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Karasuma
August 30th, 2005, 05:04 PM
The First Cover
http://img284.imageshack.us/img284/4577/saga20jk.png

This comic is the hit TV show "Pokemon" but done it my way in style. But I make some twist along the way. and yes this comic ends when The gang start in the Orange Islands. If you've never seened the show from the start then this is like watching it.

The Plot
It starts in Pallet Town where 10 year old Ash Ketchum is living a normal "boring" life and his journey begins when a friend of his sends him an E-Mail. Follow him as he meets new friends and earns some badges.

Main Characters
Ash
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/3531/ash1rm.png
The hero of this story. Doesn't really like Pokemon until a friend inspires him.
Brock
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/8377/brock4kv.png
Pewter City's Gym leader that becomes Ash's friend as the story goes on.
Misty
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/1118/misty6vy.png
With her bike stolen she decides to go with Ash on his journey until he pays for a new bike.

More Coming Soon...

Some Characters talk in different Colors: Ash-Black(Always), Prof.Oak-Brown, A.J.-Lightblue(I hope you can read lightblue), TeamRocket-Red, Brock-Green, Misty-Blue.

Now for the Credits:
The Sprite Resources.com
Pokesho.com (a really big thanks)
Signomi for the Mewtwo
Adam for the sprites
Outlaw for the sprites
Tsukasa for some sprites
Blazin Espio for the trainer sprites. Chill dude^^

Please post every time you read it.Here they are, Enjoy! :classic:

Season 1
Pika Saga

Episode 1: A New Beginning (http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/8915/episode10xf.png)
Episode 2: My Journey Awaits (http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/2043/episode26xl.png)
Episode 3: Pikachu, the Electric Mouse (http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/9316/episode37ut.png)
Episode 4: Two Rookies Fight (http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/6796/episode47le.png)
Episode 5: Trouble in Viridian Forest (http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/5589/episode52le.png)
Episode 6: Team Rocket Attacks! (http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/1676/episode60aa.png)
Episode 7: Gym Leaders? (http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/457/episode78vx.png)
Episode 8: Pika Problems (http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/6664/episode82xo.png)
Episode 9: No Match for Brock (http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/7438/episode97dw.png)
Episode 10: Smarter Than Ever! (http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/9877/episode103hy.png)

Friends Saga

Episode 11: A Shocking Battle (http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/166/episode112nz.png)
Episode 12: To Fall or Advance (http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/661/episode121ba.png)
Episode 13: Change of Heart (http://img356.imageshack.us/img356/6047/episode133np.png)
Episode 14: Mt. Moon Rumble (http://img356.imageshack.us/img356/4426/episode148pl.png)
Episode 15: Cerulian City Horror! (http://img356.imageshack.us/img356/7956/episode159gy.png)
Episode 16: The Speedy Rocket (http://img356.imageshack.us/img356/9224/episode166oj.png)
Episode 17: Rocket V.S. Gym Leader (http://img356.imageshack.us/img356/5743/episode177dr.png)
Episode 18: Water Fight! (http://img356.imageshack.us/img356/1386/episode184fv.png)
Episode 19: An Explosive Match (http://img356.imageshack.us/img356/4540/episode198vb.png)
Episode 20: Bulbasaur's Choice (http://img356.imageshack.us/img356/9695/episode204ef.png)

Three Starters Saga

Episode 21: Charmander's Problem (http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/5986/episode214vl.png)
Episode 22: Another Friend (http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/449/episode226gu.png)
Episode 23: Red & Blue (http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/5171/eps233ua.png)
Episode 24: The Newest Member (http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/1558/eps246pg.png)
Episode 25: Power Surge! (http://img325.imageshack.us/img325/8571/eps252tk.png)
Episode 26: Pikachu's Choice (http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/6420/eps264mw.png)
Episode 27: Electric Shock Showdown! (http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/2733/episode278of.png)
Episode 28: Going on a Cruise (http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/8122/episode284ui.png)

Tsukasa
August 30th, 2005, 05:39 PM
Is it me or did u make two threads for the same comic?

Karasuma
August 30th, 2005, 05:46 PM
Is it me or did u make two threads for the same comic?

If you went to the other one I wrote that I won't be putting my episodes in there cause I messed up BIG TIME. That's why I called this one "THE REAL ONE". The other thread, It's nothing. This One Rules!!!! :rambo:

Sylphiel
August 30th, 2005, 05:48 PM
Please refrain from making more than one thread for one thing, if possible. ^_^;;

Since this seems to be the thread you want to post in, though...I'll go ahead and close your other one, okay?

Karasuma
August 30th, 2005, 05:51 PM
The other one I messed up big time. And I can't delete the other thread. but tell me? Is this one is better from the other one? This one RULZ!!!

Fox♠
August 31st, 2005, 01:07 AM
you have too much self esteam, especially for a rookie, I may even have to cut your ego down a notch

for one it's sometimes difficult to follow the pannels, for two there are a few spelling and grammer mistakes, and 3, you need to vredit the spriters who ripped those pokemon, trainers and maps

meh, the plot is a little cliche', same with most of the cast, there's no real humour to speak of, and nidoran wouldn't have extream speed at level 3

don't get me wrong, your comic isn't terrible, but it doesent rule

there are plenty more stereotypical pokemon adventures like this out there

5/10

oh and on the off chance you ripped them you should still credit nintendo

Karasuma
August 31st, 2005, 03:30 AM
you have too much self esteam, especially for a rookie, I may even have to cut your ego down a notch

for one it's sometimes difficult to follow the pannels, for two there are a few spelling and grammer mistakes, and 3, you need to vredit the spriters who ripped those pokemon, trainers and maps

meh, the plot is a little cliche', same with most of the cast, there's no real humour to speak of, and nidoran wouldn't have extream speed at level 3

don't get me wrong, your comic isn't terrible, but it doesent rule

there are plenty more stereotypical pokemon adventures like this out there

5/10

oh and on the off chance you ripped them you should still credit nintendo

Forgive me then Vaati. This is my first time making these Comic Sprites and it was hard for me to get all sprites from differentpritesdfferent websites. You've inspire me to become better and this is just the beginning, there will be more on the way.

