Pocket Hearts II ( sequel to my old Pokemon/Kingdom Hearts Rp)

[_One_Winged_Angel_]

This rp takes 2 years after the original Pocket Hearts. The plot is that the portals have opened up again, but just in Kanto, Johto, and Hoenn, and the evil Pokemon Teams have teamed up with Villains from the Kingdom Hearts worlds AGAIN, and the Heartless are back, along with the Thirteenth Order, and the Nobodies! You are a Pokemon trainer who receives a Weapon from the Kingdom Hearts games, and will team up with other trainers who also received weapons. You have 6 fully-evolved, non-legendary Pokemon (Legendaries are summons, like in the original Rp). You are the only ones who can stop all this madness in all the worlds!

Portal List (will add more when more worlds are revealed!)
Twilight Town- LittleRoot Town
Agrabah- Desert Underpass
Pride Lands- Safari Zone (The one in Kanto)
Land of the Dragons- Blackthorn City
Timeless River- Route 24
Port Royale- Olivine City
Destiny Islands- Cinnabar Island
Beast's Castle- Ever Grande City
Atlantica- Cerulean City
Olympus Coliseum- Route 45
Halloween Town- Mt. Pyre
Hollow Bastion- Lake Of Rage
Disney Castle- Celadon City
100 Acre Wood- Viridian Forest
Castle Oblivion- Lilycove City
Deep Dive- Seafloor Cavern

The sign-ups
Name: Eric
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Personality: Hot temper, but a nice guy, has mood swings sometimes
Physical Descriptions
Regular: The boy trainer from Pokemon Emerald.
Halloween Town: A gothic form of the regular.
Timeless River: A black-and-white cartoony version of the regular.
Atlantica: Like the regular, only a merman.
Pridelands: A dark brown teenage lion with a white mane and his Pokeballs around his neck.
Pokemon: Sceptile, Kingdra, Crobat, Rhydon, Gyarados, Donphan
Weapon: Jungle King Keyblade


If you have any questions, please post them on this thread!

[_One_Winged_Angel_]

Please, mods, I posted this thread 3 times because my computer is a piece of crap, please delete this and the thread below it, but leave the newest one alone.

[Nigma]

Do you think somebody would join this time, even if you didn´t chance the plot or didn´t write a history? Strange thing...

[_One_Winged_Angel_]

Well, the history for my character is from the first Pocket Hearts, and oh yeah, I FORGOT the history!

[Alter Ego]

Dude, you seriously haven't learned a thing, have you? First of all, you can't make a friggin' sequel for something that hasn't been finished. As I recall your RP has died two times now before it even got off the ground and now you post it yet again and call it a sequel? Now tell me, how likely is it that this one will get any further?

Look, if your RP doesn't get anywhere it's because there's a problem with the plot. You can post this hastily slapped together piece of writing as many times as you like and I can promise you that it will never amount to anything. <_< Tsk, read some tutorials and get yourself some experienced help. Because there still isn't a plot to speak of, and without a plot there can never be a successfull RP.

[Allelujah Haptism]

You never give up do you? In case you haven't noticed, your plot needs MAJOR WORK. Even though you added and changed a few things, you may want to take to look at some other plots, that are at least two paragraphs, or are like a very short story. Those are the good plots, where people will join. I'd suggest being adopted, going to the drawing board thread, and any other RPing help thread, because not only does your plot need work, but from the Thread I actually joined, (<<---sadly saying) you're RPING NEEDS WORK TOO. Try being a million times more descriptive. And try making some background. Like with your plot, you may want to say in a few sentences WHY the worlds have collided. <---didn't think of that did you? You also may want to say what the trainer has to do <----is that in there? Oho. You may have said that your the only one who can save the world, but you took out that you had to close the portals. See? It needs work. Now instead of ignoring everyone's advice like you did in the original thread, it would help to read these posts.

~Naoko~

[Stemps]

OMG...I tried to tell you but you didn't listen. Well all I can say is GET HELP! Thats all I can say with out blowing my lid! So just ask people who can RP!