Pokemon Emrald:Re-Make(By Rayquaza975)

[King Boo]

Well i've been looking at some of the comics here in Pc so i thought`Hey,why don't i do one?"and i also though `I LIKE PIE' but any way enjoy th Start of Pokemon Emarald!

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/Start.jpg

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/INTRO.jpg

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/T2.png

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/rAYQU.jpg


COMICS:
N.O1:BAD DAY!(1) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P11.jpg)
N.O1:BAD DAY!(2) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P12.jpg)
N.O1:BAD DAY!(3) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P13.jpg)
N.O1:BAD DAY!(4) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P14.jpg)
N.O2:Waste of Time!(1) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P21.jpg)
N.O2:Waste of Time(2) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P22.jpg)
N.O2:Waste of Time(3) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P23.jpg)
N.O2:Waste of Time(4) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P24.jpg)
N.O3:Old Friend's(1) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P31.jpg)
N.O3:Old Friend's(2) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P32.jpg)
N.O3:Old Friend's(3) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P33.jpg)
N.O3:Old Friend's(4) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P34.jpg)
N.O4:I HATE AQUA(1) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P41.jpg)
N.O4:I HATE AQUA(2) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P42.jpg)
N.O4:I HATE AQUA(3) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P43.jpg)
N.O4:I HATE AQUA(4) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P44.jpg)
N.O5:RAVE!(1) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P51.jpg)
N.O5:RAVE!(2) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P52.jpg)
N.O5:RAVE!(3) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P53.jpg)
N.O5:RAVE!(4) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P54.jpg)
N.O6:"GO GROVLY"(1) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P61.jpg)
N.O6:"GO GROVLY"(2) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P62.jpg)
N.O6:"GO GROVLY"(3) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P63.jpg)
N.O6:"GO GROVLY"(4) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P64.jpg)
N.O7:One Sandy Day(1) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P71.jpg)
N.O7:One Sandy Day(2) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P72.jpg)
N.O7:One Sandy Day(3) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P73.jpg)
N.O7:One Sandy Day(4) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P74.jpg)
N.O8:AQUA STIRKES AGIAN(1) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P81.jpg)
N.O8:AQUA STIRKES AGIAN(2) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P82.jpg)
N.O8:AQUA STIRKES AGIAN(3) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P83.jpg)
N.O8:AQUA STIRKES AGIAN(4) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P84.jpg)
N.O9:The Emrald clan?(1) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P91.jpg)
N.O9:The Emrald clan?(2) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P92.png)
N.O9:The Emrald clan?(3) (http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P93.png)

[Ark Kuvis]

So, you post a thread with no comic? And the fact that you saved everything as JPEG is BLEAH.
Why remake Emerald? Get your own original ideas.

[King Boo]

I just started ok im working on the comics as we speak so SHUT UP!

[Ark Kuvis]

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/5652/lameexcuses4fx.png

[King Boo]

piss off okay!i don't need this crap from u right now i would conserd this as flamming u know!

[Dragon-Chan]

Usually, people post their comics at first. If you can help it, try not to save stuff as JPEG...it makes them look all blurry and grainy. And...work on your grammar a lot. Sorry, but i'm a big grammar freak. A giant stickler. xP
If this is your first sprite comic, it shows promise. Check the 'no more excuses' thread for some tutorials if you ever need help.

[Roy-Kun]

cool no comic -_-, you must post at least one

[Sweetie]

I like it, it's nice!! ;)

[King Boo]

I like it, it's nice!! ;)
Well thank at least some is nice!

Can some one plz make this bigger its pissing me off:

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/Rayquaza975/P1.jpg

[Roy-Kun]

piss off okay!i don't need this crap from u right now i would conserd this as flamming u know!
Yeah you have a relaxed nature -_-;; so why do you write "crap" and "piss off"? you must try patiente

the sprites are ok, we mean: you must put a comic, this is a comic section, you must had done at least one

[King Boo]

Well are u blind,yes i am relaxaed when i am with me mates not gangsters who pick on me!

