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~Mars~
September 9th, 2005, 12:40 PM
Hello! This is an idea of mine that I got off the warriors series. Ok so most of the credit should go to the author Erin Hunter, but it was my idea to make an RP about it!
Prolouge

In a far-off place where the trees stood tall and the hunting was plentiful there was utter silence, complete darkness. Suddenly there was light coming from all sides of a clearing. To a normal stander-by it would look like the angels of all sizes had come down from heaven to visit the living. Not here though. No these were the warrior ancestors of the great clans Thunder, River, Wind, and Shadow. After touching down the great spirits took form thousands maybe millions of cats were striding in to an area in a great burrow surrounded by four trees, Suddenly Four of the cats left the ranks of the heavenly spirits.

"Cats of Starclan, a great trouble is arising!” yowled one of the, apparently lead cats.
"Storm, Water, Wind, and Shadow" Meowed another.
"Soon plunge into another battle" Continued a third.
"Survival of this quarrel is thin" Said the last.
"Together, only can they win" finished the first.
The gathered cats stared at each other and gasped, and then turning their heads, mouth’s agape the first cat to speak continued.
"This prophecy must be fulfilled lest the destruction of our descendants’ clans turn to ruin. Deadfoot have you decided on one of you clan's cats to join?"
"Yes, Bluestar" the one called Deadfoot stepped up and replied. A gigantic basin filled with a silvery substance appeared before the semi-transparent pearly white cats.
"I Choose this one he meowed staring into the basin where a forms had appeared.
"Crookedstar you go next” meowed Bluestar.
A cat with a crooked mouth stepped forth. “I’ve chosen this one."He meowed in a calm steady pace. Another form had appeared.
"Very well, Nightstar do you wish to go next?” Questioned Bluestar
"Yes thank you.” Nightstar stared into the basin, his brow furrowed in deep concentration. “Yes this one shall do. Yet another form appeared. "I believe you are last Bluestar?"
"Thank you Nightstar, this one will be my choice.” The final shape appeared at Bluestar's words. “Does Star clan approve of these choices?" She asked.
A loud meow of agree men went through the crowd and then just as mysteriously as they had appeared they had vanished.

So what do you think? Cool Huh? Well, to join you need to input the following information:
Clan: (ThunderClan, RiverClan, WindClan, ShadowSlan.)
Name: (ex: Graystripe, Goldenflower, Longtail)
Gender:
Description: (color, tabby, ECT)
Personality: (optional)

Mine:
Clan: RiverClan
Name: FerilClaw
Gender: Female
Description: A Dark tabby with ringed tail and oversized claws
Personality: Happy and cheerful at most times but when seriousness is needed she is serious.
K well one more thing to tell. Once a clan is taken you can’t be in that clan until other clan spots are filled up, so if you want to be in RiverClan you have to wait for WindClan ThunderClan and ShadowClan to be taken.
Ok well that’s it!

If You are a person not in this RP and is a member of the Pokemon Community you may take the position of Glazenpaw a WindClan cat. For details please PM me.

AngelWolfie
September 10th, 2005, 04:03 AM
Clan: ThunderClan
Name: DoveFur
Gender: She-cat :3
Description: A cream colored cat with brown striped feet and tail, and a brown face. She has very short hair and blue eyes.
Personality: (optional)

~Mars~
September 10th, 2005, 01:56 PM
Yay someone joined I hoped someone would just 2 more are required to start this RP. So welcome aboard!

AngelWolfie
September 10th, 2005, 08:37 PM
Hopefully there are actually other people on this site who know what Warriors is >_>

Shadowfighter
September 10th, 2005, 08:54 PM
FINALLY! PEOPLE WHO KNOW WHAT WARRIORS IS! AGABAH!

Anyways I'm waiting for someone to choose a clan...

AngieKit
September 10th, 2005, 09:19 PM
*gasp* O_O!!! *hugs Mars* Thank you thank you thank you! ^^!
*calms down* Sorry, but I love those books with all my heart x3!!! I'll gladly join this role play.


