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fallen_angel
November 16th, 2005, 06:51 PM
Hey I hope you like my new poem. :D

Song of Life

Don't you know the song of life?
the ups and downs all around,
its so sweet yet so bitter,
its about the kitten litter.

Its about the poor man's joy,
and a child's broken toy,
it can sweep you off your feet,
going all around and playing a beat.

Its about the sunny days,
when all you can do is play,
or the rainy days of sorrow,
and know there is always tomorrow.

The song of life,
with its ups and downs,
that go all around,
dance the dance and please don't cry,
just throw it away like a piece of pie.

Come with me in the song of life,
don't wait and sigh, go right away,
with the joys and sorrows,
but knowing there is always tomorrow,
So come with me in the song of life.

Pete
November 19th, 2005, 09:27 AM
I like it a lot. Kinda sad in my opinion but its really good!

Yay! I posted first on your poem too!

Midori Chi
November 19th, 2005, 01:51 PM
Very nice! ^^ It does explain about life, i give you that! ^^

*rated= 4 out of 5*

fallen_angel
November 20th, 2005, 02:34 PM
Hello Pete and Midori Chi!!!! Haha. Thanks it just popped in my head. ^_^

phantom_zangetsu
November 20th, 2005, 08:46 PM
hello thoru!!! i like it it was really kind of sorta like what im experiencing here in school!! a bit like the first line though ill give it a 95/100!!! really nice

fallen_angel
November 21st, 2005, 05:51 AM
O hi Death Bringer! Thanks. ^_^

phantom_zangetsu
November 21st, 2005, 08:34 PM
well, your welcome!!! anytime!! but i really think it is good

phantom_zangetsu
November 21st, 2005, 08:34 PM
well, your welcome!!! anytime!! but i really think it is good

Cybex Mewtwo
November 22nd, 2005, 07:10 AM
Hmm......not too shabby. You did well. ^^

fallen_angel
November 22nd, 2005, 06:52 PM
well, your welcome!!! anytime!! but i really think it is good

^_^ THANKS!!! This is the most replys I got on a poem. it think.

fallen_angel
November 22nd, 2005, 06:56 PM
Hmm......not too shabby. You did well. ^^
Thanks daddy!!! ^_^ haha.