[Roy-Kun]

yeah forget it

The comic, i tried, still it looks too bright, try by yourself in paint

[Cowrie]

piss off okay!i don't need this crap from u right now i would conserd this as flamming u know!
And I would consider that to be flaming.

Quit it with the posts like that, and respond to things in a decent manner.

[King Boo]

And I would consider that to be flaming.

Quit it with the posts like that, and respond to things in a decent manner.
Well tell them to stop it plz!

[Goatman56]

There doing what they do. This comic is awful! If you want to act like this, then do. But its not going to help you get fans. Your comic needs alot of work. I advise you to read a tutorial...I mean it.

[skie]

Ya! One panel comics always SUCK!! To meny episodes is the main reason
I'm sorry Ray!I'm not sayin' your comics are crappy just onies are like the lowest form comics evah!

[King Boo]

I know what u mean so did u have a good look at them?

[Karasuma]

You want me to take a good look? *Takes a closer look at the Ash sprite* Okay now tell where did you got the Ash sprite? That better not be mine!>.<

[Roy-Kun]

alright the comics are great, but you need to make more pannels, just one isn't enough

[King Boo]

You want me to take a good look? *Takes a closer look at the Ash sprite* Okay now tell where did you got the Ash sprite? That better not be mine!>.<
Well trunks i hade a look at your comic last night pretty good i must say but i got this ash of seribinet!i will make more comics now ok!

[skie]

*Fweeeee* Oh the Horror of the one pannel

[King Boo]

Well its the only way to make it big so...read all of them!

[skie]

*Fweeeee* I did but you need to stop hatin' Rave *cough evil person cough*

[King Boo]

Owww do i have to?Damm but him my wrost enmey infact he is my ARCH ENMEY! :dead:

[skie]

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/5652/lameexcuses4fx.png
*Hits Daviku in the head with a stick* Bad Mr. Daviku-Man!!!

[King Boo]

With a stick hahahahahaaha,u sound like u were drunk or something!

[Ark Kuvis]

Oh great, I got hit my an imaginary stick. that doesn't mean that your better than me or anything, cuz your comics still suck.
JPEG is not your friend. PNG is.
One Pannel of crap = blah
and, you should know that there are only two good Pokemon comics ever. Pokemon X, and Pokemon Egon. (Until I read FRLG Continued) All the rest of these Pokemon Journeys suck. Got it?
Get original Ideas people.

[Esupio]

Well its the only way to make it big so...read all of them!
its not .png makes them that big

[FoxHound!]

wow, I never thought a comic'd be this bad, really, what's the point in a one frame comic? 8 of your issues make aroud 1 of mine, and that's very bad, I mean, these must take 2 minutes each at the most, your grammer is atrocious, as are your manners, someone gives you their honest opinion and you flip out? seriously take a chill pill,
With a stick hahahahahaaha,u sound like u were drunk or something!"
that was pure spam, once again your spelling and grammer was horrible
Graphic wise the comic sucks, it uses default paint colours, and terrible, unshadded very shabby effects


over all you FAIL

there's nothiung remotely good about this comic, cept some of the sprites that you didn't even make, quite frankly you're rude and don't know how to accept critism.

normally I'd put some sympathetic stuff, but really, you flamed one of my best friends here, twice, and you somehow evaded the filters.

[Roy-Kun]

dang dude, you must do more pannels, just one sucks, try to combine them

[King Boo]

wow, I never thought a comic'd be this bad, really, what's the point in a one frame comic? 8 of your issues make aroud 1 of mine, and that's very bad, I mean, these must take 2 minutes each at the most, your grammer is atrocious, as are your manners, someone gives you their honest opinion and you flip out? seriously take a chill pill,

that was pure spam, once again your spelling and grammer was horrible
Graphic wise the comic sucks, it uses default paint colours, and terrible, unshadded very shabby effects


over all you FAIL

there's nothiung remotely good about this comic, cept some of the sprites that you didn't even make, quite frankly you're rude and don't know how to accept critism.

normally I'd put some sympathetic stuff, but really, you flamed one of my best friends here, twice, and you somehow evaded the filters.