As for the adventure,You may know that anything is possible. The Nidoran learned Extremespeed in the place where in Pokemon Crystal, the hero got a dratini with Extremespeed. I thoght that the just that attack was cool for Nidoran.

And about the giving credits I will. I couldn't have made Eps. 1 to 5 without giving credit to the these guys:Eternaldarkwing,Badassbill,and Jack.Thanks guys. ;)

Just like vaati I wanna hear what you all think my comics are. if their not funny i'll make funny,if their not too good i'll make them better. ;)

Signomi
August 31st, 2005, 03:35 AM
I'm liking it so far. Though the boy's font colour is too bright, you ought to change it so it's easier to read ^_^ Keep it up.

Karasuma
August 31st, 2005, 03:37 AM
Yeah, that's why I don't make more episodes with him. gotta save color for the other charackters.

Omega Latios
August 31st, 2005, 03:40 AM
These Comics Are Great! I Can't Wait For The Next Part!

Eon-Rider
August 31st, 2005, 03:50 AM
These are great but you should becareful where to put "?" and where to put "!".

Karasuma
August 31st, 2005, 03:55 AM
Right, and thanks for the advice Coolmaster. they help a lot.

Fox♠
August 31st, 2005, 04:18 AM
ell I'm very glad to see you accepted critism and have decided to hone it to become better ^_^...too bad I can't seem to view issue 6

never mind, it works now

Karasuma
August 31st, 2005, 04:24 AM
I'll post Episode 7 soon. I'm still doing it. It's called "Gym Leadres?"

Fox♠
August 31st, 2005, 04:28 AM
issue 6 wasn't bad, there were a few spelling mistakes, nothing major though

Karasuma
August 31st, 2005, 04:33 AM
My writing can get a little sloppy sometimes but I'll make it better. thanks for the tip vaati.

P.S. I spelled it wrong, It's really called "Gym Leaders?"

Fox♠
August 31st, 2005, 04:57 AM
it's ok, a typo is a common mistake in sprite comics

Karasuma
August 31st, 2005, 05:14 AM
Okay! Episode 7 & 8 are done. I'll introduce you two New Charcters:
Gotta give Credit to Badassbill and Kingkirby for the new images. :nervous:

Karasuma
August 31st, 2005, 03:03 PM
Oh I forgot, how are you guys liking my episodes? please I need to know?

Karasuma
August 31st, 2005, 06:19 PM
I'll have Episode 9 by Tomorrow.

Fox♠
September 1st, 2005, 12:57 AM
don't triple post, it's against the rules

Datriot
September 1st, 2005, 01:56 AM
It's quite a good comin, okay, stroy, I don't like the light blue colour of some of the fonts....8/10.:)

Karasuma
September 1st, 2005, 04:38 AM
don't triple post, it's against the rules

Heh, I get carried away sometimes but thanx for the tip. :rambo:

armadilloHD
September 1st, 2005, 04:52 AM
and 3, you need to vredit the spriters who ripped those pokemon, trainers and maps

Not really, most rippers want to stay anonymous, you need to credit if you use someone's edited sprite though. Vaati said most of the problems in his post, but this gets the 0 for being nothing but the original season one plot with only few new twists

Karasuma
September 1st, 2005, 05:11 AM
Right, It's Kanto but more Advanced.Like some Kanto Pokemon know johto and hoenn moves.

Karasuma
September 1st, 2005, 08:17 PM
Sorry for the double post, but I've done 10 Episodes! Wooho!
I've put them all in order. Episodes 1 to 10 are Season 1 of my series. :nervous:

Stephen,Pokemon Master
September 2nd, 2005, 11:25 AM
*claps*Well Done,MysticTrunks!

Maks
September 2nd, 2005, 09:20 PM
Anyone know where I can get good pictures of Hoenn gym leaders? Thanks

Eon-Rider
September 2nd, 2005, 09:45 PM
Nice! I enjoyed readin' them!

Jarman
September 3rd, 2005, 04:12 AM
The comic is OK. For battle text, use this (http://sprites.fireball20xl.com/NSA/Sheets/pkmnhud.png).

Anyone know where I can get good pictures of Hoenn gym leaders? Thanks

http://sprites.fireball20xl.com/

Adam_148
September 3rd, 2005, 07:31 AM
oh so you like Mystic Trunks comic but you don't like mine, you are just crazy mines as good as Mystic Trunks

Oh yeah Mystic Trunks this is good 9/10

Karasuma
September 3rd, 2005, 10:56 AM
oh so you like Mystic Trunks comic but you don't like mine, you are just crazy mines as good as Mystic Trunks

Oh yeah Mystic Trunks this is good 9/10

Thankx, I'm still working on Season 2, which is Eps. 11 to 20.
11 is almost done. ;)

Karasuma
September 4th, 2005, 08:09 PM
Whoops, sorry to double post again, but I'm done with Episode 11. It's called "A Shocking Battle".
I guess for this Episode I gotta Thank Outlaw for giving me the Indian Trainer. :confused:

jc_rcw
September 4th, 2005, 08:20 PM
Wow very nice :D, keep the good work.

.-'Infernal Hylian'-.
September 5th, 2005, 12:59 AM
that was a pretty good read i enjoyed that alot!

Karasuma
September 5th, 2005, 04:05 AM
Thanks jc rcw and Link2005 ^.^ It's people like you that make me keep on doing my SC's. Anyway, Episode 12 is ready.
It's called "To Fall or Advance?"
Please post so I know what did you think. ;)
This episode has a very funny Brock:
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a354/MysticTrunks/bok.jpg
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

Crystal Walrus
September 5th, 2005, 07:04 AM
I like this comic i give it nine & a half that near perfect but its just like the tv show whell kinda

jc_rcw
September 5th, 2005, 12:49 PM
its really good*sits back and waits for more*

Karasuma
September 5th, 2005, 06:25 PM
Oh there'll be more, just wait. How come people aren't posting?

