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Al Hirak
September 28th, 2005, 01:38 AM
This is your Normal pokemon journey, starting off as a new trainer in the Hoenn region, and progress to Johto, Kanto and sometimes even new regions that are just found. However, this basically doesn't follow a storyline, as you can do anything during your journey, start your own evil team,join teams,just as long as you don't forget that everyones mission-Is to track down and destroy Team Shadow.

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Kurono
September 28th, 2005, 01:40 AM
Erm....I think you need a better plt than that...a mod will end up closing this if you don't make a plot that others can follow..

Claire
September 28th, 2005, 11:28 AM
Three main things are needed in a plot:

Originality: Which will draw members to the RPG, the last thing you want to do is a have a plot about a bunch of trainers going on a journey as you would see in the Pokemon Anime, no, you want a good story with a few plot twists. We are not stopping you from starting a Trainer RP, but it would be an idea to add a few plot twists and some adventure, this is what draws members to your RPG.

Detail: Description, History and emotions all come into the detail of a Plot; with out detail the plot will have no feel and therefore not attract members. Were not saying it has to be a 14 page essay, but make it more than 4 lines and add some description into it to allow members to have the idea of what the plot is about.

Interest: Originality and Detail all come into the interest of the plot. You want to draw members to the RPG so make it interesting by adding a few plot twists and furthermore, just making up your own story.
Those things aren't evident in this RPG, so i'll close it.
Please take greater care and put more thought into a plot next time
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