What is everysones problem,big deal so u don't like my comic i don't give a dam just keep your comics to yourself,u don't see me teasing your jackass comics so "F U"

[Crazy Frogitist]

wow, I never thought a comic'd be this bad, really, what's the point in a one frame comic? 8 of your issues make aroud 1 of mine, and that's very bad, I mean, these must take 2 minutes each at the most, your grammer is atrocious, as are your manners, someone gives you their honest opinion and you flip out? seriously take a chill pill,

that was pure spam, once again your spelling and grammer was horrible
Graphic wise the comic sucks, it uses default paint colours, and terrible, unshadded very shabby effects


over all you FAIL

there's nothiung remotely good about this comic, cept some of the sprites that you didn't even make, quite frankly you're rude and don't know how to accept critism.

normally I'd put some sympathetic stuff, but really, you flamed one of my best friends here, twice, and you somehow evaded the filters.

vaati? (is that his name)? if you are saying rayquaza something has bad spelling 'n' grammar your spelling got a problem too :D. since i'm 11 and you are 15 you still have mistakes in your post, in this sentence:

that was pure spam, once again your spelling and grammer was horrible

you said grammer, what the? i knew that was grammar but you don't have to blame everything on rayquaza something, don't you ;)

rayquaza 979? (I think) next time don't do JPEG pics do PNG pics or GIF pics ok pal :classic: *whew*

[King Boo]

vaati? (is that his name)? if you are saying rayquaza something has bad spelling 'n' grammar your spelling got a problem too :D in this sentence:

that was pure spam, once again your spelling and grammer was horrible

you said grammer, what the? i knew that was grammar but you don't have to blame everything on rayquaza something, don't you ;)

rayquaza 979? (I think) next time don't do JPEG pics do PNG pics or GIF pics ok pal :classic: *whew*
Sure,thankz ALOT pal!:classic:

[Crazy Frogitist]

by da way rayquaza 975 (your user name is really hard to remember) you are 14, aren't you? work on your spriting pal

[Dragon-Chan]

Did you get permission from all those people to be in your comic? Anyway, i'd like to join:
http://www.jhgghyu.com/images/spriteofmetinysheet.PNG

[Crazy Frogitist]

not bad sprites dragon!! your pics looks a bit evil

[King Boo]

Did you get permission from all those people to be in your comic? Anyway, i'd like to join:
http://www.jhgghyu.com/images/spriteofmetinysheet.PNG
Yes,sure you'll be in one of the next epsidoe's!

[Crazy Frogitist]

rayquaza check your private message

[King Boo]

rayquaza check your private message
I did,yeah u can!,skie is too!

[Draginis]

Oh,the SPAM is killing me...
Anyways,you were in the wrong.Vaati pretty much beat me to the punch on what needed to be said.
I'll just go with the crowd one this one and say:
wtf is with the one panels?
It's not a bad comic,but it's just really blurry and you really do need to work on your spelling and grammar.
Don't attack me ;) Just throwing in my two cents.

[Swizzler121]

Ok, You need some help with this and please don't have another flaming fit because all forums are for are for C&C so that's what were doing!

1.you are rushing, STOP it is greatly reducing the quality
Reasons I can tell:
-Made with paint
--Solution: Go to google and search 'grapics gale Free edition download' it is a much better program.

-Drawings careless
--Solution: Slow down and redo as many times as you see fit (Ctrl+z is my fav shortcut[undo])

-Grammar careless
--Solution: you are 14 now, you've taken spelling all of your life, USE IT!! not meaning as an insult, but if you want to work for a comic company, they won't be impressed by this, Go through and read what you wrote.

-Edit some of the text colors/sizes, they are hard to read
--Speaks for its self

-Stop blaiming other things, It's your rushing causing the problems, Im sorry to say that the following statement is true:


I know it is somewhat inapropriate, but true, you are the only one to blame for the quality of this comic.

http://img250.imageshack.us/img250/9359/lameexcuses4fx0ib.png

The truth is that you won't get pampered into a world class job, You can't make these and expect marvel to be regular subscribers, Hey, you can ignore anything I have said up here but, the truth will always show.