Karasuma
September 6th, 2005, 04:09 AM
Heh, sorry to double post again, but I'm done with episode 13. I've putted all my Episodes in the first page so go on and check.
Please post?

Signomi
September 6th, 2005, 04:26 AM
Dadada. This comic is pretty nice ^__^ -gives it a ribbon- Joo must keep it up MT ^o^

Karasuma
September 8th, 2005, 01:25 PM
Thanks Signomi ^_^ Anyway I'm done with eppy 14 so check it out.

And please post. I don't care if you say that it's terrible or good *__*

Karasuma
September 8th, 2005, 01:44 PM
Whoops sorry to double post. I'll have eppy's 1 to 14 modified. you'll see.

legoman
September 9th, 2005, 12:42 PM
:D :D :D this is freakin awesome!!! I wish I could be as good as you YOU MY IDOL :chinese:

jc_rcw
September 9th, 2005, 03:27 PM
*claps*very nice indeed my friend :D

Karasuma
September 9th, 2005, 04:08 PM
*claps*very nice indeed my friend :D

Thanks guys. I got some bad news. I think I'm stoping here. It's not me. It's other people that don't post here. You see it but you don't post. This is it. I wanna know if you want me to continue or not. I'll post a poll and with that this is it. I'll give up. :shocked:

Adam_148
September 10th, 2005, 09:15 AM
this is brilliant, I don't think you should quit, ignore critics, unless it's a good report, and never give up.

Omega Latios
September 10th, 2005, 09:15 AM
Don't Give Up! This Is One Of The Best Comics Around!

Karasuma
September 10th, 2005, 09:16 AM
Well, it depends on the voting poll. so far there's 2 that want me out.

Omega Latios
September 10th, 2005, 09:20 AM
Don't Care About The Voters. This Comic Is Great! Don't Stop Making Em.

Adam_148
September 10th, 2005, 09:20 AM
and 4 people want you to keep going including me, If I was you I'd keep going anyway but...

Karasuma
September 10th, 2005, 09:23 AM
and 4 people want you to keep going including me, If I was you I'd keep going anyway but...

Nah, I'll just wait until the poll closes.

Adam_148
September 10th, 2005, 09:32 AM
4 days then... Ahem.
Hello all people who like this comic please vote if you want Mystic Trunks to carry on with this comic or pack his bags and hit the road. It's in your hands.

Karasuma
September 10th, 2005, 09:37 AM
4 days then... Ahem.
Hello all people who like this comic please vote if you want Mystic Trunks to carry on with this comic or pack his bags and hit the road. It's in your hands.

Nice speech and thanks. But I done it already and know one listened. I guess this is it.... :(

Suki
September 10th, 2005, 09:40 AM
oi Mystic trunks is going nowhere
hey people dont be sad i like his stuff

Adam_148
September 10th, 2005, 09:40 AM
nope this is not it, PM friends ask them, you're not going to give up, I won't let you, don't get down cos people won't post, do what I do, PM somebody to let them know the next eppy is up,

Signomi
September 10th, 2005, 09:48 AM
What? You want to discontinue your comic for just the reason that not many who view your comics post? o_O MT, with all due respect. I think that's a very bizarre reason. You should continue what you have already created regardless of the amount of posts you have in your thread. Because frankly you shouldn't really care.The purpose of continuing a comic is believing that your hard work will pay off. Forget the viewers/commenters, don't let anything discourage you from continuing what you've done. You already have a fan in me and I'd be really dissappointed if you do not continue this comic.

'Nuff said.

Karasuma
September 10th, 2005, 09:49 AM
nope this is not it, PM friends ask them, you're not going to give up, I won't let you, don't get down cos people won't post, do what I do, PM somebody to let them know the next eppy is up,

Well, that's one way. But I'm waiting for the polls to close.

Adam_148
September 10th, 2005, 09:51 AM
yeah! what she said! I can see the future this comic will rise before all others

Karasuma
September 10th, 2005, 09:55 AM
yeah! what she said! I can see the future this comic will rise before all others

I see: Worst comic in this PC is mine.

Adam_148
September 10th, 2005, 10:03 AM
didn't you understand? It means you're comic will be one of the best, and will remain one of the best

Signomi
September 10th, 2005, 10:04 AM
Personally I'm not really too fond of your Self-esteem o.O; That's what's making you do this.

Take a look around you dearie. At some of the comics who've been severly critisized, you're one of the lucky ones. This comic has potential. It would be a shame to let it go. You let it go, you're only doing yourself bad, not really good o.O;

Karasuma
September 10th, 2005, 10:12 AM
Personally I'm not really too fond of your Self-esteem o.O; That's what's making you do this.

Take a look around you dearie. At some of the comics who've been severly critisized, you're one of the lucky ones. This comic has potential. It would be a shame to let it go. You let it go, you're only doing yourself bad, not really good o.O;

I think U should look around again. I see that people are posting this just cause they saw my voting poll. If I didn't had it then know one would even post.

Signomi
September 10th, 2005, 10:14 AM
But why do you care so much for posts? It's the comic you should care more of. Not the posts.

Karasuma
September 10th, 2005, 10:16 AM
But why do you care so much for posts? It's the comic you should care more of. Not the posts.

I only entered this forum cause my friend "Mostachon" told me that it was cool. then he gave me the idea to make a SC thread. Now I feel that I should go to another forum and start again.

Signomi
September 10th, 2005, 10:19 AM
Well I'm not pushing you really MT. You may do what you like. I just think it's very strange to discontinue a comic due to lack of posters... But heck ^^; We'll still be mates right?

Karasuma
September 10th, 2005, 10:22 AM
Well I'm not pushing you really MT. You may do what you like. I just think it's very strange to discontinue a comic due to lack of posters... But heck ^^; We'll still be mates right?

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Signomi
September 10th, 2005, 10:24 AM
Hm...I'll take that as a no then =/ Very well.

Karasuma
September 10th, 2005, 03:22 PM
Hm...I'll take that as a no then =/ Very well.

