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Shijuukara
October 24th, 2005, 12:44 AM
Well Here is my sprite comic and its supposably how Alexis and Zach became monks and found out they were Chosen ones and before they joined the Xiaolin Temple in Xiaolin Showdown.

And If you haven't read any of my fics go Here (http://www.fanfiction.net/~xiaolindragon)

I will also update bios and cities and probably even a Cover later.

Locations
http://img449.imageshack.us/img449/8025/city6pd.th.jpg (http://img449.imageshack.us/my.php?image=city6pd.jpg)
http://img477.imageshack.us/img477/6904/secret6zj.th.jpg (http://img477.imageshack.us/my.php?image=secret6zj.jpg)

Characters
http://img477.imageshack.us/img477/6416/mysprite2wobag6ru.jpg
Zach
A stranger, nobody knows much about him he suddenly appeared out of nowhere and moved into Century City

http://img477.imageshack.us/img477/9908/alexis1ja.jpg
Alexis
Alexis moved into Century City from Mexico when she was 10 with her parents and brothers and sisters but when she became 12 her parents died mysteriously and she stayed caring for her brothers and sisters. Everyone says that shes a beautty at such a young age and is still treated as an adult.
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Credit to Signomi for the Sprites and me for the locations
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Chapters V

How It All Began (http://img19.imageshack.us/my.php?image=howitallbegan4fj.jpg)

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I do not own Xiaolin Showdown or Pokemon

I do not like critics but I have to listen to them and I am not going to say "Oh, i did it in a hurry" "I was half asleep" I am not a wannabe I will listen to critics
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If you would like to be in one of my fics please post your Sprite and overoworlds and info and I'll think about what I can do

~~~XiaolinDragon~~~

Akio123
October 24th, 2005, 12:46 AM
I like it. I think it is pretty good. Keep it up!

Shijuukara
October 24th, 2005, 12:49 AM
The intro is in the very begining of my post and the comic is right there in the middle and sorry I thought the sprite was Signomi's can you tell me where may I find Coronis

Edit:
What? why did you change your post?

Karasuma
October 24th, 2005, 12:49 AM
Not bad I love XS and this sprite comic Pwns. Will you have the talking dragon as well, Shenlu?

Can't rate it yet but it rocks

Akio123
October 24th, 2005, 12:51 AM
The intro is in the very begining of my post and the comic is right there in the middle and sorry I thought the sprite was Signomi's can you tell me where may I find Coronis

Edit:
What? why did you change your post?
I think you should e-mail him on Serebii, but I didnt want to be rude and be wrong was the problem.

Shijuukara
October 24th, 2005, 12:51 AM
Not bad I love XS and this sprite comic Pwns. Will you have the talking dragon as well, Shenlu?

Can't rate it yet but it rocks
Thanks and the talking dragons name is Dojo where I'm from and should I add a poll if so what about lol i think its too early for a poll

Edit:
@ Akio oh sorry I didn't know and its ok but on Serebii there are thousands of people how can I find him lol

Akio123
October 24th, 2005, 12:55 AM
Well his name is Coronuis and you can e-mail him from the actual Serebii.net.

jc_rcw
October 24th, 2005, 01:02 AM
This looks great XiaolinDragon.

Shijuukara
October 24th, 2005, 02:18 AM
Well thanks everyone and I'll update i think on friday sorry
~~~XiaolinDragon is goign to be gone cuzof School~~~

Swizzler121
October 24th, 2005, 06:32 AM
the OW's need some work, and the locations are kind of choppy, there are few grammatical errors which is good, with a little improvement this can be a great comic!!

Kyogre Trainer
October 24th, 2005, 04:31 PM
you still need to put them in the right uniform from Xiaolin Showdown

Esupio
October 24th, 2005, 08:01 PM
Not bad I love XS and this sprite comic Pwns. Will you have the talking dragon as well, Shenlu?

Can't rate it yet but it rocks
how can it rock if you cant rate it ??

Shijuukara
October 29th, 2005, 03:57 PM
Hey everyone I'm back and I'll update soon
and not to be rude but the temple was just built so they don't have any uniforms yet but I'm not sure if you actually read the comic and they are about to go inside the Temple
Oh and mind you everyone, this does not take place in China with Omi, Kimiko, Clay, and Raimundo. This is right before Omi went to the Heylin Side and turned into a cat

EDIT:
Sorry you guys but I need to put this on hold for a while I went way ahead of myself on making stuff, and I still need to do a inside temple but I ill make some episodes and not post them so it can be like a lump sum of reading. SOrry again but be sure to look at my next comic which is about only Pokemon.

Adam_148
October 29th, 2005, 04:00 PM
I saw that episode that was funny, Omi was a cat, a very small one, (Spicer went over to the good side hehe) hilarious