[King Boo]

Ok, You need some help with this and please don't have another flaming fit because all forums are for are for C&C so that's what were doing!

1.you are rushing, STOP it is greatly reducing the quality
Reasons I can tell:
-Made with paint
--Solution: Go to google and search 'grapics gale Free edition download' it is a much better program.

-Drawings careless
--Solution: Slow down and redo as many times as you see fit (Ctrl+z is my fav shortcut[undo])

-Grammar careless
--Solution: you are 14 now, you've taken spelling all of your life, USE IT!! not meaning as an insult, but if you want to work for a comic company, they won't be impressed by this, Go through and read what you wrote.

-Edit some of the text colors/sizes, they are hard to read
--Speaks for its self

-Stop blaiming other things, It's your rushing causing the problems, Im sorry to say that the following statement is true:


I know it is somewhat inapropriate, but true, you are the only one to blame for the quality of this comic.


The truth is that you won't get pampered into a world class job, You can't make these and expect marvel to be regular subscribers, Hey, you can ignore anything I have said up here but, the truth will always show.
Ok i know i know,but flaming me what for,as u can see im a frist time spirter and only discovered pokemon fourms since July so u could say something nice not that im agianst u but I REALLY SUCK WHEN IT COMES TO GRAMMER,and im sorry but i can;t help it!

[Draginis]

Ya know kid,there's a difference between "Flamming" and "critism"
The only reason why they're giving you harsh comments now is because you obviously don't accept critism in it's natural state.And I'm pretty sure you can stop yourself from using bad grammar,it's not that hard.And if you're a first time spriter,maybe you should practice up a bit before something like this occurs.And you're flamming a lot more than the rest of us.No,I have nothing against you.But you could be understanding with crits.Because such a thing excists.
AND you can't expect people to be nice to you when you flip out just because someone's opinion poked you.
I'm not flamming you,merely trying to get the point across.Just take the advice given,and all will be well.AND this will be all I have to say if you drop this where it is.
Peace.

[Crazy Frogitist]

oh rayquaza, here's gary's back that u wanted http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/2451/frlgjapscr192nl.png (http://imageshack.us)

[King Boo]

oh rayquaza, here's gary's back that u wanted http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/2451/frlgjapscr192nl.png (http://imageshack.us)
Whatever dude,No if it's ok i wanted his back pose in the battle scean but thats allright!

[Swizzler121]

At least download grapics gale, It's a good program for beginners, And Just because your a beginner spriter doesn't mean you cant spend a little more time on the comics (expecally 1 frame comics) and because it's such a small window, another thing I forgot to add is that they go by way to fast! I think they would be cool if you rolled out 2 close together comics twice a week, instead of such a hurried load, ya know what I mean?

[King Boo]

At least download grapics gale, It's a good program for beginners, And Just because your a beginner spriter doesn't mean you cant spend a little more time on the comics (expecally 1 frame comics) and because it's such a small window, another thing I forgot to add is that they go by way to fast! I think they would be cool if you rolled out 2 close together comics twice a week, instead of such a hurried load, ya know what I mean?
Yeah good idea thankz!,ding-ding!

[Crazy Frogitist]

Whatever dude,No if it's ok i wanted his back pose in the battle scean but thats allright!
u said u wanna't in da private messages and did u just call me a dude? i hate u calling me a dude, mate, just stop calling me a dude, ok pal? *squash rayquaza's tail with 23 tone statelite and punch rayquaza in da eye* :P (feeling much better after da punching and squashing :P :P )

[King Boo]

Not u,i called Swizzler121 dude!:dead:

[Crazy Frogitist]

mr. rayquaza u suppose to tell me that earlier

[King Boo]

mr. rayquaza u suppose to tell me that earlier
Mr IM 14!,i did allready! :\

[Crazy Frogitist]

Mr IM 14!,i did allready! :\

sorry i don't understand. :\ i meant that u suppose tell me that 30mins ago

[King Boo]

sorry i don't understand. :\ i meant that u suppose tell me that 30mins ago
OOPS,nice Trainer card i like it!