No,no. I didn't mean that. I'm sorry if you thought about that. :(

jc_rcw
September 10th, 2005, 03:28 PM
Noooooo please continue with your comics please

Karasuma
September 10th, 2005, 03:30 PM
Noooooo please continue with your comics please

Give me a reson? Do you like it?

jc_rcw
September 10th, 2005, 03:48 PM
Of course I do I'm still waiting for the 14th one

Karasuma
September 10th, 2005, 04:18 PM
Then say no more. I HAVE DECIDED NOT TOO RETIRE AND KEEP ON GOING WITH MY SC's.

jc_rcw
September 10th, 2005, 04:27 PM
Yay *dances* well no to wait for the new episodes :D

Karasuma
September 10th, 2005, 04:41 PM
Yay *dances* well no to wait for the new episodes :D

I'll have them done by tomorrow. 3 I think.

jc_rcw
September 10th, 2005, 05:00 PM
Those are some good news*sits back and relaxes*

Karasuma
September 10th, 2005, 05:02 PM
Yep, but don't expect them to be very funny. there 100% adventure.

jc_rcw
September 10th, 2005, 05:04 PM
well that doesn't matter,they're very good.

Karasuma
September 10th, 2005, 05:05 PM
Thank's I try to make them pretty good.

Linoone
September 11th, 2005, 05:33 AM
looking good so far, keep it up like that, and dont abandon it like the other comics! (the croconaw hunter, it was real good, but never continued...)

Karasuma
September 11th, 2005, 09:44 AM
Thanks Mostachon! Now for the time being I only have one new episode so make sure you see it. it's in the first page.

Signomi
September 11th, 2005, 09:51 AM
Haha XD Poor Misty, reminds me of in G/S/C when she was at Cerulean Cape with a guy then your PC comes and shoos him away. Heh, well what shall happen to Pikachu? Keep at it MT! ^.^

Karasuma
September 11th, 2005, 09:59 AM
Haha XD Poor Misty, reminds me of in G/S/C when she was at Cerulean Cape with a guy then your PC comes and shoos him away. Heh, well what shall happen to Pikachu? Keep at it MT! ^.^

Yeah, I made it just a little funny. I like the Misty part.

jc_rcw
September 11th, 2005, 03:08 PM
LOL so when are you doing the 14th one I'm so impacient:P

Zephyr+
September 11th, 2005, 03:17 PM
Haha, I like this. Good job, the comic is neat and tidy, albeit a little difficult to understand.

Karasuma
September 12th, 2005, 12:29 PM
Hey, new eppy 16 is posted. make sure U see it and plz post.

The Dash
September 12th, 2005, 02:05 PM
Looking good so far MT :D
So I take it this is a ...sort of remake of the Anime?

jc_rcw
September 12th, 2005, 03:15 PM
They're really good(I hadn't read #14,15,and16)keep it up because I want to see more :D.

Eon-Rider
September 13th, 2005, 05:45 AM
OMG! This is so exciting! Good work!

Karasuma
September 13th, 2005, 08:22 AM
Thanks everyone. Well, todays the big day. It's time to see if I keep on doing or stop. I'll post again tonite.

jc_rcw
September 13th, 2005, 12:12 PM
Please keep on doing them I love them.

Karasuma
September 13th, 2005, 12:16 PM
Don't say love dude, it makes U sound GAY XD. just say like.

P.S.: By tomorrow I'll have the complete season 2!!!!!!!!
But then I'm not sure if I'll keep on doing, before anyone says anything, nope, I am not leaving. Just taking a little break XD's.

jc_rcw
September 13th, 2005, 12:37 PM
Ok sorry master XD well is that they're so good, if you want I could say I hate them too :D

Karasuma
September 13th, 2005, 08:04 PM
I must be dreaming. I've done 20 episodes!!!!! (*Celebrates*) WOOT! WOOT! This is really something that I thought I wasn't gonna continue, but I see that all of U like my Eppy's so much that I decided to keep on going. But I think that for the remainder of this week I won't be doing any new eppy's. Nope, I'm gonna take a break and maybe post eppy 21 by Monday. This does not mean that I quit, this means that I want to take a break for the next 5 days. So long.........

P.S. Take a look at the future of my eppy's as well. It's all in the first page. Now I gotta go Celebrate at "Taco Bell". Dinner is on MT!

Signomi
September 14th, 2005, 11:46 AM
Hmm..interesting ^_^ Can't wait till you update again MT.

Karasuma
September 18th, 2005, 04:56 AM
I've partied this week too much but today I've finished eppy 21 which means I'm starting Season 3 WOOT, WOOT! Make sure you check it ;)

Newten5
September 18th, 2005, 05:44 AM
Pretty good comic! Its similar to the original anime story while having its own twists at the same time ^_^ I like it :P

~Newten5

The Dash
September 18th, 2005, 10:47 AM
Looking good MT :)
(post to short :o)

jc_rcw
September 22nd, 2005, 12:57 PM
WOOT,WOOT keep it up your doing great.

Karasuma
September 22nd, 2005, 01:00 PM
I need help though. I want to put some new trainers in my comic so anybody can help.

jc_rcw
September 22nd, 2005, 01:09 PM
YYESSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!here its JChttp://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b345/jc_rcw/sprites/juan.jpg no glasses
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b345/jc_rcw/sprites/juanw.jpg glasses

Karasuma
September 22nd, 2005, 01:11 PM
Thanks. Would you like to be a gym leader, A rival of ash or ordinary trainer?

P.S. I need overworld sprites of him as well.

jc_rcw
September 22nd, 2005, 01:12 PM
Darn I don't know what but I think I have the over world

EDIT:herehttp://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b345/jc_rcw/sprites/overworld.jpg

Karasuma
September 22nd, 2005, 01:13 PM
Thanks I need overworld sprites to make him move.

jc_rcw
September 22nd, 2005, 01:15 PM
It looks messed up I don't know why.

EDIT: I think this one looks betterhttp://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b345/jc_rcw/sprites/overworld.gif

Karasuma
September 22nd, 2005, 01:16 PM
I don't care, I can fix it if it looks terrible.

