a random comic i randomly decided to make 1 day

[random person 95]

I was at school yesterday when my freind said that his comic was better than mine, of course at the time i didn't even have a comic so i guess this was true. :nervous: Nethertheless i decided to prove him wrong by making 1, I randomly got some sprites and couldn't come up with any idaes whatsoever untill i had the excellent idea to make a time-traveling chicken! I've only actually dun 1 eppisode so far and his is way, way , way better still. Anyway tell me what you think of the comic (and yes i know it's rubbish so don't point that out) :surprised

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a296/tuppo03/chicky.jpg

i can see pictures now! I'm very happy :D :D

YAY i've actually finished the second & third one! okay so they're not very good, but i don't really mind. Credit for the odd monkey thing goes to my 7 year old sister who doesn't have an acount on here yet

(just to remind you i know it's rubbish so don't point that out) :bandit:

click here (http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a296/tuppo03/cp6.png) for the very first eppisode entitled chicky zaps evil dude
click here (http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a296/tuppo03/Tuppo1.png) for something chris did for me!
click here (http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a296/tuppo03/cp2.png) for the second eppisode entitled chicky ingnites monkey
click here (http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a296/tuppo03/pc7.png) for my third eppisode entitled a random walk in the woods
click here (http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a296/tuppo03/cp5.png) for my fourth eppisode entitled a monkey surprise

okay, last night I had an hour spare between my homework and my parents getting home so I could play something, I decide to make the most rediculous eppisode yet and I succeded. :P anyway here (http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a296/tuppo03/pc8.png) it is! ;)

[Signomi]

Please refrain from double posting. The panels look a tad bit messy, did you try resizing them?

[random person 95]

hmm what r panels? ??????

[Signomi]

The pictures. Along with the text boxes beneath them.

[Adam_148]

and guess what George, yours is crap, mines way better than yours, time-travelling chicken, any way, I think everyone should know that you are Spam Monkey, just to make me feel better, and don't double post, and give it a proper title. Yes Signomi, he did try resizing them, you call this Pokemon, if your using Pokemon graphics, use Pokemon characters as well!

[random person 95]

hi adam, that's a really great comic, okay so it's not quite up to your standards quite but it soon will be! And yes the chicken was chris's idea, blame him!

and your not meant to tell people i'm spam monkey i'll get banned agen (i've been banned 4 times alredy)

[Adam_148]

it rebels against all laws of good comics it's the worstn one ever AND STOP SPAMMING EVEN IF IT IS YOUR COMIC!

[Signomi]

Adam, I don't think that was neccessary. Calling it crap, and saying that your comic is better than his. He's only just started! He's still got to do more comics until it gets a proper rating. And you being a friend of his I thought you'd know better. And don't try discouraging him.

Well, for now, please don't resize the panels, leave them as how they were created ^_^ And try using a different font of the text, may I suggest Verdana or Tahoma? Well. Don't give up. Keep at it.

[random person 95]

chris said you'd like it....
oh well, and what r panels???

[Adam_148]

okay Signomi, but come on and now I am being serious the kid is obsessed with monkeys

[random person 95]

what u on 'bout? monkeys?
and plz tall me what panels r???

[Adam_148]

what u on 'bout? monkeys?
You are obsessed with monkeys, Random Person who thinks MT's comic is crap and thinks that his comic is better than MT's

[random person 95]

who the heck is MT??? and what r panels???

oh yeah and it was chris's idea 4 tht evil guy mine for the chicken

[Esupio]

this is pathetic
nothing good
NEVER MIX SPRITE BITAGES

[Adam_148]

he's Mystic Trunks you twat, and Signomi explained what panels were a couple of posts ago

[random person 95]

well i guess it cud be a little bit better, what's a spritebitages and panels every1 is confusing me, i haven't really thought 'bout what happens next...

[Adam_148]

Blaze can explain what sprite bittages are, but panels, here:
Panels are the pictures that you create, and Signomi, about a few posts ago, he had to resize it and then save as a PNG file

[The Dash]

Panels are the frames with the pictures in. And sorry but this comic looks awful, the font, the characters, the graphics...its all terrible. 1/10

[random person 95]

oh so the panels r the pictures, that makes sense
so what spritebitages?

Hurray a 1\10 better than i could have dreamed possible! :D

[The Dash]

Im not sure but i think its because you made the sprites all bitmaped (fuzy) . I think thats what it is. And Adam ..Seriously hes your freind yet your calling him a twat....HAS SOMEONE RE-DETERMINED THE MEANING OF FREINDSHIP!?