[Crazy Frogitist]

OOPS,nice Trainer card i like it!

whose trainer card? whose trainer card?

[King Boo]

*slaps himself in the face*Whos do u think(i sound like a drunk)

[Crazy Frogitist]

*slaps himself in the face*Whos do u think(i sound like a drunk)

yours, u do sound like a drunk (sorry 4 offtopic people) do u know i'm just being stupid? have u read a book from andy griffths called just stupid?

[FoxHound!]

by da way rayquaza 975 (your user name is really hard to remember) you are 14, aren't you? work on your spriting pal
And you critisize my one typo?

da isn't a word

and in a sentance "i" should be "I"

Raq...who ever you are you should really learn to take critisism, we're allowed to post our opinions, only a n00b respounds like that.

[King Boo]

And you critisize my one typo?

da isn't a word

and in a sentance "i" should be "I"

Raq...who ever you are you should really learn to take critisism, we're allowed to post our opinions, only a n00b respounds like that.
What ever,Crazy Frogitist he has a point!

[Ark Kuvis]

Vaati has more than 9 points.
You suck at comic making and you suck cuz you flamed me because of my opinion.
MORE THAN ONE PANNEL
JPEGS ARE BAD
SPECIAL EFFECTS IN THIS COMIC ARE REALLY BAD
MOST CHARATERS IN THIS COMIC ARE MADE BADLY
YOU ARE NOT GARY, BUT I'M GLAD YOU ARE NOT A CRAPPY RECOLOR.

Take the advice or leave it.

[King Boo]

Vaati has more than 9 points.
You suck at comic making and you suck cuz you flamed me because of my opinion.
MORE THAN ONE PANNEL
JPEGS ARE BAD
SPECIAL EFFECTS IN THIS COMIC ARE REALLY BAD
MOST CHARATERS IN THIS COMIC ARE MADE BADLY
YOU ARE NOT GARY, BUT I'M GLAD YOU ARE NOT A CRAPPY RECOLOR.

Take the advice or leave it.
**** u,come agian!~:D :D :D :D(I HATE THIS POST LIMIT CRAP)

[Cowrie]

...Sigh.

Enough with the spam - it stops now. Keep posts on-topic, and keep the heated language out of here. I know I've already mentioned something about that before.

This is this thread's warning.

[King Boo]

...Sigh.

Enough with the spam - it stops now. Keep posts on-topic, and keep the heated language out of here. I know I've already mentioned something about that before.

This is this thread's warning.
Thankz i will try! :D :) :p

[Dragon-Chan]

MSPaint isn't the problem. I use only MSPaint and GIMP the special effects, but my comics are still halfway decent (except the first few >.<).
A few tips:
-If you're rushing, it reduces the quality, regardless of your sprite comic ability. SLOW DOWN.
-Comics look much, MUCH better when they're saved as .PNG. .JPEG makes them blurry, grainy and just plain hard to read.
-Comics do a lot better if the grammatical errors are kept down to a minimum.
6/10

[King Boo]

MSPaint isn't the problem. I use only MSPaint and GIMP the special effects, but my comics are still halfway decent (except the first few >.<).
A few tips:
-If you're rushing, it reduces the quality, regardless of your sprite comic ability. SLOW DOWN.
-Comics look much, MUCH better when they're saved as .PNG. .JPEG makes them blurry, grainy and just plain hard to read.
-Comics do a lot better if the grammatical errors are kept down to a minimum.
6/10
Yeah thankz i know now how to save on PNG so u can now see it better!

[Draginis]

It looks SO much better as .png :P
I actually kinda like it.But you really got to stop with the one panels.(and the SPAM)
The newer ones are a lot better than the first few.Keep working at it.^_^

[King Boo]

It looks SO much better as .png :P
I actually kinda like it.But you really got to stop with the one panels.(and the SPAM)
The newer ones are a lot better than the first few.Keep working at it.^_^
Thankz,the one pannels are just beacuse whe they look all togather there small as,so im just wondering dose PNG make it look bigger,if so i will make 4pannels so every one is happy thankz to nicoelb for showing me how to do PNG i had no clue what it was but now i know so it should come oout better any suggestions please pm me and if u want to be in the comic just post and i work some thing out!

