't beleive you haven't updated! That was one of the reasons I came back. I guess I can wait.
*Sits waiting looking at clock a few times*
Stuff this! I will look back tomorrow! Please update!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!

emeraldslay
May 24th, 2004, 10:06 AM
Wow, how much dogfood are you buying? Or, how far away is the pet store? Its been two days and I have no story. Need...story...must have...story!

Cassie-chan
May 24th, 2004, 10:28 AM
Please? More story? I forgot about it for a month, then when I looked at it again, still no story! More...story...please?

ScArLetSkye
May 24th, 2004, 05:53 PM
Alright! Tommorrow, 'noon! Sooon! Promise you! :P

Cassie-chan
May 25th, 2004, 05:46 PM
Tick...tock...tick...tock...
*waits* I...need...more...story! I'd write it for you except...I can't write! *gets impatiant*

ScArLetSkye
May 26th, 2004, 04:59 PM
Sorry, couldn't log on for a while. It's coming up (it's done! YES!) next post!

emeraldslay
May 27th, 2004, 08:41 AM
You're dragging this out soooooooooo much! Just give us the next post!!!!!!!

ScArLetSkye
May 27th, 2004, 09:45 AM
Alright. (Aren't I evil? =3) Lol.
Okaaaay..... Here goes nothin'......

ScArLetSkye
May 27th, 2004, 09:50 AM
KERRI," David groaned as he sat down on a tree stump, shooting a Im-going-to-kill-you-if you-dont-hurry-up look at the tall grasses that were nearby, right across the stump.
We were in a small clearing (Okay, not really clear, on account of the bushes and tall grass and stuff, but whatever.) and Kerri insisted upon looking for wild flowers because she saw a gorgeous red one, that she had never seen in her life period of eleven years before, and had said she would be back in five minutes or so, and-

AAIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!
A shrill scream floated out of the tall, wavy grass, and seconds later Kerri, flushed and horrified, came out, mouth open in a wide O, tailed by her Pichu.
Scarlet! David! Sssomeone tapped me! On thethe shoulder! And I turned around, and II saw that no one was there! Just g g grass! And Bolt got hurt by a rock a flying Pokmon dropped and-

Vee!? My Eevee inquired out of my backpack.
I rolled my eyes. Puh-lease Ker, you can do better than that..
David, on his part looked at her and grinned.
I didnt know you could scream that loud, Kerri.
Kerri shot a glare at him and then stomped her right foot on the ground.
But really guys! See, then, I saw these eyes and I bolted! She protested angrily.

Suddenly, surprisingly, a loud rustle came from the bushes, the sounds of many feet scurrying, and another pair crawling. Then, out of the grass two green-
EYES! Howled Kerri and started running around panicking. The EYES! The EYES, She stopped for a minute, everyone (including the pair of green eyes) looked at her. See, She said, crossing her arms across her chest. I told you two. But nooooo. The redhead said smugly.

Then , even more of a surprise came along with the eyes. Ears. A nose. A head. A arm. A leg. A arm. A leg
Sitting before us, was a boy that looked about fourteen, or so rubbing his eyes, that had two Pokballs attached to his belt. As soon as he finished rubbing at them, he stood up, with a furious look on his face.
All right peeps, which one of ya screamed?! You scared away a Catterpie I was gonna net!!!

Kerri stopped running, and sheepishly raised her hand.
Alright, punkette! Battle, me, you! My Grass and Bug might!
B-b-but,
What?! Snarled the teen.
My Pokmon is hurt, so, uh, I-
YOU! The boy suddenly jabbed a finger at me.
Since your friend cant battle, YOU are going to battle instead of her! He said in a oily voice, sneering at me.
I looked at him, and said quietly: Bring it on. Go Serene!
Serene hopped out of my backpack, onto my head and said Vee! VEE!

The boy laughed.
Ill take you out easily, punkette. He taunted.
I glared at him, and whipped out my Pokdex. I switched it on, and quietly spoke into it: "What attacks do Eevees have?" It replied "Tackle, Growl, and other attacks." I rolled my eyes, seeing that it gave me only half of the answer.
"Go Bulbasaur!" The boy yelled, and lauched one of the balls onto the ground. A blue Pokmon with a flower bulb on it's back appeared, screeching "BULBA-SAUR! BULBA!"
I gulped nervously.
"Go, Serene," I commanded, and my Eevee ran up infront of me.
"Okay, Serene, use Tackle!"

Ice demon
May 30th, 2004, 11:08 AM
u're an amazing writer - keep up the good work ^_^.

capalex65
May 31st, 2004, 02:49 AM
Must have MORE!!!!!! need MORE!!!!! and i'll wait
*1 years later*
I CAN STILL WAIT ScarletSkye!!!!!
*2 years later*
ok now i'm getting impatient
*10 years later*
now i'm impatieng get writing that story

ScArLetSkye
May 31st, 2004, 08:51 AM
O_O; Alright, alright, I will...

emeraldslay
June 1st, 2004, 06:38 AM
Finally, some battling! Keep it coming!