Tody
September 24th, 2005, 02:15 AM
When will the next comic episode come out? Im dying to know

jc_rcw
September 24th, 2005, 05:56 AM
I think you should give him some time, it takes time to make them.

Karasuma
September 24th, 2005, 06:00 AM
I think you should give him some time, it takes time to make them.

Yes, thanks with school itr's tough to make another and making one isn't a piece of cake. I'm almost done with eppy 22.

jc_rcw
September 24th, 2005, 06:02 AM
Well those are some very good news

Karasuma
September 24th, 2005, 06:03 AM
But people I want some new characrers in this season. not that much like adams I just want up to 3 more trainers.

jc_rcw
September 24th, 2005, 06:15 AM
I have the sprites but theover world take too much time to do.

Karasuma
September 24th, 2005, 08:23 AM
No prob.

Anyway, new eppy is up. not a good one though.

jc_rcw
September 24th, 2005, 08:27 AM
What do you mean its really good:D

Karasuma
September 24th, 2005, 08:28 AM
I said it's not a good one you silly sally

jc_rcw
September 24th, 2005, 08:32 AM
LOL silly sally, anyways are you planing on doing any episode any time soon?

Karasuma
September 24th, 2005, 08:33 AM
LOL silly sally, anyways are you planing on doing any episode any time soon?

I just did eppy 22, see it please.

The Dash
September 24th, 2005, 08:34 AM
Nice stuff MT. Looking forward to the next eppy :)

Karasuma
September 24th, 2005, 08:35 AM
Thanks. Eppy 23 will be posted later this day.

Adam_148
September 24th, 2005, 08:36 AM
can I be in, I like Ash have Mew following me, I go with Ash on the Adventure
Here:http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a220/adam148/mynewspritesheet.png

Karasuma
September 24th, 2005, 08:38 AM
I will. Now I need one more trainer. I don't want to have much.

Tody
September 24th, 2005, 01:37 PM
I think you should give him some time, it takes time to make them.
Sorry. I didnt mean like that. its just that this is the best pokecomic i have ever seen

Karasuma
September 24th, 2005, 01:46 PM
Sorry. I didnt mean like that. its just that this is the best pokecomic i have ever seen

Really? I made it like the series? it's not supposed to be cool. :badsmile:

Adam_148
September 25th, 2005, 03:43 AM
i've got one more trainer:http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a220/adam148/NewCharacterdevelopment.png Use Holly, She's my twin sister, no one knows what pokemon she has, except Togepi

Linoone
September 25th, 2005, 01:28 PM
remember, you're doing very good, continue, and follow my advice from the last time. *faints*

Titanium
September 28th, 2005, 12:50 PM
Hey bro I just want to tell you that this comic rules.

Karasuma
September 28th, 2005, 06:58 PM
Well gee thanks. I'll have new eppys friday or maybe Saturday.

Titanium
September 28th, 2005, 07:03 PM
Hey hows that Bathroom saga thing going on?

Karasuma
September 28th, 2005, 07:06 PM
Well it's going pretty well. I must admit that I'm getting better at making SC's.

Titanium
September 28th, 2005, 07:09 PM
Yes I can see. I really love your comics. I think they are the best in this forum.

Karasuma
September 28th, 2005, 07:10 PM
Well they are made up. I mostly made them from the Pokemon Series. But with a little twist.

To be honest I think that my friends comics "Signomi" is the best one in all of the forums. She's the reason I'm still doing this job.

If you see this signomi I want to Thank You

Titanium
September 28th, 2005, 07:12 PM
Say, why did you called it PokeUniverse? Your thread and title?

Karasuma
September 28th, 2005, 07:17 PM
Hmmmm.....now theres a question I haven't been asked. well, the reason that I called it PokeUniverse is because I plan to do all regions in my SC's. that includes the orange islands, johto, hoenn, maybe batlle frontier, and Orre if it's possible. the meaning Universe is how I make all the SC's of all regions. I plan on making the first movie: Mewtwo strikes back as well. I can't wait till I do it,. I want to make it cool. very cool.

Titanium
September 28th, 2005, 07:19 PM
Wow! Such powerful words from a great spriter. Who thinks MT is doing a great job? I know he's doing well. I give this comic a famous 10/10 for having such action.

Karasuma
September 29th, 2005, 03:54 AM
Well gee thanks. I hope that I can keep on going. I seem to be slacking off.

Titanium
September 29th, 2005, 03:57 AM
Nah, I see that your doing a great job. your comic is all about action and you don't seem to put that much romance. but other than that this comic is kewl.

Karasuma
September 29th, 2005, 08:22 AM
Other than the Misty with her boyfriend nuting else.

Titanium
September 29th, 2005, 08:23 AM
That was a very funny part. I really liked it. The car was cool. how the hech did you get it?

Karasuma
September 29th, 2005, 12:43 PM
In the spiters lounge section. Thats where I get all my sprites.

Titanium
September 29th, 2005, 02:27 PM
cAN YOU LIKE GIVE ME A LINK?

Supreme Edgeboy Max
September 29th, 2005, 10:57 PM
Wow, this one is pretty good. Nice work, I'll be watching for updates.

Eon-Rider
September 30th, 2005, 03:09 AM
Great comics! I can't wait to see him get a Squirtle!

Titanium
September 30th, 2005, 06:01 AM
So tell us MT, will he be getting a squirtle?

Karasuma
September 30th, 2005, 06:03 AM
Well yes. It'll be different so I'll give you a little info on the next eppy: A red Rocket tells the squirtle squad to get ash's Pikachu. There ash has to fight a rocket.

Titanium
September 30th, 2005, 06:05 AM
Cool. And how the heck are you gonna do the S.S. anne eppys? Will you even do even the S.S. anne eppys.

Karasuma
September 30th, 2005, 06:07 AM
Well yes I will be doing the saint anne episdes. That will be one of the coolest eppys cause I plan to do up to 10 eppys of them stuck in the saint anne while they're in the bottom of the ocean. It's going to be cool.