From Rayquaza975(its 975 Crazy Frogitist)

[Swizzler121]

*If you used Graphics Gale*

See, It is a much easier Art program!
(I'm starting to like your comic!)

And Finnaly:
http://img316.imageshack.us/img316/1821/shapeup4fx0kf.png

[King Boo]

*If you used Graphics Gale*

See, It is a much easier Art program!
(I'm starting to like your comic!)
Thankz alot man see if i could of done this early(im such an idot)

[Recknin]

no realy this sucks what daviku said is right
this is a piece of crap

[Draginis]

Um,that's just pointless critism.You didn't even specify what you didn't like or what you thought could be improved.Next time,keep your rude opinions to yourself.

[Recknin]

Um,that's just pointless critism.You didn't even specify what you didn't like or what you thought could be improved.Next time,keep your rude opinions to yourself.

who the heck do think you are i'm not rude
its the truth

[reasons]
1.to short per chapters
2.the storyline could be better
3.but more efort in it hen

[King Boo]

Um,that's just pointless critism.You didn't even specify what you didn't like or what you thought could be improved.Next time,keep your rude opinions to yourself.
Im make my point agian i don't care if u hate my topic i cre if u post more than once critising my comic just find something asle to do,i said it once and i will say it agian Ok so i edmit it my comic got really crap at te start because i did'nt know how to do PNG o well i do now so THERE,thank u Gardevoir but i can take care of my self i am 14 u might not belive me but hey i can't blame yah so Ruby-adams u could get banned for flaming this comic because Cowire warned this topic and whoever flames it will get warned so i would'nt do that if i were u! :badsmile:

[FoxHound!]

who the heck do think you are i'm not rude
its the truth

[reasons]
1.to short per chapters
2.the storyline could be better
3.but more efort in it hen
wow, way to go contridict yourself

and rayquaza guy, when Cowrie warned the thread that meant that if the flaming and spamming continued then she'd lock it, not ban people.

[Recknin]

Im make my point agian i don't care if u hate my topic i cre if u post more than once critising my comic just find something asle to do,i said it once and i will say it agian Ok so i edmit it my comic got really crap at te start because i did'nt know how to do PNG o well i do now so THERE,thank u Gardevoir but i can take care of my self i am 14 u might not belive me but hey i can't blame yah so Ruby-adams u could get banned for flaming this comic because Cowire warned this topic and whoever flames it will get warned so i would'nt do that if i were u! :badsmile:

fine sorry for bein rude i'm like that
sometimes but stil,try to improve
your comics

[King Boo]

fine sorry for bein rude i'm like that
sometimes but stil,try to improve
your comics
Np,i will try to soo if u guys want to be in the comic just pm me ok!

Agian with the flaming why don't we just forget about a...and start all over agian! :chinese:

[Ark Kuvis]

Use Mircosoft word. Stop making one pannel comics. Text on the bottom of a comic makes the comic unorganized. The Special effects still suck. same as this comic.

[Karasuma]

http://img316.imageshack.us/img316/1821/shapeup4fx0kf.png[/QUOTE]

Nice one, do you have a luigi one? :D

Anyway, This comic is very cool, I don't see why everyones fighting about. Just keep it up big Ray.

[Ark Kuvis]

http://img316.imageshack.us/img316/1821/shapeup4fx0kf.png

Nice one, do you have a luigi one? :D

Anyway, This comic is very cool, I don't see why everyones fighting about. Just keep it up big Ray.[/QUOTE]
That's my friend's. And no, there is no Luigi >>;

[King Boo]

Nice one, do you have a luigi one? :D

Anyway, This comic is very cool, I don't see why everyones fighting about. Just keep it up big Ray.
That's my friend's. And no, there is no Luigi >>;[/QUOTE]
Daviku what is your problem?,every one has stoped flaming but U,just stop posting in this topic,no on wonder your a loner! :dead:

[Ark Kuvis]

You are a n00b. I wasn't even flaming you. I was giving you critism. I might start flaming you if you don't listen.
I got friends. Not on this forum though. Cept Vaati. He's one who is on my side. take my advice and your comic may be slightly better.

