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Tsukasa
September 4th, 2005, 01:13 AM
Yes yes i know another sprite comic by me,though the others one have failed(and need to be closed)i neverthought they would make it anyways but i acutally put alot of time into this one and this is a comic i got a good feel for,such as im going to stick doing this well here it is comments,reviews,anything is accepted

Sprites credit goes to Serebii.net Overworld Archive Thread
BackSprite of Gold done by me
Credit goes to Sprites Resources for the mapping.

Plot/Character(s) Updated (http://filehost.to/files/2005-09-17_02/105752_Spirte_comic3.png)

Page One (http://filehost.to/files/2005-09-04_02/111058_Sprite_one.png)
Page Two (http://filehost.to/files/2005-09-04_02/111224_Sprite_f.png)
Page Three (http://filehost.to/files/2005-09-07_01/032529_Gold_comic.png)
Page Four (http://filehost.to/files/2005-09-07_01/032819_Gold_comic_2.png)
Page Five (http://filehost.to/files/2005-09-17_02/110241_comic.png)
Page Six (http://filehost.to/files/2005-09-17_02/110628_un.png)
Page Seven (http://filehost.to/files/2005-09-17_02/110846_PKMN_SPrite.png)
Page Eight (http://filehost.to/files/2005-09-17_02/111202_Psritte.png)
Also If you want to be in the comic fill this out
Name:
Sprite sheet:
Pokemon: (Max 4 for now)

Adam_148
September 4th, 2005, 01:28 AM
This is good, this has a lot of potential, keep going and this will become really good

Smarties-chan
September 4th, 2005, 03:51 AM
This looks promising can I join?
Name: Kaguro
Sheet: http://img385.imageshack.us/img385/4734/kagurosspritesheet8qz.png
Pokemon:
Totodile
Surf
Hidden power (it's ground type)
Slash
Scary face

Sudowoodo
Counter
Rock slide
Earthquake
Low kick

Shuckle
Sludge bomb
Earthquake
Rockslide
Rest

Dunsparce
Counter
Body slam
Rock slide
Shadow ball.

And if you don't mind I'd like to tell you a little about this character:
Little is known about this young pokemonmaster, she is very silent, but when she speaks people ought to listen because she never repeats what she says and she is cunning both in pokemon training and pokemon knowledge she has beaten 4 different pokeleagues and roams the lands seeking after strong trainers the only ones she speeks kindly to are her pokemon wich she treats with loving care her pokemon are ruthlessly strong and katsuro is known for going easy at the beggining and when her opponent gets over confident she strikes hard, her pokemon are trained to the extreme her totodile is known for being as strong as a feraligatr and her shuckle is the strongest of its kind.

Eon-Rider
September 4th, 2005, 03:55 AM
The text doesn't look very good all bunched up...
It is alright so far...

Jarman
September 4th, 2005, 10:03 AM
USE NORMAL SPEECH BUBBLES. You have no idea who's talking (usually if it's a minor character that is with a bunch of people that are similar to them, like rocket grunts) and it's for lazy people.

Tsukasa
September 6th, 2005, 05:29 PM
Alright page three and four are now up couldnt post for the last two days because i was at boxing practice,anyways there they are.

Alana
September 6th, 2005, 05:39 PM
I like this. ^_^ I hope you continue the good work. I may join but I don't have a sprite sheet so I might want to get one.

Jarman
September 7th, 2005, 12:45 PM
Use proper grammar and don't put a lot of black space in the comics.

Tsukasa
September 7th, 2005, 04:02 PM
Use proper grammar and don't put a lot of black space in the comics.
Jarman seriously STFU i really dont care for your opinion,you act like a SA too much

StarryLatiasGirl
September 8th, 2005, 01:41 PM
Hey, if it's not too much trouble, can I be in?