Clan:WindClan, since River got taken. ^^''
Name: GlazenPaw
Gender: Female
Description: Silky, pure white fur that never grows very long, making winters a bit harsher than they should be. Her paws are a splash of orange, looking like someone glazed them over with frosting...
Personality: Calm and usualy quiet, happy and content.

Hehe! Can't wait for this to get started!

~Mars~
September 11th, 2005, 04:40 PM
Yay! Many people like it! OK well just need ShadowClan to get taken. Mabey tommorow Rin-Rin will go on be able to join. Well all who have joined welocome aboard! Yay! Sorry im just so happy that other people know about the warriors series!

AngieKit
September 11th, 2005, 06:40 PM
Okay! This will be great to get started. Very nice idea.
Yes, it's nice to know some other people out there in the world like the same books x3.

AngelWolfie
September 11th, 2005, 06:44 PM
Cool! When can we start? ...

~Mars~
September 11th, 2005, 07:21 PM
We can Start when we have enough people we still need the ShadowClan to be taken. There is no game without ShadowClan. Ok?

AngelWolfie
September 11th, 2005, 07:46 PM
Can I have a secong character? They'll be in Shadowclan :D

~Mars~
September 11th, 2005, 07:53 PM
I think it would be better if we waited for another to join. Like I said a friend of mine is on every weekday so she is probably going to join. If we dont have enough by Thursday though...

Rin-Rin
September 12th, 2005, 12:36 PM
Yup. Keep waiting. And waiting.

Clan: ShadowClan
Name: SmokeHeart
Gender: Male
Description: A slender, sinuous cat with misty gray fur.
Personality: Serious and emotionless. Usually far away from the subject.

Yeah, that last part will let me have some fun...

~Mars~
September 12th, 2005, 09:34 PM
Yay thats enough. If anyone else wants to join you have to join by tommorow 'cause thats when we're starting.

Rin-Rin
September 12th, 2005, 09:39 PM
Gr...I was waiting all day for this, but okay.

AngieKit
September 12th, 2005, 11:42 PM
Yes! I'm just happy we are going to be able to do this role play...^^ Thanks for making it possible, Rin-Rin.

~Mars~
September 13th, 2005, 11:54 AM
OK lets start this thingama whatsit!

I padded into the clearing, a good sized fish clamped in my mouth. "Ah,"I sighed "Done, thats the last fish." I picked up a Vole that I saw the deputy MistyFoot drop in the fresh kill pile. "You did a good job, You're an excelent Hunter." I jumped, fur standing on end."Mrrow," laughed MistyFoot."and not half bad of a jumper." She continued " Ha Ha very funny MistyFoot." I meowed back. "No really our bellies will be filled tonight. You deserve a feast, take that fish you just dropped in the pile along with your vole there."She purred. "Thank you!" I replied unable to hide the pride in my voice ,and I trotted off to the warriors den to eat my prize fish in peace.

Whoo well what do you think? I'm pretty new at making RP's,and continuing it.

Rin-Rin
September 14th, 2005, 08:18 PM
I stretched out my legs as I crawled out of the warrior's den. I had slept in from pure accident. I couldn't get to sleep last night with all of the snoring around me.
"SmokeHeart!" A voice growled next to me. It was my best friend, SilverStripe. "Where have you been? We've all been hunting!"
"I've been sleeping." I told him through a yawn. "Can't a cat get decent sleep?"
He sucked his teeth. "Well, come on. I plan on going into WindClan Territory. Wanna come?"
"Why?" I asked, uncaring. "What are we doing?"
"Barley says there are a bunch of plump mice running around the barn."
"Who?" I asked, slightly perplexed.
"Barley! A cat I met some days ago while wandering around WindClan territory!"
"Oh..." I yawned yet again. "Let's go."

Look how irresponsible my character is. It's just so lovely.

~Mars~
September 14th, 2005, 09:22 PM
Oooo irresponsible!! I dont think I like irresponsible 'cause thats not like me but Oooo irresponsible.
~Hate going to dentist.