[Adam_148]

Well I give it a 0.00000000000000000000000000001/10
Edit: No Dash, no-one has redifined the meaning of friend, it's just that "Random Guy" is self-obsessed, and obsessed with monkeys *coughcoughcoughhe'sspammonkeycoughcoughcough*

[random person 95]

I don't know why but he takes criticism ver seriously, (If I called his comic rubbish at school he would probably be strngling me rite now) but he can be nice when he wants to be

PS: cud sum1 tell me how 2 check if sum1's on??/

a 0,0000000000000000001/10 now thts just dissapointing

[Signomi]

Adam. You're acting like a snob. Stop it. He's your friend and you should try and atleast be supportive. From what I see you're not really helping. I don't really see why you have to act so stuck up.

Anyway. If you're going to do another part to the comic, random person 95, then try taking your time by looking at how you can tidy the neatness of the quality of the pictures. Also try to make what the characters say seem interesting, right now it doesn't really look appealing to me. But never the less, I believe you can still improve by making the next part better. So like I said before, Keep at it.

[random person 95]

Well I give it a 0.00000000000000000000000000001/10
Edit: No Dash, no-one has redifined the meaning of friend, it's just that "Random Guy" is self-obsessed, and obsessed with monkeys *coughcoughcoughhe'sspammonkeycoughcoughcough*

*cough*moron*cough*

PS: i just realised I did my 10th post! YAY!

[Adam_148]

What?! I just said he's a self obsessed lunatic, who believes Monkey's will one day take over the world!
Anyway, I think he should at least make up a name for evil dude, and put real Pokemon in it and it'll be good, not now though

[random person 95]

okay i'm gonna do a second 1 only it's gona be slightly better than the first! and yes i'll consider giving evil dude a name, and tht chicken is a real pokemon tht i made up :classic:

i'm off now 2 make the second 1!!! :nervous:

[Signomi]

What?! I just said he's a self obsessed lunatic, who believes Monkey's will one day take over the world!

Is that really a good reason just to have a go at him like that? No. That wasn't. That changes nothing.

And I think that's a good idea.

[random person 95]

eehhhhrr when i tried 2 put pokemon sprites in it just said invalid image size, this is very confusing....

[Smarties-chan]

From what I have seen so far it looks pretty bad... the comic looks blurry and the text is hard to read. I believe you can do better though. Keep at it, I want to see you improve =) And adamski, you haven't exactly encouraged random person 95...

What?! I just said he's a self obsessed lunatic, who believes Monkey's will one day take over the world!
So, what? I believe in the great cradily and the all mighty banana phone o_O

[FoxHound!]

dam, shut the bloomin hell up now, you foolish n00b, sheesh, part from Dash, smarty arty and Signomi you all fail at giving critisim, sheesh...Adam your comic isn't exactly aweosme but we don't call you a twat and whatnot, you oughta treat your friends better ya stupid fool.

bout the comic, iy looks quite bad to be honest, try using pokemon sprites, and use sketch/scew for resizing, the spelling, from what I read wasn't bad, just try a lil harder k?

[random person 95]

i've tried putting pokemon sprites in but it says error invalid image size, any1 know how to fix it?

[Karasuma]

who the heck is MT??? and what r panels???

oh yeah and it was chris's idea 4 tht evil guy mine for the chicken

Hello I'm MT and yes your comic is so-so. But I know this will get better.Just keep trying.

[random person 95]

thx but nones answered my earlier question, how do i check if people r on???

[Karasuma]

thx but nones answered my earlier question, how do i check if people r on???

Just go on the who's online member list.

[random person 95]

I can't start my second 1 till i figure out how to get the pokemon sprites in, if it come up with invalid image size, do I make it bigger or smaller?

hmm i'm the only person here...

[Adam_148]

Don't just use RPGMaker, you can put them in on paint you know, I think this is good, just don't go saying it's the best ever alright? Sorry Signomi, I'm feeling a bit sick today and after constant annoyance from George all day, I was feeling a little grumpy. George, please use proper Pokemon sized Heroes, not the ones your using, (and Evil Guy, looks like Darth Vader, hehe)

[random person 95]

i wonder why tht is......................

and yet agen i'm the only 1 here...

[Signomi]

random person 95, please don't post twice in a row, it's against the rules here ^^ And try to keep every post you make in this thread connected to the comic. Otherwise it's considered offtopic.

[random person 95]

how do i put the characters in on paint???
I can't figure out how

[Karasuma]

how do i put the characters in on paint???
I can't figure out how

I got a better idea dude, Why don't you PM me and we'll discuss that, otherwise your gonna spam your thread like this. Trust me, you don't want to....

[QFred]

Let me say this, it might offend but... here goes:
THIS SUX!!!

But I think you should improve with advices from masters on this like Signomi, vaati, Adam and MT! Also, the problem might be you use on RMXP other format than JPEG, PNG or PCX!

Paint is better!

[random person 95]

I already know tht, tht's why I put not to point tht out at the start!