Titanium
September 30th, 2005, 06:08 AM
Yes. that I can see that'll be cool. Keep on doing and don't give up.

Supreme Edgeboy Max
September 30th, 2005, 06:12 AM
ST Anne? Good luck on it! I just wanna see some more of the gym battles.

Karasuma
September 30th, 2005, 06:14 AM
No need to worry. I will make the gym battle of Vermilion city cool as well. I'll have the next eppy today so make sure your here, okay?

Supreme Edgeboy Max
September 30th, 2005, 06:24 AM
^^ I'm looking forward to it!

Celebi22
September 30th, 2005, 07:01 AM
Nice Comic! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Karasuma
September 30th, 2005, 07:06 AM
Well I'll post two new ones today so be sure to see them

Supreme Edgeboy Max
September 30th, 2005, 07:15 AM
Awright! New episodes! Go for it, I'm waiting!

*has read ALL posted of them already*

Karasuma
September 30th, 2005, 07:16 AM
All right just give me five minutes to post the two.

Supreme Edgeboy Max
September 30th, 2005, 07:28 AM
YES!! NEW EPISODES!! *does a commercial*

The PokeUniverse is different than the real thing. *Ash and Misty shown running after eachother* And so different, its completely different! *Brock shown running AWAY from girls* Watch the completely different Pokemon Universe!! All new episodes on 30th September! Monday to Friday, 25:61 CM, only on Animax!

Karasuma
September 30th, 2005, 07:32 AM
okay eppy 23 is up and running. eppy 24 had a problem so I'll fix it and post it later.

Supreme Edgeboy Max
September 30th, 2005, 07:36 AM
Meh okay. I'm off to read it, hoping my connection can still load that image quickly.

Titanium
September 30th, 2005, 07:51 AM
Dude this eppy rocks. Can't wait till you do ss ane.

Mail Jeevas
September 30th, 2005, 08:30 AM
Nice comic buddy/brother/Amigo/Hermano/whatever!

Hey you are following the series (First season) don't you? Then why don't you make somethings that were'nt in the series such as new pokemons I mean that you only see not that you catch them... its just an adviece


ELGONZO!!!

Titanium
September 30th, 2005, 08:32 AM
Hey can I have that super saiyan venusaur?

jc_rcw
September 30th, 2005, 04:18 PM
Hey nice new eppys MT keep it up.

Jordan
September 30th, 2005, 06:11 PM
Awesome episodes MysticTrunks. Keep it up.

Karasuma
September 30th, 2005, 06:25 PM
I've been here for a month so I must celebrate now, Woot Woot! :D

Supreme Edgeboy Max
October 1st, 2005, 01:09 AM
Meh, an entire month and sooo many posts? Good job MT!

Tody
October 1st, 2005, 03:05 AM
Could you make it, so that Ash meets his other two rivals? The ones that got Bulbasaur and Charmander from prof Oak

Supreme Edgeboy Max
October 1st, 2005, 03:18 AM
Meh, yeah, that's a nice idea. Go for it MT.

Titanium
October 1st, 2005, 05:50 AM
Could you make it, so that Ash meets his other two rivals? The ones that got Bulbasaur and Charmander from prof Oak

Didn't you hear him Moron he's making the comics like the real show!!!!!!!

Karasuma
October 1st, 2005, 09:25 AM
Okay no flamming. So I will the next eppy up? Should I quit?

Adam_148
October 1st, 2005, 09:27 AM
Mystic Trunks, you are not quitting we've been through this once you are not doing it again

Karasuma
October 1st, 2005, 09:29 AM
Mystic Trunks, you are not quitting we've been through this once you are not doing it again

No,no....I mean should I ban that guy that has been spamming up top.

Crystal Walrus
October 1st, 2005, 09:32 AM
whell i give this thread a 4 for it is too much like the tv show but its good for the people
who dont watch it like me
the 4 means 4 out of 5

Adam_148
October 1st, 2005, 09:34 AM
you mean Ultimate Spriter? Is he da one spamming

Karasuma
October 1st, 2005, 04:31 PM
Okay, whats better than one eppy? two eppys! Make sure you see them

Smarties-chan
October 2nd, 2005, 12:44 AM
I don't know why I didn't see this thread earlier, but I know your comic rocks keep at it =)

Tody
October 2nd, 2005, 01:06 AM
Didn't you hear him Moron he's making the comics like the real show!!!!!!!

Thank you for the nice words. I was just meaning that he has allready made some tweaks in the storyline (good ones), and this is something that i realy missed in the real show.

Supreme Edgeboy Max
October 2nd, 2005, 03:06 AM
I've reported that post, no problem. Well, its HIS sprite comic, and he can do it however he wants. We're suggesting, not calling names. I could call you something weird right now. ^^; Now, please get back to topic.

Karasuma
October 2nd, 2005, 03:35 AM
Yes thanks for helping. I may post another eppy right now. but I don't know?

Supreme Edgeboy Max
October 2nd, 2005, 03:37 AM
Please do, I need something to do as well, I'm bored. ^^;

Karasuma
October 2nd, 2005, 03:44 AM
I can't resist my fans, but okay I will.^^

Supreme Edgeboy Max
October 2nd, 2005, 03:50 AM
YES!! *replays commercial*

Meh well, at least tell me what's gonna happen in it. I know kind of.. but yeah.

Karasuma
October 2nd, 2005, 03:54 AM
Okay I tell: Pikachu goes to the Pokemon Center cause he gets injured badly and Ash almost tries to evove Pikachu with a thunderstone. After that Pikachu goes to fight surge again and finally win. After that the gang decide to go on a cruise so they get on a ship and you finally see Team Rockets Jesse and James and also Meowth but he don't talk. Nice huh^^

Supreme Edgeboy Max
October 2nd, 2005, 03:58 AM
Meh.. do some changes in story man.. its too too same. =(

Karasuma
October 2nd, 2005, 04:04 AM
Well in the ship I make some changes cause Ash catches a krabby and Misty has to fight Team Rocket all by herself. Heck he even sees Ho-oh there. So thats some changes. The reason I did this is cause I like the show and I'm doing it as a comic sprite^^ no offense^^

O
October 2nd, 2005, 04:08 AM
I can see it is heavily influenced by the anime with a few twists. It's ok, I like it so far.