AngieKit
September 15th, 2005, 12:48 AM
I stalked low to the earth, my paws carefully descending upon the ground in total silence. The stalks of grass against my sides barely moved as I walked among them, weaving my body to and fro, stalking my prey without the slightest hint of notice. I carefuly peeked my head out of the hedge, the light of the new sun making my golden eyes glint. There I crouched, waiting for the exact right moment...

The rather plump and large mouse was scuttling peacefully along, a few peices of grain poking out of it's mouth. Carefuly, I retreated my head so I would not be so easily detected. Luck on my side, the breeze wasn't blowing my scent to the mouse...it was gently blowing on the front of the mouse, carrying it's pleasing scent toward me. Gathering up my spring, I suddenly sprang from the tall grasses and was upon the mouse. Poor thing didn't even stand a chance. In one quick movement, it lay still.

Rather pleased, I sat back on my haunches and yawned. I wasn't exactly a morning person.

Swish!

Before I could figure out what was happening, I was rammed away from my captured prey and to the ground. Before I could get up and regain my ground, a large paw was pressed firmly on my chest.

"Well, what do we have here? Little GlazenPaw." I looked up into the grey eyes of a large tom cat, and felt my ears flick back in irratation. He released me and stalked over to my kill, clamped it firmly in his mouth, then darted off.

Holding back a shiver, I got to my paws, a little shaken. Though this happened just about every time I hunted. PaintedFur would take credit for whatever I happened to kill. With sad eyes I looked to the near barn, wondering if I should try again, so I wouldn't go back to my clan empty-pawed...

AngelWolfie
September 15th, 2005, 04:45 AM
Dovefur pured and stretched as she slowly crawled out of the warrior's den. It was a wonderful warm day, and she felt good. She shook the bits of twigs and dirt on her fur off before trotting off to hunt. "Where are you going today, Dovefur?" The white deputy, Snowfur purred, watching Dovefur leave. "I'm heading to Snakerocks." Dovefur replied happily. She continued on. When she arrived, she could see an adder. She didn't think they'd be out right now. She was careful to avoid it as she leapt onto a rock near the adder. It slithered around the rock, then looked up and hissed, reveiling dripping poisonous fangs. Dovefur felt the fur down her back prickle, and she was too afraid to move. What had compelled her to come here? "I'm an idiot..." she thought, then batted at the snake when it closed it's mouth. It struck, and she dodged the bite. Dovefur then saw the opportunity, she put both front paws on top of the snake's head, and pinned it to the rock. She dug her claws into it's head, bent down and dug her teeth into it, breking it's spine. The snake wriggled a bit before falling limp. Dovefur purred as she licked the blood from the snake's wound and picked it up. Once back at camp, she dropped it on the fresh-kill pile and moved to the middle of the clearing and layed on her back, in the sun.

Rin-Rin
September 19th, 2005, 09:42 PM
We crossed the border where ShadowClan ended and WindClan began. I felt the atmostphere change completely as we climbed onto the WindClan's plateau. The windcurrents were strong up here! I sniffed the air for a scent of prey but the winds took all the scent around so fast it was hard to tell where prey was.

"I've also heard there are hares all around WindClan territory." SilverStripe purred. "We could probably catch some."

"Not likely." I told him. "Let's stick to Barley's barn. The scents are two hard to track in these weather conditions."

"Very well." SilverStripe nodded and we carefully headed out. I noticed immediately how difficult it was to conceal yourself in the territory. There was hardly any vegetation to hide behind if you caught the scent of a patrol heading in your direction. It was a hazardous journey...but I was famished and craved the taste of plump mouse.

The scent of WindClan filled my lungs and my heart skipped a beat. It was a single cat scent, but I knew it was coming near...and we were in danger of both their clan and our clan.

"SilverStripe!" I whispered under my breath. "Do you smell it?"

He nodded simply in reply. We looked into the distance and saw a pearly white figure padding slowly near us...

~Mars~
September 20th, 2005, 12:43 PM
Whew sorry I havent been on but my brothers are hogging the computer, and with school it is extreamly hard to get on.Ok where was I?