Name: Koji Dragoon

Sprites- Click Here (http://img360.imageshack.us/img360/4552/koji244kj.png)

Pokemon- Houndour/Houndoom aka "Pyra" (she has customized sprites)

Other- Other- A few years ago, he was captured by the Neo Rockets and infused with Rayquaza DNA. He now travels the country with his Houndour. He can turn into a low-level Rayquaza at will, but he still has his hair and goggles on his Pokemon form. He also can fly and use Fire, Ice, Electric, and Dragon attacks when he is in his Pokemon form. He dislikes large crowds, is good at making friends, and likes to tell jokes, but is pretty bad at doing so.

Hope I can be in!

~Ho-Oh

Jarman
September 8th, 2005, 02:49 PM
Jarman seriously STFU i really dont care for your opinion,you act like a SA too much

Who's SA? And if you don't care about people's opinions, don't post your comics.

Tsukasa
September 8th, 2005, 03:08 PM
Who's SA? And if you don't care about people's opinions, don't post your comics.
No dude its just you,you get on my **** nerves dont post in my threads

Karasuma
September 9th, 2005, 12:04 PM
No dude its just you,you get on my **** nerves dont post in my threads

Sukasa, Why do you always gotta be a F***** M*********** A******** we all like your threads but instead you curse at us. You even gave me a bad rep U ****** A**********!!!!!!!1 :badsmile:

Avatar
September 9th, 2005, 12:15 PM
No dude its just you,you get on my **** nerves dont post in my threads
When you post your sprite comics here, EVERYONE are allowed to post their opinion. Be it positive or negative.
You can't tell someone that they can't post in your thread because their opinion doesn't suit you.

Also, I'm surprised you haven't been caught by a mod yet for leaving out credit on the Gold sprite.

Karasuma
September 9th, 2005, 12:17 PM
When you post your sprite comics here, EVERYONE are allowed to post their opinion. Be it positive or negative.
You can't tell someone that they can't post in your thread because their opinion doesn't suit you.

Thanks Avatar, I knew somebody understood me.

Tsukasa
September 17th, 2005, 01:14 AM
When you post your sprite comics here, EVERYONE are allowed to post their opinion. Be it positive or negative.
You can't tell someone that they can't post in your thread because their opinion doesn't suit you.

Also, I'm surprised you haven't been caught by a mod yet for leaving out credit on the Gold sprite.
Yea i forgot to put credit,i was in a hurry to post the thread.

Hey, if it's not too much trouble, can I be in?

Name: Koji Dragoon

Sprites- Click Here (http://img360.imageshack.us/img360/4552/koji244kj.png)

Pokemon- Houndour/Houndoom aka "Pyra" (she has customized sprites)

Other- Other- A few years ago, he was captured by the Neo Rockets and infused with Rayquaza DNA. He now travels the country with his Houndour. He can turn into a low-level Rayquaza at will, but he still has his hair and goggles on his Pokemon form. He also can fly and use Fire, Ice, Electric, and Dragon attacks when he is in his Pokemon form. He dislikes large crowds, is good at making friends, and likes to tell jokes, but is pretty bad at doing so.

Hope I can be in!

~Ho-Oh
Yea im going to add you very soon,On a quick note page five,six,seven,and eight are up,the plot/character(s) has been updated also

Draik
September 17th, 2005, 04:12 AM
I hate this comic.
Your grammer sucks, usually people talk in normal capitalization.
There needs to be a space in between the colon and the words.
Your positioning is off, sprites are either on or off tiles.

Smarties-chan
September 20th, 2005, 07:45 AM
At the beggining I thought your comic was pretty good even with the bad grammar, but right now it just doesn't make any sense why the heck is there a house that looks like a museum in the middle of pallet town? It just doesn't make any sense, the battle scene is really messy first of all the hp thingy is always green and not being able to see the number of hp ticks me off too and I don't see any point in why red challenged gold and putting
Gold: or Red: to show who's speaking is a big no no, what do you have the colors for then? It looked pretty good at the beggining, but you ruined the comic I hope you're able to save it...

Esupio
September 20th, 2005, 07:51 AM
Jarman seriously STFU i really dont care for your opinion,you act like a SA too much
learn to take critisim dude your going over the top and maybe one day you'll flip out one last time

Smarties-chan
September 20th, 2005, 08:16 AM
Blazin Espio is right. If you want to make a good comic you should take other people's critisism and learn from it.