ScArLetSkye
June 1st, 2004, 07:04 AM
Okay! (BTW, MewMan, I'm gonna check out your story.)^^

capalex65
June 13th, 2004, 04:51 AM
Get Writing!!! I Want More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ScArLetSkye
June 13th, 2004, 08:24 AM
oO; Alright, just a couple more sentences... XD

Morphasis
June 13th, 2004, 10:01 AM
It's me, Skarmory Rider! Good story! Keep it up! *roots*

oni flygon
June 13th, 2004, 01:55 PM
I like your story... so...

Congrats for being the fanfic of the week! ^_^

*stickies*

ScArLetSkye
June 17th, 2004, 10:20 AM
A stickied story? *Jaw drops* O_O
Wow... This is a... Honor.. *Sniff*
Okay! Now I just gotta edit it, and then it'll be up in a short while! ^^

ScArLetSkye
June 17th, 2004, 10:29 AM
Done! Sorry if this is short, but I have been tremendously busy! ^^;
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Serene nodded her head, like Pokmon do.
"Veeeeeee!" She said shrilly, and charged toward the Bulbasaur.
"Bul-"
Smack. The Bulbasaur fell onto its head, but then quickly righted itself.
"Vinewhip, Bulbasaur!" The boy angrily cried, jabbing a finger at Serene.
"BULBA!" The Pokmon cried furiously, and with that, it advanced on Serene, and shot strange, slim vines at my stunned Eevee, in circling the green around its waist.
"Veeeeee!" Serene cried, paralyzed as the vines carried it into the air.

My mouth dropped open, and the boy laughed.
"Not so tough now, are ya little punkette?"
He grinned, revealing a couple of silver teeth, (Ewww, he probably does NOT brush his teeth a lot!) causing me to shudder, then rapidly thinking of how to get Serene out of Bulbasaurs clutches.

Seeing Serene so silent, stunned from the attack, I suddenly got a idea...
"Umm. Serene, use Growl!" I yelled, and the little Eevee made a loud growling noise, causing the startled Bulbasaur to drop it.
Yes! Now to finish it off!!! Oh, great-
"Bulbasuar!! Use Razor Leaf!!!" The teen roared in a fit, causing the Bulbasaur to instantly start attacking with sharp-looking leaves.
"Yow!" Kerri yelped from some were behind us.
Watch were you aim your attack!
I rolled my eyes, grinned slightly, then proceeded in saying: "Serene, try to get near that Bulbasaur, and attack it with Tackle!"
"Vee!"
My Eevee began to dodge the leaves, trying to get near the Bulbasaur, occasionally ducking a few, until.

WHACK.

Mission a success.
I smiled happilly, seeing the Bulbasaur slump to the ground, and faint onto the grass.
"Battle's over! Scar wins!" David yelled from behind us, causing the other boy to start fuming, and turning a deep angry red, and Kerri to start giggling.
After calling back his Pokmon, before stomping off into the grasses again, he yelled:
"Punkette! Ill getcha back someday, dontcha worry! Ill stomp on you for good!..."
Then, stomping, and causing some Pokmon in the grass to yowl, enraged, he left.

oni flygon
June 17th, 2004, 03:06 PM
lol, since before you said that you want yours for quality, I'd ignore the length, then. ^_^

You story's great. If I was writing, I might miss out some stuff that you wrote down. XD

ScArLetSkye
June 21st, 2004, 01:33 PM
Thank you for the compliments. =)
I feel warm n' fuzzy. XD

Morphasis
June 22nd, 2004, 09:30 AM
ScArLeT! It's me, Skarmory Rider! Wonderful story! *roots and cheers and gives you a cookie*

ScArLetSkye
June 23rd, 2004, 01:58 PM
Really? I was wondering were you went... [Is glad you are back, and takes cookie]
Thanks, guys! No more lazy me- Well, Not as lazy me, anyways... ^^;
I'll try to update soon- keep your eyes open.

Morphasis
June 24th, 2004, 11:44 AM
*sits and eats gummy bear sandwich* YAY!

Haruno Sakura
June 26th, 2004, 02:12 PM
I also have made another account! [Cough] Needs more posts.... XD

Morphasis
June 27th, 2004, 07:12 AM
Keep it up! I'm working on a new story that I will post soon, called 'Legendary Battles'. Do you want to know what it's about?

Haruno Sakura
June 27th, 2004, 11:24 AM
Yes, yes, YES! 'Course I do! Sounds interesting!^__^

Morphasis
June 29th, 2004, 01:23 PM
Something strange befalls the legendaries, and all turn against each other. Latios vs. Latias, Mew vs. Mewtwo, Lugia vs. Ho oh, and Celabi vs. Jirachi. The rest... well, I'll describe....

A small band of kids must find a way to cease the eternal battle.

I'm gonna have some sign up to be in the story. May be a story where two or more people work on it. Maybe can turn into an RP too!

ScArLetSkye
July 3rd, 2004, 06:04 PM
[Nods] Wow... Kewl... Awe- Arrgh, sorry, you get the point- right?XD

Morphasis
July 4th, 2004, 12:00 PM
Yesh, its fine. *pats and gives you a bucket of cookies*

espeon and umbreon
September 10th, 2004, 09:04 PM
Hey, you said you are going to post new chapter soon! It's over 2 months now. You also said you are not as lazy as before! Now it's like lazier than before.