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TheOnly
August 31st, 2005, 02:00 PM
NotSoCommon Productions Presents:

http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/2415/diamondandpearl6dk.png

The Story:

Brendan and his friend, Juno (CREDIT TO Adamski for the sprite) go out on a journey what they hope is to get a few pokemon. What they got was tough times. Trying to save the wrodl from being destroyed they had to fight and fight to the end of times.

The Comic:

The Intro:

http://img68.imageshack.us/img68/5476/animation13dx.gif

Chapter 1:

1-1 (http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/1980/116ta.png)
1-2 (http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/8577/122rf.png)
1-3 (http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/5705/134xe.png)

Extra:

Other:

The title screen will be the only one up like that the rest will be hyperlinked.

Fox♠
August 31st, 2005, 02:35 PM
the thing is this comic is already doomed, you can't make a comic based on games in developement, you have no idea about the region, the towns, the gym leaders etc...all you have are 5 new pokemon to base this whole comic on

TheOnly
August 31st, 2005, 02:43 PM
im making my own pokemon, im using the name for a pokemon that i made and it needs to be in Diamond/Pearl game. I know i know nothing it is Kanto for the region. And the gym leaders will be from Kanto. And even the elite four will be new though. You will see.

Fox♠
September 1st, 2005, 12:38 AM
But you can't seriously make a comic about the 2 upcomming games ad chaange it....that's like sticking pacifalodge town smack bam where pallet is on FR/LG...you don't seem to understand.

Adam_148
September 1st, 2005, 12:39 AM
You stole my overworld character the guy who says yeah squirtle, I'm reporting this
*Reports*

Fox♠
September 1st, 2005, 12:49 AM
that's just low .
why did you call it diamond and pearl if it's in fricken kanto?

I'll back you up Adam, but one report is enough

Datriot
September 1st, 2005, 02:01 AM
well, I suppose you shouldn't steal peoples stuff and you shouldn't name is D/P if it's in Kanto......

TheOnly
September 1st, 2005, 03:09 AM
NotSoCommon Productions Presents:

http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/2415/diamondandpearl6dk.png

The Story:

Brendan and his friend, Juno (I do not take credit for sprite) go out on a journey what they hope is to get a few pokemon. What they got was tough times. Trying to save the wrodl from being destroyed they had to fight and fight to the end of times.

The Comic:

The Intro:

http://img68.imageshack.us/img68/5476/animation13dx.gif

Chapter 1:

1-1 (http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/1980/116ta.png)


Extra:

Other:

The title screen will be the only one up like that the rest will be hyperlinked.


Please read this and if you wanna come at me some more fine i dont care. I will still post this comic to prove you all wrong.

Tsukasa
September 1st, 2005, 03:11 AM
Alright everyone you should stop bashing him ^^;; give him a chance,and vatti already saying his comic is doomed isnt going to help.You should be giving support and ways to tell him to fix it.I understand about Adamski and yea it is wrong,you should get premission and give credit where credit is due

Signomi
September 1st, 2005, 03:11 AM
But you didn't /ask/ permission to use Adamski's sprite first and you didn't state that the sprite was his anyway.

Adam_148
September 1st, 2005, 03:12 AM
It's not about the comic it's just you didn't ask to use it, that's just as low

TheOnly
September 1st, 2005, 03:20 AM
There i put up credits to adamski yes he did say i could use it.

1-2 up today!

The Dash
September 1st, 2005, 07:30 AM
I think Adam knows who he gave permission to and who he dident a bit better than you do. Dont take other peoples thigns without their permission!

Adam_148
September 1st, 2005, 07:33 AM
don't worry I did give him permission stop being all suspective

The Dash
September 1st, 2005, 07:40 AM
Ok, *shifty eyes* (Message too short :p)

EDIT by FG: Dashiel, please don't try to evade the text limit :) I'm sure you can think of something else to add to the topic. ^^

Umbreon's Shadow
September 1st, 2005, 08:52 AM
Vaati is actually right.You shouldnt make a comic about something you dont really know how it is.And you should make text boxes.It can be hard to read the text.And i dont really get the comic much and the story isnt good.Theres more than 1000(...)comics with that story out there.2/10

TheOnly
September 1st, 2005, 10:36 AM
ok thanks for the impute. like responses good or bad.


EDIT: The extra long 1-2 is up.

Fox♠
September 2nd, 2005, 06:29 AM
Alright everyone you should stop bashing him ^^;; give him a chance,and vatti already saying his comic is doomed isnt going to help.You should be giving support and ways to tell him to fix it.I understand about Adamski and yea it is wrong,you should get premission and give credit where credit is due
it's spelt vaati, v-a-A(not T)-T-I

why do you people never spell my name right....

Signomi
September 2nd, 2005, 06:43 AM
Lack of attention span ne?

She should do up the comic layout a bit, just to make it a bit neater. And change that aqua...it looks horrid

Jarman
September 2nd, 2005, 10:35 AM
The squirtle guy's text is hard to read, and it's not "extra-long." It's just longer than your first one, mostly because of some animation panels which are OK. And the name doesn't seem to fit the comic and it's not funny.

TheOnly
September 2nd, 2005, 11:50 AM
1. never said it was funny
2. i will change the text color
3. it has the name for a reason it is onyl 2 parts in.
4. this comic might have SOME funny parts. not alot.

Jarman
September 2nd, 2005, 11:59 AM
1. You never said it wasn't either.
2. Good.
3. Then why is it called "Pokemon Diamond and Pearl THE COMIC?
4. OK.

Arcanine Fan 101
September 2nd, 2005, 12:00 PM
It looks quite nice in my dearest opioin.

TheOnly
September 2nd, 2005, 12:08 PM
youll see later in the comic.