Alana
September 20th, 2005, 02:00 PM
Hey Tsukasa, I could help out on the grammer if you want. I'd like to make a comic some day and helping make one would be good practice. So, um, maybe I could help you out? ^_^

Jarman
September 20th, 2005, 03:27 PM
Hey Tsukasa, I could help out on the grammer if you want. I'd like to make a comic some day and helping make one would be good practice. So, um, maybe I could help you out? ^_^

Don't help him with grammar. He's 15, he should be able to use proper grammar without help.

Alex_
September 20th, 2005, 04:10 PM
MysticTrunks that was totally uncalled for. And you get a warning for it too. Everyone calm down or im closing this.

Smarties-chan
September 21st, 2005, 03:54 AM
Jarman you should remember that some countries have a very poor english education and maybe no one has thought him grammar.

Jarman
September 21st, 2005, 11:41 AM
Jarman you should remember that some countries have a very poor english education and maybe no one has thought him grammar.

Is he not from an English-speaking country?

Akio123
September 21st, 2005, 12:27 PM
Jarman, did you even listen to what Alex said? Listen Tsukasa made some bad grammatical choices in his comic. Big Deal! He will correct them for his next one. You could be a little nicer. I know you feel he did not have the best grammer, but I mean honestly, now you and some other people are just starting a flame war with each other over nothing.

Alana
September 21st, 2005, 01:10 PM
Yeah so cut it out.:17: I'd suggest, to prevent a flame war, that he be ignored. My grammer isn't the best either. I have a terrible time with commas though I am working on it. ^_^ :rambo:

Jarman
September 21st, 2005, 03:11 PM
Jarman, did you even listen to what Alex said? Listen Tsukasa made some bad grammatical choices in his comic. Big Deal! He will correct them for his next one. You could be a little nicer. I know you feel he did not have the best grammer, but I mean honestly, now you and some other people are just starting a flame war with each other over nothing.

I never said that he needed to go back and fix the errors, just that he shouldn't need help with grammar if he's 15. Unless he doesn't live in an English-speaking country.

Akio123
September 21st, 2005, 03:14 PM
Like Alana said, we should just compltely ignore that, anyway I love the basic plot.

Crystal Walrus
September 22nd, 2005, 08:37 AM
Can i join?
Name:KT
Sprite sheet:the one in my sig
Pokemon:Kygore salamance and entie

Celebi22
September 23rd, 2005, 05:03 AM
Hey! Can I join?

Name:Amna

Sprite Sheet:

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/2663/sprites9ci.png (http://imageshack.us)

Pokemon:

Raichu Lv.90 (Lum Berry)

Thunder
Rain Dance
Mega Kick
Rest

Typhlosion Lv.90

Thunderpunch
Flamethrower
Sunny Day
Earthquake

Blastoise Lv.90

Hydro Pump
Skull Bash
Rain Dance
Hydro Cannon

Mewtwo Lv.90

Phychic
Recover
Ice Beam
Solar Beam

Character:
Very Sensitive.She is the Pokemon Master of Johto and Kanto.She is pretty humourous when it comes to talking.She has a lot of knowledge about Pokemon.Her Raichu likes to walk around with her.

Hope I can join... :D

Tsukasa
September 24th, 2005, 01:42 PM
Well first of all i live in puerto rico and very few people speak english here, i know it was wrong that i didnt take criticism well but thats my personality,this being my third comic i was just trying to see if i could make one,seeing as this thread is a turning into a flame war or whatever and my comic sucks,it should be closed.

Karasuma
September 24th, 2005, 02:02 PM
Well first of all i live in puerto rico and very few people speak english here, i know it was wrong that i didnt take criticism well but thats my personality,this being my third comic i was just trying to see if i could make one,seeing as this thread is a turning into a flame war or whatever and my comic sucks,it should be closed.

Yes, I agree. This is not good so this sould get the Locky Locky :cool:

Akio123
September 24th, 2005, 06:26 PM
Yes, I agree. This is not good so this sould get the Locky Locky :cool:
MT, that was alittle rude of you don't you think?