"Ah," I sighed "What a fish." As I lay back to clean myself a friend of mine entered the clearing.
"Hey Frostfoot!" I called "Come here!"
"I'm coming!" He shouted back."How you doing?" he asked" by the looks of thing you ate more than your share!"
"Hey I hunted half the fresh kill pile so dont tell me what I do or dont eat!" I snaped back.
"Whatever," Frostfoot said nonchalantly."Anyways I smelled a whif of ShadowClan over by the fourtrees heading up into WindClan territory."
"Really!?!" I said in mock surprise"Who cares, WindClan took our water before when they had plenty. I say good for ShadowClan."

AngieKit
September 25th, 2005, 11:04 PM
[(OOC: I am sorry, but I have to pull out. I have two extra classes along with my regualar eight this year, so it is difficult to get online and keep on top of things. My deepest regrets about doing this. ><'')]

Rin-Rin
September 25th, 2005, 11:32 PM
[(OOC: I am sorry, but I have to pull out. I have two extra classes along with my regualar eight this year, so it is difficult to get online and keep on top of things. My deepest regrets about doing this. ><'')]That's okay, legend ;.; But we'll miss you.

Okay, instead of waiting for someone else to join, I will take GlazenPaw's place (it'll be difficult, but it's okay).

We will do this tomorrow!

AngelWolfie
September 26th, 2005, 04:56 AM
Dovefur rolled onto her belly as her best friend, Jadeeye approached. The sleek black cat with dark green eyes an a white tipped tail sat down next to Dovefur, the sneke in her mouth. "Someone was dumb enough to go to snakerocks today. They got lucky, though!" She purred. Dovefur replied "Are you calling me dumb?", cheerfullnes filling her voice. "YOU caught this?" Jadeeye asked, dumbstruck, looking from the snake to it's captor. "Yup! It was easy!" Dovefur bragged. "Wow. You should have it, then." Her friend said, nudging the snake toward Dovefur with her paw. "I'll share it." Dovefur replied. The two cats began to eat, Dovefur with the tail and Jadeeye with the head.

~Mars~
September 26th, 2005, 08:26 PM
Occ:Noooo I'll miss you legend. Ok well Rinny-Spoon-chan you can fill in for now but if someone wants to you let them play as Glazen paw.K?
Ic:After the conversation with my good ffriend I drifted to sleep. "FerilClaw" A voice in my mind called.
I ran toward the voice,suddenly I broke throught he brush and found the voice. "Who are you?" I asked.

Rin-Rin
September 26th, 2005, 08:39 PM
Occ:Noooo I'll miss you legend. Ok well Rinny-Spoon-chan you can fill in for now but if someone wants to you let them play as Glazen paw.K?
Ic:After the conversation with my good ffriend I drifted to sleep. "FerilClaw" A voice in my mind called.
I ran toward the voice,suddenly I broke throught he brush and found the voice. "Who are you?" I asked.

[OCC: Just asking, Mars, but who is supposed to reply to that?]

<GlazenPaw>

I looked up into the sky and held my nose up high. The wind came into my direction as I caught the stench of ShadowClan. A low growl built up in my throat and I looked upon the horizon. I spotted a black dot and a silver dot out in the distance, far off from where I was. Nontheless, they were in WindClan territory. I crouched down hoping they couldn't see me. Cautiously, I padded over to them, hoping to keep this quiet.

<SmokeHeart>

"We're busted." SilverStripe whimpered. "They're coming right at us! There's no chance--"
"Just run away." I told him. "We should just turn tail and run out of the territory as fast as we can. She must have scented us by now and maybe even seen us. If we run, they will have no proof of it being us exactly."
"True, but...all the rest of WindClan would know of this. They would discuss it at FourTrees..."
"It's either that or being known immediately." I growled. "Let's move."

~Mars~
September 27th, 2005, 10:41 PM
Occ: It was a rushed post Marsy was at school still and Marsy had to go soon. Besides it has an essence of mystery.~Marsy talks in third person now!