[King Boo]

Can some one tell me what he said cause he's on my ignore list!

[Karasuma]

Dudes please dont fight. Your gonna make rays thread close. I think I see cowrie looking at this thread.

[Ark Kuvis]

God your a n00b......go get banned or somthing. i'm giving you tips on how to improve and your being imature & childish.
Dudes please dont fight. Your gonna make rays thread close. I think I see cowrie looking at this thread.
Go play in trafic. Or make a stupid reveiw in a comic. You don't know what a good comic is. Read a good one BEFORE you give crappy advice.

[King Boo]

Can someone tell me what he said,o well just ignore him i gusee! :D

[Karasuma]

God your a n00b......go get banned or somthing. i'm giving you tips on how to improve and your being imature & childish.

Go play in trafic. Or make a stupid reveiw in a comic. You don't know what a good comic is. Read a good one BEFORE you give crappy advice.

Sure dude but we dont want to break his motivation. give him a chance he can do good. Peace out.

[King Boo]

Sure dude but we dont want to break his motivation. give him a chance he can do good. Peace out.
Thank u'p :D :D :D(dam i REALLY HATE THIS LIMIT CRAP)

[Dragon-Chan]

Ignore Daviku. He only thinks masterful comics are worth reading. v_v;;

[Karasuma]

Nah Daviku is a good guy as well. Just make some more panels okay^^?

[King Boo]

In the next saga!:D:D:D:D

[Ark Kuvis]

look, stfu and listen.
My comic were bad. Hell, HORIBLE. Two toned backrounds, crappy plot, fourth wall broken, etc. My comics were shunded upon on another comic forum. I thought I was good. I wasn't. I got better and better. Now I can tell what a good comic is, and what a bad comic is. This, is a bad comic.

[Dragon-Chan]

Wow, you have that post copied and pasted. I saw that exact same post on TDT's thread. v_v

[Karasuma]

You're downright bashing and flaming now. Stop it.

[Dragon-Chan]

All right, i'll admit that his comic needs work, but there are zones other than 'slightly good' and 'stop making comics'.

[Ark Kuvis]

All right, i'll admit that his comic needs work, but there are zones other than 'slightly good' and 'stop making comics'.
His is at "Stop making comics"

[Karasuma]

Advice? Try blaming. Also, I looked at the reply count before I posted this, and it read 666. The flame war has done something to this thread. If a mod could split the whole flame area from the thread, I would appreciate it.

[Dragon-Chan]

TDT made that exact same post on his thread. v_v

[Aisu K.]

look, stfu and listen.
My comic were bad. Hell, HORIBLE. Two toned backrounds, crappy plot, fourth wall broken, etc. My comics were shunded upon on another comic forum. I thought I was good. I wasn't. I got better and better. Now I can tell what a good comic is, and what a bad comic is. This, is a bad comic.

YOU POSTED THE EXACT SAME THING AT MY THREAD!!! Are you looking for comic makers to blam? You've made me say this. I'm usually peaceful, but hear this: Get a life.

[Dragon-Chan]

I'm beginning to think he just hates all Pokemon comics except maybe Signomi's.

[Karasuma]

Okay. I just wish Daviku wasn't a semi-flamer.

[Dragon-Chan]

All right, now you copied MY post!

[Aisu K.]

I'm beginning to think he just hates all Pokemon comics except maybe Signomi's.

Yeah. In fact, I warned her about this guy. I want to get the word out to every artist I know.

[Dragon-Chan]

Good idea. His idea of a good comic is, most probably, a heavily animated one.

[Karasuma]

Daviku, did you really use to be a critic this harsh? v_v;; I'll bet you're also the one who rated my jokes as '1' on my sprite comic thread.

