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Jaybob
September 4th, 2005, 01:16 PM
Hi guys this is my comic called Pokemon Fever. It is a continuation to Signomis "Pokemon FR/LG continued". So here goes nothing


Part one (http://img156.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comic0lt.png)



Part Two (http://img370.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comic29xp.png)



Part Three (http://img102.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comic34dc.png)



Part Four (http://img80.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comic42xb.png)



Part Five (http://img35.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comic56tg.png)


Part siz (http://img221.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comic61ml.png)


Part seven (http://img239.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comic85ic.png)


Part Eight (http://img250.imageshack.us/img250/7278/comic92ib.png)



Ok well this is them so far... so can I have your comments and if you wanna be in here you have to gimme overworlds and sprites

Edit: Too see it in full size... clik on pic

Arcanine Fan 101
September 4th, 2005, 03:05 PM
Very nice job for a begginer I really like part 4.

Jarman
September 4th, 2005, 03:41 PM
The capes aren't very well made, there are no battle backgrounds and you use the lazy style of speech.

Jaybob
September 5th, 2005, 12:40 AM
the acpes are full black and i know they arent that good because i am not that good of a spriter in in my newer comics i do have backgrounds it's just there i didnt have one so...

Signomi
September 5th, 2005, 12:56 AM
I suppose it's alright ^^ Though you could've made the character designs a bit more accurate. Part two, Kris called Blue, Green was there instead o_O

Jaybob
September 5th, 2005, 01:08 AM
Doh *slaps.* Wanna be in the comic? and how are my villains goin sig?

Signomi
September 5th, 2005, 01:16 AM
They're OK. But they could be a bit more cockier. Join? Well, heh, don't mind if I do.

http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/4302/spritesheet5pt.gif

There's my sheet. I suppose that's all you're going to need.

Jaybob
September 5th, 2005, 01:18 AM
lol ok sure i'll put you in l8er ;) next eppy coming out soon

Sheepnut
September 5th, 2005, 01:34 AM
No offence ment but its rubbish i dont like it at all...

Karasuma
September 5th, 2005, 03:32 AM
Dude, You gotta do battle sprites. and show some more attacks.
Here, I give you myself. Make sure you make me Cool:
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a354/MysticTrunks/Ashadvanced.png
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a354/MysticTrunks/what.png

Fox♠
September 5th, 2005, 04:01 AM
No offence ment but its rubbish i dont like it at all...
you're supposed to tell him why you don't like it and why it fails IYO, sheesh do you not read the rules?...n00b

Jarman
September 5th, 2005, 05:03 AM
The most recent comic makes no sense. In the second to last panel, a Chansey is attacking a Mew that's covered by a bubble with an egg bomb, and in the next they're both gone and there's some silhouette of a guy in a yellow circle. This is another reason why the lazy style of text doesn't work at all.

And between those scenes, the 3 trainers at the northern part of the island magically switch places and the birds are no longer in front of them. Try to keep continuity in your comics.

Renagadez
September 5th, 2005, 05:09 AM
nice kinda looks like a mmorpg

Jaybob
September 11th, 2005, 08:14 AM
kool ty renegadez sorry bout the delay lol but i got skool again now i am gettin some soon but only adamski's in it at the moment