Karasuma
October 2nd, 2005, 04:13 AM
Yeah. Just a little bit of twists. But I'll make more twists. That's why I can wait to do the Silph Co. Saga. Its 20 eppys of Ash fighting every single Rocket on the building that has 12 floors^^

Supreme Edgeboy Max
October 2nd, 2005, 04:19 AM
NO! TOO LONG! Shorten it. We all know he goes up the stairs and through the warps, but eh... too long if you make 20 episodes.

Karasuma
October 2nd, 2005, 04:24 AM
Not like that. Ash brock and Misty separate and they all yake different floors. I won't use the warp things. I'll be only prtting 20 Rockets on each floor. and yes, Gary also helps out in thw fight with Giovanni. I plan to make this fiht cool cause I'll make him use Mewtwo!

Supreme Edgeboy Max
October 2nd, 2005, 04:33 AM
SWEET! A MEWTWO!! Make it high with some special effects aright?

Karasuma
October 2nd, 2005, 04:38 AM
Sure I'll make that battle super sweet. Ash wont be able to beat mewtwo so Giovanni wins, but not that easy. This fight may be like 3 to 6 eppys. don't know.

Signomi
October 2nd, 2005, 04:40 AM
Well I see you're doing quite the planning MT =3 Remember, things are easier said than done. Good luck!

Karasuma
October 2nd, 2005, 04:42 AM
Hey for the fight can I use the mewtwos that you used signomi?^^

Signomi
October 2nd, 2005, 04:43 AM
Ofcourse MT! ^.^ If you need more little Mewtwo sketches don't hesitate to ask me ^^ Mewtwo is fun to draw.

Karasuma
October 2nd, 2005, 04:46 AM
I just want that battle pose that you did when he was facing deoxys.^^

Signomi
October 2nd, 2005, 04:47 AM
What? So you want all three of them? XD

Karasuma
October 2nd, 2005, 04:48 AM
Don't really know...can you show me some?

Signomi
October 2nd, 2005, 04:56 AM
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/4008/mewtwosketches6tm.gif

Well what other ones are there? ^^

Karasuma
October 2nd, 2005, 04:58 AM
No this is perfect^^ These are all that I need now. Thanks so much^^

Signomi
October 2nd, 2005, 05:02 AM
No problem ^^ Glad to be of help.

Karasuma
October 2nd, 2005, 05:04 AM
Can't wait to make that eppy. Meanwhile I'll throw in a new eppy maybe in the next hour^^

Supreme Edgeboy Max
October 2nd, 2005, 06:12 AM
Oh my god, now that's some awesome artwork. Excellent job Signomi!

EPPY IN AN HOUR! *dies*

Karasuma
October 2nd, 2005, 07:03 AM
Okay I putted a new eppy now. 3 eppys that are new. what more can you ask?^^,

Supreme Edgeboy Max
October 2nd, 2005, 07:06 AM
Another eppy? No that's rushing you.

Meh, put in some funny stuff, make Ash fall two storeys down or something. ^^;

Titanium
October 2nd, 2005, 07:11 AM
Dude your eppys rock!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I got something for you
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/9932/ag100ugoku84zr.gif
LOL

Supreme Edgeboy Max
October 2nd, 2005, 07:18 AM
Spam. *reports*

Meh, why am I doing all these reports, and nobody else?

Titanium
October 2nd, 2005, 07:21 AM
Spam? Lol thats so funny.

Smarties-chan
October 2nd, 2005, 07:21 AM
Mystic trunks that's brilliant, I love it how you remake the anime, keep the eppys coming.

Karasuma
October 2nd, 2005, 07:30 AM
well gee thanks. glad you like it^^

Supreme Edgeboy Max
October 2nd, 2005, 07:33 AM
OKAY! I'M SO GETTING SOMEONE TO KILL YOU! *dies*

Meh... please.... let the kid post his comics....

Supreme Edgeboy Max
October 2nd, 2005, 07:36 AM
Oh... I'm sorry Trunks, but that's spam too. *dies* Lets see if Cowrie does something to this thread, or else I'm reporting again.

Sylphiel
October 2nd, 2005, 07:43 AM
Spam? Lol thats so funny.
It's not very funny to me.

Stop with the off-topic posts (and this goes for everybody, really, as I do see it from more than one person). If you have nothing to say about the comic itself, then refrain from posting in the thread.

(Oh, and I'm not doing anything to this thread yet, except for this...but please don't continue with the spam, or it might get closed.)

Karasuma
October 2nd, 2005, 07:44 AM
Okay. Please people don't spam I want to continue. That goes for you UltimateS. So I'll be putting a new eppy this afternoon.

Alex_
October 2nd, 2005, 07:45 AM
It's not very funny to me.

Stop with the off-topic posts (and this goes for everybody, really, as I do see it from more than one person). If you have nothing to say about the comic itself, then refrain from posting in the thread.

(Oh, and I'm not doing anything to this thread yet, except for this...but please don't continue with the spam, or it might get closed.)
...In other words,this is this threads first and final warning.

Supreme Edgeboy Max
October 2nd, 2005, 07:48 AM
Thank you..

Well, its good. Now lets continue then. When are you putting up your next episode Trunks?

Karasuma
October 2nd, 2005, 07:50 AM
yes thanks.

My next eppy? Maybe at 1:00 my time or maybe now.

Supreme Edgeboy Max
October 2nd, 2005, 07:55 AM
That's going to be.... well... its only around 10pm here. Oh well..

Karasuma
October 2nd, 2005, 07:57 AM
You must live on the other side. Maybe I'll post it now...maybe.

Supreme Edgeboy Max
October 2nd, 2005, 08:06 AM
Meh, oh well, I'm going offline for the day. I'll come and check it out tomorrow.

Karasuma
October 2nd, 2005, 08:09 AM
allright. see you tomorrow.