[Dragon-Chan]

Hey! QUIT COPYING MY POSTS!

[Aisu K.]

Daviku, did you really use to be a critic this harsh? v_v;; I'll bet you're also the one who rated my jokes as '1' on my sprite comic thread.

Stop copying our posts!! It's plagirism.

[Dragon-Chan]

And really boring. And it makes no sense.

[Ark Kuvis]

Yeah. In fact, I warned her about this guy. I want to get the word out to every artist I know.
HELLO N00B TOWN.
Seriously, you guys suck. "ZOMFG YOU SUCK CUZ MY COMIC PWNS ALL". Go to VGF, PT, hell Serebii is better than you. I never "Flamed" you, till you flamed me. The truth, your comics suck. Make a good one. PLZ.
I don't need your flaming at me. I know I'm right.

[Dragon-Chan]

You didn't flame in the first place, you just used criticism far too harsh for a newbie. And who was saying that their comics pwned all? We're trying to say our comics are halfway decent.

[Karasuma]

He's mixing styles becuase specific people in his comic are choosing to use the kirby/espio/whatever sprites to represent themselves. As if it's his fault.

[Dragon-Chan]

You copied my post AGAIN!!!!

Now, before I get banned, i'm going to exit the flame war with the conclusion that Davik just doesn't like Pokemon comics.

[skie]

RAWR!!! *Beats in head with stick* Flamer! May the thousand fires of Ho-oh BURN Your corpse!!!!
P.s. I reported your butt! *Report*

[Dragon-Chan]

Who, me? and now, I mean that i'm REALLY going to exit this time.

[skie]

No not you DC *leaves flame war too*

[Aisu K.]

HELLO N00B TOWN.
Seriously, you guys suck. "ZOMFG YOU SUCK CUZ MY COMIC PWNS ALL". Go to VGF, PT, hell Serebii is better than you. I never "Flamed" you, till you flamed me. The truth, your comics suck. Make a good one. PLZ.
I don't need your flaming at me. I know I'm right.

If you would've just said,
"Your comic isn't too good. It needs improvment.
Here is some advice..." None of this would be happening. BTW, leave Skie's comic series out of this. If you post there,...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v499/TyranitarDragonTrainer/spam.gifLook at my sig. 1000's of people are dying right now thanks to you.

[Dragon-Chan]

Fine, i'll come abck, but as a neutral. Don't drag anyone else's comic into this, please, Dav. Just because your comics pwn doesn't mean everyone elses' suck. We really shouldn't be flaming Dav, though...
And cool animation, TDT, but he isn't exactly spamming

[Aisu K.]

If we forget all about this, Dav., stop "commenting" so we can get this situation under control. The sooner this is over, the better.

[Dragon-Chan]

See banner below. Have pity on the poor dragons.

[Ark Kuvis]

Sorry, but if I stop "commenting", how will PC get better?
I think the comic hunters will be visiting shortly. (Note, we aren't some big old flaming gang. We do the same thing that I did right now) I may have been a little harsh in TDT's thread. But I was true with this comic. Sorry to dissapoint.
EDIT: It's "Davis". k?

[Dragon-Chan]

PC will get better if you give advice on how to make the comic better as your comments instead of just saying that it sucks.

[Aisu K.]

Sorry, but if I stop "commenting", how will PC get better?
I think the comic hunters will be visiting shortly. (Note, we aren't some big old flaming gang. We do the same thing that I did right now) I may have been a little harsh in TDT's thread. But I was true with this comic. Sorry to dissapoint.
EDIT: It's "Davis". k?

A. That's what tutorials are for.
B. Comic hunters??
C. Just be sure to not use harsh words during criticism.

[Cowrie]

Oi!

Too much flaming and spamming.

No matter how rude someone is (or seems to be), do NOT flame them back. All it does is make matters worse and spam up threads.

I'm closing this thread now, as it's already had its warning. Go ahead and start another thread if you like, Rayquaza975. Remember, keep the spam and flames out, though!

*closed*