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DragonTrainer
February 20th, 2004, 03:41 PM
Yea, I have some poetry lol, it's kinda deep, so, here ya go

Tired of trying
Yeah I'm smiling
But inside I'm dying
Everyone sees who I appear to be
But only a few know the real me
You only see what I choose to show
There's so much behind my smile
That you don't know

100marios
February 20th, 2004, 04:16 PM
That's really good DT! I didn't know it, but you're a poet!
I have one pretty good poem I made too.....
Anyway, I hope I can see more!

DragonTrainer
February 20th, 2004, 04:17 PM
Well, here's some more for you:

I feel like I'm trapped
With nowhere to go
Where?I don't know
I just wish that I could get out of my mind's prison
And I just think this isn't
The kind of place for me
But inside my heart I always know
There is nowhere else I'd like to go

100marios
February 20th, 2004, 04:35 PM
*Applauds*
Yay!!!
.........huh? Was it supposed to be sad? In that case...
*cries joyfully*
hehe...sniff

Nice poems DT! You've got that writer's blood in you afterall! Excellent work!

DragonTrainer
February 20th, 2004, 04:37 PM
Yea, thanks man, guess I found a talent, I gotta go write some more poems

DragonTrainer
February 20th, 2004, 07:35 PM
Here's another one I have made, it's kinda hard to understand, but....

And now you leave me
How could you do such a thing?
I thought we were meant for each other
I always thought there wasn't another
Who could take my place
But now, at this rapid pace
That the world moves along
I can see
That relationships cannot last long

What a fool I was
To believe such a thing
To think we were going to be together forever
Our breakup can only bring
Pain, endless agony
At least to me

Now I know
That you can never let a relationship grow
Because before you know it
It all breaks apart
And the pain to your heart
Will never leave your soul

100marios
February 20th, 2004, 08:05 PM
Wow! This one's better then your last two combined!
.....and much longer too!
Hehe....
Good job DT! I hope other people will come to read your brilliant masterpieces!

ScArLetSkye
February 20th, 2004, 08:48 PM
*applauds*Very good,very good!:)

Yamichu
February 20th, 2004, 08:56 PM
Whoa.... good poems DT!
I like the last one...really great!



~HORN!

DragonTrainer
February 20th, 2004, 09:10 PM
Thanks guys, guess I really am good at poetry :)

22sa
February 20th, 2004, 09:29 PM
Mmm... Yah, looks like you really put yourself in the dark there. ^^'

bna_li
February 20th, 2004, 09:33 PM
Yeah, sounds like the best one so far. Keepy uppy!

DragonTrainer
February 20th, 2004, 09:36 PM
Mmm... Yah, looks like you really put yourself in the dark there. ^^'

Lol, what do you mean by that?

22sa
February 20th, 2004, 11:20 PM
Lol, what do you mean by that?
I meant they were very thoughtful and deep. :P

DragonTrainer
February 20th, 2004, 11:30 PM
Yea, they are, I never knw I could write until now

Hikaru's Twin
February 21st, 2004, 03:58 PM
Wow DT, these are some great poems, i think my favourite one's got to be the last one ^_^ Hope to see more of them later!
*Wonders if she should start a thead with some of her own poetry and see what others think....*

Teara
February 21st, 2004, 04:10 PM
Those are really great! All the poetry I write is deep too. Course, mines also long...
Anywho! Keep it up DT! ^_-

DragonTrainer
February 22nd, 2004, 04:25 PM
Thanks guys, I'm working on one right now, I have a feeling it'll be great ^^

Teara
February 22nd, 2004, 04:37 PM
Well hurry and post it!^___^
I have a thread for my poems too but I can't ryme for beans-_- I just put a bunch of deep words on paper and call it a poem. You put mine to shame XD

DragonTrainer
February 22nd, 2004, 04:43 PM
Cool down teara, here it is ^^

Our Love
Your love, so pure
And yet, sometimes I am unsure
Is your love true and mature?
Or is it sad and fake?

