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White_Winter_Wolf
November 14th, 2005, 01:37 PM
I was bored when I wrote this poem, so enjoy.

Open Up Your Heart
Open up your heart
Its the only heart you got
Don't let it be broken
Its the only heart you got

Find some to love you
But make sure you love them back
Don't let them hurt, break, or use you
Your the only you you've got

Open up your heart
Its the only heart you got
Let them see it but hold it tight
Its the only heart you got

I know all this because
I was once a soul like you
To quickly I burned my heart away
Only to realize, it was the only one I got

Open up your heart
but don't spend it all away
Its not an allowence always regained
Its the only heart you got

Kurono
November 14th, 2005, 01:41 PM
Reading this poem makes me realize something...and its pretty obvious cause its repeated in the poem. This is a great poem, very emotional in my opinion.

Natsuki
November 23rd, 2005, 12:30 PM
Open Up Your Heart

Open up your heart
Its (It's) the only heart you got
Don't let it be broken
Its (It's) the only heart you got

Find some (someone) to love you
But make sure you love them back
Don't let them hurt, break, or use you
Your (You're) the only you you've got

Open up your heart
Its (It's) the only heart you got
Let them see it but hold it tight
Its (It's) the only heart you got

I know all this because
I was once a soul like you
To (Too) quickly I burned my heart away
Only to realize, it was the only one I got (had)

Open up your heart
but don't spend it all away
Its not an allowence (allowance) always regained
Its (It's) the only heart you got

This was a nice poem, White_Winter_Wolf. :3 It is trying to say that you should find someone who can truly love you, but to be cautious to not be so naive as to give up your whole heart and soul to them right away. Love can be hard - I know from experience. So one should always be willing to love another, but be careful to not give up everything they had for the sake of "love at first sight".

I corrected some grammatical and spelling errors in your poem. :3 Overall you did a nice job (sorry for the late review XD), keep it up! ^o^

~Kelsey

Envy
December 6th, 2005, 04:45 AM
This is a really great poem,I hope I will see more from u.