Team Elemant?

[Wish]

Hihihi this is Mr. p yes right I have started making a sprite comic
http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a345/freako111/spritecomiccover.png
first the credits:
thanks to The spriters resource (http://sprites.fireball20xl.com) for the sprites
thanks to Signomi (http://www.pokecommunity.com/member.php?userid=14963) for the inspiring me
okay thats about it oh! yeah the story

The Plot

After the downfall of team magma & team aqua a new teams arose.....Team Static & Team Floral looking forward to World Domination.
You as Jeanne (you can name her whatever you want)and her rival chad (you can name him whatever you want) discover the mystery of the teams.
Rumors say team Aqua's & team magma's leaders had disapeared. Teams Static and Floral are using technolagy to relocate them and to reunite the teams to create one big team elemant but the rest is a mystery.................

The main characters!


http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a345/freako111/Jeanne.gif
Jeanne is very smart and positive. She is also shy and sensitive. Along with her old rival from Jhoto they must team together to defeat soon to be Team Elemant..................

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a345/freako111/Chad.gif
Chad is a Very loyal person but still a brat He is very Braggy so he has hope of being good. Together with his acquaintance Jeanne they must stop Team Elemant before it is too late...............

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a345/freako111/StatiX.gif
StatiX is the leader of team static. She is very Glamourous, and pretty.
After a Fatal accident with Prof. Oak her life has been to serve evil. Now she and Lily must succeed the plan for World Domination!

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a345/freako111/Lily.png
lily is a spy pretending to be good. Lily is not as bad as StatiX but she is the leader of team floral. together with team static, they will try to succeed with their plan!
that is all the characters so far

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a345/freako111/Oldlady.png
the old lady lives in petelburg, She is very helpful on the journey
Chapter 1: Guess who's back? (http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a345/freako111/1stchapter.png)
Chapter 2: Prof. Birch what? (http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a345/freako111/2ndchapter.png)
Chapter 3 Where is he? (http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a345/freako111/3rdchapter.jpg)
Comments? Complaints? Ideas? post here!

[Karasuma]

Nut bad dude. Keep it up, it's really good.

[Smarties-chan]

The only sprite that isn't very badly shaded is the first one and the very light blue you use for the text is almost impossible to read against the white background in other words: I can't read what the light blue text says.

[Sheepnut]

My Eyes !!!!1111!!!!!!!!! They Burn !!!!!!!!!!111!!!

[Wish]

Uhh okay is that a compliment or complaint

[Signomi]

Hmm..I'm not going to say much. But for the next part of the comic, try tidying up up your comic's layout and use either Size.10 Tahoma or Verdana for the font. Also try not to make a font colour too bright as it can hurt the eyes ^^ From what I see you're putting in a nice effort, let's see what you can come up with next shall we? ^^

[Esupio]

oh my god
those sprites are pathetic as sheep nut said My Eyes !!!!1111!!!!!!!!! They Burn !!!!!!!!!!111!!!

they hurt the eyes basically all they are is painted over sprites

[Latias_fan]

Really cool.I mean it.But 2nd and 3rd needs to be bigger.

[Jarman]

Horrible sprite shading, lazy style of writing and comic 3 is tiny.

[Dragon Lover]

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a345/freako111/StatiX.gif
StatiX is the leader of team static. She is very Glamourous, and pretty.
After a Fatal accident with Prof. Oak her life has been to serve evil. Now she and Lily must succeed the plan for World Domination!
Isn't that Signome's sprite of Katrelle or w/e and just coloured on?

Oh and for the odiots who say No.3 is tiny. Have you tried to hover your mouse over it? A small box with arroows will appear. Click it.

Other than that I'm using all my energy to stop me flaming you in a way that'd get me banned.

~DL~

[Signomi]

Uh..DL, that's actually Mr.P's edited sprite of Pike Queen Lucy in Pokemon Emerald ^^;

[Jarman]

Isn't that Signome's sprite of Katrelle or w/e and just coloured on?

Oh and for the odiots who say No.3 is tiny. Have you tried to hover your mouse over it? A small box with arroows will appear. Click it.

Other than that I'm using all my energy to stop me flaming you in a way that'd get me banned.

~DL~

That enlargening thing only works on IE, and it doesn't work unless the picture is too small because the window is smaller than the picture being viewed.

[Wish]

Since i suck i have run away see you in some year good bye pokecommunity!

[Dragon Lover]

Uh..DL, that's actually Mr.P's edited sprite of Pike Queen Lucy in Pokemon Emerald ^^;

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Note to self: Never try to be mean XP

That enlargening thing only works on IE, and it doesn't work unless the picture is too small because the window is smaller than the picture being viewed.
You have firefox or something then?

Since i suck i have run away see you in some year good bye pokecommunity!
Practice makes perfect xP Good Luck with life and you don't suck.

~DL~

[Jarman]

I have AOL. And it still wouldn't work since that's the size it was saved as.

[Karasuma]

Since i suck i have run away see you in some year good bye pokecommunity!

Let's go together. I quit as well. Good bye.............