YAY my 20th post! :D

[Space Guard]

Random person, i have one bad comment to make. Please use CAPITAL LETTERS. Apart from that I thought for a first timer it was actually pretty good. My rating-7/10
(P.S I did not come up with the idea for the chicken)

[random person 95]

i know earlier on i said tht hehe, and if it was any1 elses it wud only get 1/10 but thx anyway!

[The Dash]

RP to inser sprites into Paint you need to :
1. Get a sprite sheet
2. Crop the sprite you want
3. Put it on a background.

Its simple really.

Oh and off topic: Monkeys have already inherited the earth because really we ARE monkeys.

[random person 95]

thx thxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthx

[Karasuma]

thx thxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthx

Please don't spam or they'll close this. :(

[Recknin]

oh yeah umm...hey dude! this is a piece of crap
no realy am gona spam this crap as much as i fell like and i hope it gets
locked:cool: :cool: :cool:

[FoxHound!]

oh yeah umm...hey dude! this is a piece of crap
no realy am gona spam this crap as much as i fell like and i hope it gets
locked:cool: :cool: :cool:
Aren't you retarded?

seriously dude, you're the one that fails,I've never seen you give constractive crit, EVER...and what's more is that you didn't even make your own entry to the sprite comp, so you can't laugh at him for not doing well...at least he done it himeslf.

[Recknin]

Aren't you retarded?

seriously dude, you're the one that fails,I've never seen you give constractive crit, EVER...and what's more is that you didn't even make your own entry to the sprite comp, so you can't laugh at him for not doing well...at least he done it himeslf.
what the heck does this have to do with u anyway
[mind ur own business

[FoxHound!]

Unlike you I'm trying to help the poor guy, and for the love of god please use proper spelling and grammer, just because you're most likely a chav doesen't mean you have to spell how you speak.

[Recknin]

Unlike you I'm trying to help the poor guy, and for the love of god please use proper spelling and grammer, just because you're most likely a chav doesen't mean you have to spell how you speak.
so i take it that ur from england,chav,dude i'v seen better comics than this before

[random person 95]

i'be actually made a second 1 !!! YAY

[Recknin]

i'be actually made a second 1 !!! YAY
*gasp*u'v actualy made a second 1 !!! no

[random person 95]

you sound like my comic is going to end the world....

[Karasuma]

you sound like my comic is going to end the world....

Well lets see, these are really good. The only prob is the way the buidings are the use of the overworld sprites. But the plot looks awesome.

[random person 95]

the plot so far is just chicky blowing up evildude and a monkey

[Karasuma]

the plot so far is just chicky blowing up evildude and a monkey

I know. thats why its really good. You should keep up. We all start like this, then we get better and better and better.

[random person 95]

i'm gonna make something interesting happen in the next 1, probably

[Recknin]

the plot so far is just chicky blowing up evildude and a monkey
ur comic is getting better but whats with the F*****G ape

[random person 95]

My little sister made the monkey and wanted me 2 put it in so i did =)

[Recknin]

and could'nt the guy's pokemon be more exiting then a bird

[random person 95]

hurray i managed to get a talking monkey thing in there!
(iv'e decided they'll all talk in mine)

[Space Guard]

The next episode is Fantastic Random person. Keep it up I and I may give you a reward. (90 star wars avatars!!)

(P.SUnlike you I'm trying to help the poor guy, and for the love of god please use proper spelling and grammer, just because you're most likely a chav doesen't mean you have to spell how you speak.
You spelt grammar wrong. I should know as I go to a grammar school)

[FoxHound!]

I always spell it wrong, check any thread

well I'm glad to see the comic has improved slightly.

[Adam_148]

The 3rd eppy was hilarious

Jeff: Oh, no! I just got electrocuted!
PS. Hilarios in a very weird way :p

[random person 95]

tht wasn't meant to be funny, oh well

PS: I redid eppy 1

[Karasuma]

tht wasn't meant to be funny, oh well

PS: I redid eppy 1

Now its better than ever.

[random person 95]

YAY a comic that is mainly made up of complete nonsense exactly what I wanted

+evil dude gets a name!

[Recknin]

YAY a comic that is mainly made up of complete nonsense exactly what I wanted

+evil dude gets a name!
i need some ketchup mum plz

[random person 95]

why do you need ketchup??????????

[Kylie-chan]

Don't reply to ruby-adams's post; it was total spam, and if everyone replied to it, this whole thread would be full of offtopic spam, and it would end up locked. -_-;

[Kylie-chan]

hi adam, that's a really great comic, okay so it's not quite up to your standards quite but it soon will be! And yes the chicken was chris's idea, blame him!

and your not meant to tell people i'm spam monkey i'll get banned agen (i've been banned 4 times alredy)
Congratulations, you just won a free permaban with the works. D;

Also, Adam, there was NO need for that unconstructive flaming on the first page. <<;

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