Times these days are so tough
And I just feel like I've had enough
Of these lies and fake feelings
Love nowadays is so hard to find
Most of the time it is completely blind

I sometimes wonder
Why are we still together?
So much trouble from our love, the only offender
But deep in our hearts for now and forever
Our love will never be severed

Teara
February 22nd, 2004, 04:57 PM
*blink*
*blink*
*drops dead*
You're so good at poetry! Now I'm jealous...*sniff* I should practice ryming...
OH Ha! beat this!
There was an old fisherman that sang.
Through the wide lake his rusty voice rang.
He sang to lure the fish.
He planned to make a dish.
He caught a fish so big he sprang.

Ha! *looks at DT's poems* I think I'll stick to non-ryming stuff XD
Great Job DT! ^_^

DragonTrainer
February 22nd, 2004, 05:03 PM
Lol thanks, I think that was my best yet

Teara
February 22nd, 2004, 05:08 PM
*looks at DT's last poem again*
hmmm...ohhh, I think DT has a girlfriend!;b JK Do you ever write anything that dosn't ryme? Just curious, some people specailize in ryming but some people like to write both. And some people *coughMeCough*, like I said before, can't ryme for beans^^

Kayleigh
February 22nd, 2004, 05:16 PM
Wow, those are really good! ^_^ I didn't know that you were interested in poetry. I think I like your last one best. I really don't see how you do it... I'm with Teara, I can't rhyme worth a flip. o_o; (Though she's most likely better than me.) Great job! I can't wait to see more.

Teara
February 22nd, 2004, 05:22 PM
Wow, those are really good! ^_^ I didn't know that you were interested in poetry. I think I like your last one best. I really don't see how you do it... I'm with Teara, I can't rhyme worth a flip. o_o; (Though she's most likely better than me.) Great job! I can't wait to see more.
Sometimes, the most unlikly of people are really creative. Take for example my dog, she looks kinda deadbrained (is that a word?), but when she rolls around in the grass she makes patterns that sometimes (okay once, but whatever), look like angles! ;D

DragonTrainer
February 22nd, 2004, 05:27 PM
So, I'm uncreative?:P

Lol, BTW, no girlfriend for me in a long time, those are just for that one special person

Thanks Kaylwigh and Teara

Well, I can write without rhymes, I just think rhymes make it more interesting

Lol, working on another one!

Teara
February 22nd, 2004, 05:51 PM
No, you are creative, I was just leting everyone know that my dog is a genius^_-

I just broke up with my BF...grrr...

Rymes make me frustraited, I just write whatever comes to mind...of course only one person responded to my poems so I might have to try ryming next time.^___^

DragonTrainer
February 22nd, 2004, 06:10 PM
Well, this poem is really deep, my best one yet:

Goodbye my Love
Parting is such sweet sorrow, or so the saying goes
But nothing will destroy all my pain and woe
This misery is so great and unbelievable
It’s just hardly believable

You said we would always be together
Never to be ripped apart
But I guess now the only ripped thing is my heart
I cannot withstand this torment much longer
But I know this misery will make me stronger

Alas, our last few moments
I fear I cannot withstand any more
You beautiful face
Covered in tears
Drags down all of my deepest fears
Our final goodbye
But why must we break down and cry?


Please my love, wipe your tears
You are so near
For as long as I can
I will stand by your side
Holding you in my arms
Keeping our love forever

Teara
February 22nd, 2004, 06:17 PM
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS GREAT! It sound like a song! Now I'm really jealous! That's it! Your sending those into Cadar!

DragonTrainer
February 22nd, 2004, 06:19 PM
OK Teara, I'll send them in a sec, but tell me how first :P

Teara
February 22nd, 2004, 06:23 PM
Go to http://www.cader.com/contents.htm and it'll say what you need to do. Good luck! I'm going to send mine too^^

DragonTrainer
February 22nd, 2004, 06:27 PM
OK, I'll send it very soon :P

Kyosuke
February 23rd, 2004, 12:55 PM
Nice poetry DT it seems that you thought of it nicely.

You know, there is alot of Poetry in Other fan-fiction and Roleplay, maybe I could request for a subforum that has a section for poetry.