Mail Jeevas
October 2nd, 2005, 08:55 AM
Hey MT nice eppy really! I like how you turned the anime into a SC. But it would be a lot great if some of the attacks were animations. like example you make Pikachu to use thunder shock and you make the battle screen a gif so you can see clearly how it looks like, but if you do that you'll have to make all the strip a gif. Just a piece of advice... Don't listen to me, I'm drunk! hahahahah just kidding do as you want to MT.
Bye!


ELGONZO!!!

Karasuma
October 2nd, 2005, 01:55 PM
Thanks I will put a new one tomorrow.

Ocean_sunset
October 2nd, 2005, 06:18 PM
Geez,those are really good.O_o
but may I suggest something?
Maybe you could let the villians win once?
Too make it more like reality,good guys don't always win.
But no offense,I do enjoy your comics!They're nicely done.
I hope you continue and wish you best of luck!^_^

Karasuma
October 2nd, 2005, 06:22 PM
In the S.S. Anne team Rockets jesse and james win. And When ash fights Giovanni he wins using mewtwo.

Supreme Edgeboy Max
October 3rd, 2005, 02:43 AM
Meh, thats just fine. Its nice to see Team Rocket blasting off again.

Eon-Rider
October 3rd, 2005, 09:45 AM
I enjoy reading your comics. I can't wait for the next!

Smarties-chan
October 3rd, 2005, 09:50 AM
I really can't wait for the SS.Anne episodes, so when do you think the next part will be up MT? (Please note that I am not rushing you, I just want to know when the next part will be up)

Esupio
October 3rd, 2005, 10:31 AM
Spam? Lol thats so funny.
its stolen aswell


Blazin Espio's review:

Plot:
No originality, taken from the show: 0/10

Characters:
Ash,misty and brock taken from the show: 2/10

Sprites:
did you make these from what i've seen from you I'd say no and I don't see credit. Though they are good quality: 3/10

Other: Theres nothing really special about and theres nothing good.

0+2+3= the average of 3/10
and it isn't added up like 2+2 so
you lose

Karasuma
October 3rd, 2005, 11:26 AM
Thanks Coolmaster and Smarty arty. Those were nice comments. I'll put more eppys up later this week.^^

Oh and BE....Umm...you suck.

Esupio
October 3rd, 2005, 11:56 AM
I'm re writing it as we speak :P and thanks for the compliment

Karasuma
October 3rd, 2005, 12:30 PM
Sure no problem. Just Peace dude. Anyway I'll put more eppys later this week. maybe one today, but well see.

Signomi
October 3rd, 2005, 12:35 PM
Just to clear things up. I believe the Brock, Jessie, James and Meowth sprites are from Pokesho.com.

Karasuma
October 3rd, 2005, 12:40 PM
Just to clear things up. I believe the Brock, Jessie, James and Meowth sprites are from Pokesho.com.

Yes they are. That why I'm giving credits now in my first page. People will now see that I'm giving credits.

The Vince Knight
October 3rd, 2005, 06:02 PM
Hey These comics are the best I've ever seen! Well One of the best. KEEP IT UP!

Supreme Edgeboy Max
October 4th, 2005, 01:19 AM
Meh, that was rude. ~_~; Oh well, some guys can't appreciate un-originality.

Well, PokeSho's almost the best place for most sprites, I usually would get most of my Pokemon sprites from there.

adwajr
October 4th, 2005, 11:08 AM
This is a good comic.
I see you are making it from the Pokemon on the TV. :14:

Karasuma
October 4th, 2005, 11:33 AM
Thanks for the compliment. And yes I'm making a comic about the TV series but I may change the story later in the future by putting some Johto Pokemon.

Esupio
October 4th, 2005, 11:48 AM
I just picked a random eppy okay

AND WHAT THE HECK ARE MY POKEMON OVERWORLD SPRITES DOING THERE DID YOU ASK ME DID YOU CREDIT ME NO

Karasuma
October 4th, 2005, 11:51 AM
I just picked a random eppy okay

AND WHAT THE HECK ARE MY POKEMON OVERWORLD SPRITES DOING THERE DID YOU ASK ME DID YOU CREDIT ME NO

Whoops. My bad. I knew I forgot about someone. Don't get mad, get glad^^. I'll give you credit ASAp. Besides I only used your sprite for two eppys and no more.

Supreme Edgeboy Max
October 5th, 2005, 01:47 AM
^^; Yeah. Being put in a sprite comic is fun! Don't get shouting.

Its going good so far, MT. Keep going.

Esupio
October 5th, 2005, 11:02 AM
not when your sprites
have been taken without permission,
you spelt my name wrong

Karasuma
October 6th, 2005, 04:10 AM
Whoops sorry dude. I'll fix it right away.

jc_rcw
October 6th, 2005, 12:00 PM
Hey MT they look awesome keep it up.

Karasuma
October 6th, 2005, 12:04 PM
Hey MT they look awesome keep it up.

Well gee thanks dude. They are awesome. I'm almost doing the S.S. Anne epipys and they'll be the best. And I cant wait to make Mewtwo.

Supreme Edgeboy Max
October 6th, 2005, 09:13 PM
Hey, when's the next epi going to be on? I can't wait! Its much better reading the episodes like this, than watching one boring episode on TV for half an hour. =P

Celebi22
October 6th, 2005, 10:21 PM
Nice Comic once again! Can't wait for the next eppy! :D

Swizzler121
October 6th, 2005, 10:30 PM
They are very well made, i'll give you props for that, but you should let it change and gradually carry it away from the show plot, Cause I've already predicted everything that will happen, But awsome graphics ^_^

Eon-Rider
October 7th, 2005, 03:22 AM
So... when are the next ones going to be ready?

Karasuma
October 7th, 2005, 03:32 AM
Later today. And Saturday as well.

Celebi22
October 7th, 2005, 08:27 AM
I am waitin' for more of your eppys.They are really nice!

Karasuma
October 7th, 2005, 12:09 PM
Okay they'll be done at 4 o clock my time.

Smarties-chan
October 7th, 2005, 12:31 PM
How many episodes will you be putting up?