Ic:The cat was Lying on a smooth stone. His Jaw seemed crooked-probably from a wound that healed badly-showing that his life was rough.
"I am CrookedStar!" The cat exclaimed.
"CrookedStar!?!?!" I Gasped "Not the fomer RiverClan leader?"
"The same" He replied calmly. "An important thing for you to do is in need to be done soon."
"What?" I asked in astonishment.
"Meet Three others at the gathering. Say one thing and one thing only: Prophecy, to every cat and you will find each other. You are lucky normally StarClan speaks in riddles but this is important and it needs to be done fast!"He said hurridly in a hushed whisper.
"Yes sir! I wi-" I tried to reply, but as sudenly as he came he was gone.
"Come back!" I shouted fruitlessly.

Do you think Marsy did good? Her last RP died on the secome page, so she's worried.

Rin-Rin
October 16th, 2005, 06:28 PM
*saves RP before it dies*

<GlazenPaw>
Right when I thought I had them, they disappeared somewhere off in the bushes. I looked down, defeated, and headed back to camp. (OCC: tryin' to keep it short -.-;)

<ShadowHeart>
We both dashed into the bushes, hoping that the WindClan cat could not sense us. I dashed along the border of the bush, hoping to find my way back to ShadowClan territory. I swung my head back and noticed that SilverStripe...he had disappeared.
"SilverStripe?" I asked the air. No respond came in advance. My heart raced, worry overcoming me. I pounded the ground, my head spinning around. What could've happened to him?
I bumped into something rough...something alive...It was a cat! I was hoping to find SilverStripe before me, but instead a pitch-black coat towered over me. It was a brooding cat with brooding features. The only thing that could truley be distinguished of him was his golden eyes.
"Greetings, young SmokeHeart." He breathed. "I am NightStar."
I tried to sustain my serenity as I looked into his dead eyes. "But...but you're dead."
"This is true." He nodded as he said this. "But it is also true that I came to see you. I come to tell you something vital. At the gathering, you will meet three cats. Tell every cat the word 'prophecy.' If they respond as if knowing what this is, they are the one's you are looking for. Good day to you."
I gaped in astonishment as he vanished away like black smoke in the wind. Just then, I heard SilverStripe calling my name.

~Mars~
October 17th, 2005, 09:11 PM
*saves RP before it dies*

[Occ: Phwee! Thank you Rinny Spoon chan]
I woke with a start the other warriors were grumbling.
"Honestly FerilClaw you think a cat could get some sleep in their own den but no even the elders can hear you!" My fur rose on the back of my neck but when I turned around it was only RiverPelt a recenly made warrior.
"I went the night patrol and when I got back I walked pas the elders den and heard them complaining about your sleep talk too, FerilClaw." PineFoot Meowed from a point from across the den where I could see her sleepy eyes in her raised head.
"Sorry, but when I'm asleep I can't just stuff some leaves in my mouth to keep you from hearing anywords I might utter!" I apologized Scornfully.
"Well I guess then instead you can go on a patrol rather than mouth off all day and get yourself off the list of those going to the gathering."Meowed a voice that sounded like MistyFoot.
"Yes ma'am." I replied respectfully and turned to face our leader LeopardStar.
Hiding the sock of her arrival from my eyes and inwardly hissing at my stupidity for mistaking her as MistyFoot.
The patrol traveled along the WindClan Border, replaced the scent markers, and were troting hapily through the underbrush until I detected a faint but fresh ShadowClan scent.

Rin-Rin
October 17th, 2005, 09:20 PM
[OCC: Yikes! >< I've been detected!]

[GlazenPaw]
When I came back at camp, I felt foolish for not even bringing a scrap of food back. I was questioned much on why I was so down, but mostly on why I brought back no prey. I ingnored every question and headed straight for the apprentices' den, ready to take a nap.

[SmokeHeart]
"SmokeHeart! What's wrong with you?"
I looked around, confused. SilverStripe was looking at me with worried eyes. I felt dizzy...as if I were just in a trance.
"What?" I asked. The silver-pelted cat beckoned me forward. He told me what had happened.
"You just stopped all of the sudden...stock-still. You didn't move a muscle. I was frightened! What happened?"
I thought it wise to not tell of the strange visitation from Nightstar. I simply just shook my head and responded. "Nothing at all."

~Mars~
November 14th, 2005, 11:57 PM
Nooo not my rp I cant let you die...:( I guess that it wasnt all thet great after all.