DragonTrainer
February 23rd, 2004, 02:35 PM
Thanks LT, I'm coming up with a few more, dunno if they'll be as good

DragonTrainer
February 25th, 2004, 06:14 PM
Ok, sorry for this double post, but here's a poem I just made this one for a special someone.....

The real me
You see me just as a friend
Someone you can always talk to
But you never know how I truly feel about you
I have never shown it
Always afraid of what others think
But to tell you the truth
I don’t care anymore

I know I don't truly have a crush
But I have finally revealed
How I feel about you
These feelings are true
So please don’t hate me
For all I have said
Truth is
I really like you

22sa
February 26th, 2004, 08:50 PM
:cool:

Awesome flow, DragonTrainer.

Requests? XD;;

As long they're about girls, I won't request anything different. :laugh:

DragonTrainer
February 27th, 2004, 03:22 PM
Lol, sorry 22sa, I sorta can't do request, it's just not how I work :P

DragonTrainer
February 27th, 2004, 03:42 PM
Well, I know it's not my best, but yea....

The Way You See Me
Why do you look at me so differently?
I’m just the same as everyone else, you see
But when I do stop and think about it
I know I’m not your average Joe
I’m unique, different
One of a kind
Although you may be blind
As to who I am

I’m not like all the others
There’s more to me
Than what you see
So much more than meets the eye
Maybe if you just tried to know who I am
Before I am condemned
To be just another person to you

100marios
February 27th, 2004, 07:47 PM
Ok, sorry for this double post, but here's a poem I just made this one for a special someone.....

The real me
You see me just as a friend
Someone you can always talk to
But you never know how I truly feel about you
I have never shown it
Always afraid of what others think
But to tell you the truth
I dont care anymore

I know I don't truly have a crush
But I have finally revealed
How I feel about you
These feelings are true
So please dont hate me
For all I have said
Truth is
I really like you
Really nice poems DT! I think your starting to inspire me too.....
But I think we all know who this one's for!
Hehe...

DragonTrainer
February 27th, 2004, 07:49 PM
Yea, you know who it's for......

I wish she'd read it lol

100marios
February 27th, 2004, 08:14 PM
Yea, you know who it's for......

I wish she'd read it lol
That would be cool hehe.....
I have to admit, you've inspired me to make one of my own!
I've already got quite a bit done. It should be good......
Hey! There's a rhyme right there!
*copies it down*
Hehe...

DragonTrainer
February 27th, 2004, 08:18 PM
Lol, what would be cool

Well, I gotta work on some more poems here!Gotta be a good writer, doncha' know!

100marios
February 27th, 2004, 08:22 PM
Lol, what would be cool

Well, I gotta work on some more poems here!Gotta be a good writer, doncha' know!
I know that I'm already a pretty good writer,
(I scored a 6/6 on an essay I wrote last year that went to the state)
I just gotta work a little bit more on poetry.
So far, I've impressed myself quite a bit.....but hey. I'm no Shakespere!
Hehe.....

DragonTrainer
February 27th, 2004, 08:27 PM
I will be.....a poet!

Lol, just playing, I never write unless I feel like writing about something important =/

100marios
February 27th, 2004, 08:32 PM
I will be.....a poet!

Lol, just playing, I never write unless I feel like writing about something important =/
That makes sense hehe....
You should see my sister's poems! They're so good! She said that she made quite a few of them when she couldn't sleep at night.

Well I have most of my poem done now, but it is very long....at least to me. Thanks for the inspiration!
Hehe....

DragonTrainer
February 27th, 2004, 08:41 PM
No prob man, always here to help

Gotta make me some more!

100marios
February 27th, 2004, 08:51 PM
No prob man, always here to help

Gotta make me some more!
Thanks!
Well, I finished! It sounds pretty good to me. Of course it usually always sounds good to yourself because you're the one who made it!
I suppose I should make a thread now too hehe...

DragonTrainer
February 27th, 2004, 08:52 PM
Yea, I'll check it out in a second

DragonTrainer
February 27th, 2004, 09:28 PM
Sorry for the double post, but I gotta post my new poem!

