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PrinceOfDarkness
September 3rd, 2005, 11:21 AM
Now this is a horrible sprite comic made by me, so please make as many crits as you would like XD I really can't accept comments cause I'm a newbie to sprite comics >>

http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/2172/stupidspritecomic4zx.png
^ my stupid sprite comic featuring Master Cheif, Leon (from Kingdom Hearts), Frieza, some Megaman guy and this girl Master Cheif is obsessed with XD

AI O.O I made a mistake on it "as" is suppose to be "has"

Signomi
September 3rd, 2005, 11:24 AM
You want a crit? o.O Ok..

-looks at comic-...AHH! MY EYES!...MY EYES! Your comic BLINDS my eyes! x.x;

That ok? XD

Karasuma
September 3rd, 2005, 11:27 AM
You remind me at how I started. Don't worry, you'll get better.

PrinceOfDarkness
September 3rd, 2005, 01:52 PM
Thank you Signomi XD *hugs you* XD nice crit, it made me feel good XD

MysticTrunks o.O I guarentee I will never get better at Sprite Comics, ever >>

Allstories
September 3rd, 2005, 02:14 PM
It is a horrible sprite comic made by you.

PrinceOfDarkness
September 3rd, 2005, 02:21 PM
see, thank you, I confirm/agree, I thought that sprite comic looked horrible

but the way you said it sounded like an insult XD

It is a horrible sprite comic made by you.
^ makes it sound like your trying to call me horrible XD^

Lucy Lu
September 3rd, 2005, 02:26 PM
Aww...it is very good. It is funny. ^___^

Allstories
September 3rd, 2005, 02:31 PM
see, thank you, I confirm/agree, I thought that sprite comic looked horrible

but the way you said it sounded like an insult XD


^ makes it sound like your trying to call me horrible XD^

I just said what you yourself acknowledged. Quit being so negative. Quit wasting our time and pull off something that YOU'RE content with. Because if you don't like it, why should we?

Gohan
September 3rd, 2005, 02:43 PM
Shuttup Allstories. He knows its pretty bad and you'll just make things much worse. You know, from all of your criticism, I've never seen a sprite comic from YOU.
Good job, LunaticJohnny. It might be bad, but I'm sure it will get better. Much better. Only thing I might suggest is a background? Yours is okay but, everything looks warped to me.

armadilloHD
September 3rd, 2005, 02:45 PM
You know, from all of your criticism, I've never seen a sprite comic from YOU.
Doesn't mean he doesn't know how to make one right ;>>

Gohan
September 3rd, 2005, 03:03 PM
Yeah, doesn't mean he doesn't know how to make one, but it seems like he's a hypocrit, telling others, when he doesn't have a comic. At least they've taken the time to try and think up a bit of a plot and put it together.

PrinceOfDarkness
September 3rd, 2005, 03:57 PM
please, don't argue in my thread XD I want it to live just a couple more posts =3 I know it'll die in a day or two >> XD

Jarman
September 3rd, 2005, 04:30 PM
Yeah, doesn't mean he doesn't know how to make one, but it seems like he's a hypocrit, telling others, when he doesn't have a comic. At least they've taken the time to try and think up a bit of a plot and put it together.

You don't have to do something to know the rules of it.

And the text bubbles are horrible. They should be filled.