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blue eyes white dragon
November 21st, 2005, 11:32 AM
Darkness surrounds
All that is left is a void
The silence echoes
And blackness just stares

Life is gone
But consciousness is left
Just memories
And feelings of times gone by

I hear nothing
And it is deafening
Slowly the darkness moves closer
Its weight crushes

Trouble breathing
Trouble living
The void swallows
The last light

No more memories
No more feelings
Just emptiness
Nothingness

Cybex Mewtwo
November 22nd, 2005, 07:16 AM
Darkness surrounds
All that is left is a void
The silence echoes
And blackness just stares

Life is gone
But consciousness is left
Just memories
And feelings of times gone by

I hear nothing
And it is deafening
Slowly the darkness moves closer
Its weight crushes

Trouble breathing
Trouble living
The void swallows
The last light

No more memories
No more feelings
Just emptiness
Nothingness
man....like your other poem this simply crushes me inside. Very well written.