This Disease Called Love
I cannot eat
I cannot sleep
All I can think about is you
You are everything to me
My will to go on
The only thing I look forward to

Your face
Such beautiful features
I never realized
There was such a majestic creature
Like yourself
Your eyes
Always understanding
Anything I say to you
All of which is completely true

I can’t stop thinking about you
Everywhere I go
I think I am struck by this dove
By this disease called love

Dizzy
February 27th, 2004, 09:29 PM
No one reads my poems though ;... How do you do that tounge thingy lol (insert tounge thingy) Good job DragonTrainer I like your poems...

DragonTrainer
February 27th, 2004, 09:33 PM
Thanks Dizzy!

The tongue smile?Just put these two icons together:
:+P=:P

22sa
February 27th, 2004, 09:35 PM
Sorry for the double post, but I gotta post my new poem!

This Disease Called Love
I cannot eat
I cannot sleep
All I can think about is you
You are everything to me
My will to go on
The only thing I look forward to

Your face
Such beautiful features
I never realized
There was such a majestic creature
Like yourself
Your eyes
Always understanding
Anything I say to you
All of which is completely true

I can’t stop thinking about you
Everywhere I go
I think I am struck by this dove
By this disease called love
Cool stuff DT.

Truth sure pays off a lot. :P

DragonTrainer
February 27th, 2004, 09:40 PM
Lol, what are ya talking about?

I didn't mean that one for anybody, I just felt like writing about love is all, honestly dude :P

Dizzy
February 27th, 2004, 09:42 PM
Your Poetry is so Popular DragonTrainer :) you really have a good sense of writing poetry... I wish I had that :( .........................:P HEHEHE

DragonTrainer
February 27th, 2004, 09:45 PM
Thanks for the compliments Dizzy, your poetry is very good as well :)

Dizzy
February 27th, 2004, 09:55 PM
Yeah right, poetry just isnt my thing... their scary, they keep people away.... I think my songs arent that bad though

DragonTrainer
February 27th, 2004, 10:09 PM
I like poetry, I can actually express how I feel while doing something I'm good at

100marios
February 27th, 2004, 10:21 PM
I like poetry, I can actually express how I feel while doing something I'm good at
Yeah, it feels pretty good! It's a good way to express your feelings, like you said. I finished mine so that's why I feel that way hehe....

DragonTrainer
February 27th, 2004, 10:24 PM
Yup, poetry is awesome

Lol, I just got started last Friday though :P

Kayleigh
February 28th, 2004, 10:22 AM
Wow, great poems, just as I expected. ^_^ They're so pretty. I guess poetry is a lot like drawing. I can always draw, but only once in a while can I invision something and then suddenly have the urge to draw a masterpeice. O_o And that usually tends to happen late at night right before I go to bed, and everyone will get mad at me for keeping the light on, or my mom will yell from downstairs that I'm supposed to be alseep, lol.

I'll go check out your poems too, 100marios! =D

DragonTrainer
February 28th, 2004, 10:48 AM
Thanks Kayliegh, I have a hankering to write!:P

Greed
February 28th, 2004, 09:28 PM
This are very interesting poems, DT. I'm impressed, You're pretty reserved sometimes that I could never see that you're such a good poet =D

*Explodes*

DragonTrainer
March 2nd, 2004, 03:01 PM
Shyeah, thanks you Cartoon

Yet another piece of poetry, it's kind of strange, but oh well

Broken
The darkness is engulfing
Your trust…broken
I feel out of place
Our trust has been destroyed
Without nary a trace

My mind is no longer working
Yet, I see you lurking
Deep inside of my being
I have no more will to go on
I am broken
My life, my soul
It is gone

Why do you put me through such pain?
I find it so hard to maintain
Mental sanity
For you see
I am broken

Dizzy
March 2nd, 2004, 03:06 PM
Have you tried to write songs too DragonTrainer? Just Try it and see if your good at that too, I think your good at everything Dude.. :P

DragonTrainer
March 2nd, 2004, 03:09 PM
Nah, I don't think I would do too good at songs, I think poetry is what I excel in, I;m gonna stick to it