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Midori Chi
November 23rd, 2005, 04:11 PM
Umm..I'm not sure if this is allowed or not, but I'm willing to try. I'm deciding to, instead of making one poem per thread, make this thread here and post poems one per week. I hope this will work..

So, here's my first one! ^^

My Invisible Wounds

That very first day, I cried in my arms, for I confessed that I loved you.
And I was left with harm.
I cried so much that day, my eyes came red.
And yet I'd rather be alive than be dead.

My invisible wounds start to appear.
Sure, you can't see them, but to me they're all clear.

On the second day, I just felt worse.
Being around you became a curse.
I felt embarrast, because of my confession.
And with this, I have learned my lesson.

My invisible wounds start to appear.
Sure, you can't see them, but to me they're all clear.

The last day, I'm feeling better.
You say you apologize.
You wrote in that letter:

"I really do love you, I was just in a depression.
I'm sorry for causing you this after your confession."

We're together now, and forever will be.

My invisible wounds are now clean and free.

Himawarii
November 24th, 2005, 09:01 AM
Midori sweetie,these are fabulous =D Your poetry always seems to touch my heart for some reason.^__^keep it up,I must hear more! =33

Midori Chi
November 24th, 2005, 05:15 PM
Thanks! ^^ My next poem will maybe be Monday if I have time..

Sumomo & Kotoko
November 25th, 2005, 08:58 AM
*tear*, I always know what your talking about in your poems.:(
This was truely a great poem. *claps for Midori*

I like your idea of posting a new poem in the same thread.:D

Midori Chi
November 26th, 2005, 08:22 AM
hee hee..It isn't true, I mean, the story. Just made it up. But I guess you could base it off something that really happened?

Thanx.

Sumomo & Kotoko
November 26th, 2005, 11:11 AM
hee hee..It isn't true, I mean, the story. Just made it up. But I guess you could base it off something that really happened?

Thanx.
Yeah, it sounded like something that happend.:paranoid:

Pete
November 26th, 2005, 01:56 PM
It's really good.
Can't wait for more MC!

Midori Chi
November 30th, 2005, 04:12 PM
Okay. I'll be posting my next poem now! ^^

This is a poem I had to do 2 years ago. ( a poem project thingy XD)

It was so short I was able to memorize it! ^^


Feelings

When I'm sad, I turn to rain,
thinking bandaids will heal my pain.
When I'm mad, I turn to thunder,
giving off stress and starting to wonder.
When I'm happy I turn to sun,
thinking of all my friends and fun.
And no matter what happenes to me during the day,
I'll always be in my playful way.

Sumomo & Kotoko
November 30th, 2005, 09:07 PM
Lol, you've posted this before, here (http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=17956).

I still think its good.:D
*will be waiting for next poem*

MegaFuz
December 1st, 2005, 12:39 PM
Good stuff MC. I like them both a lot. XD

Midori Chi
December 4th, 2005, 01:30 PM
Thankes! ^^ Yeah, I know I've posted it before, RP. But I did that a LONG time ago..

Envy
December 4th, 2005, 03:45 PM
Ooooohhhhh,very good!Hi Midori,how are ya?Wait-let me think your doing great,right?
God,your so great at doing poems and I really mean it!*Hugs*

Midori Chi
December 4th, 2005, 05:47 PM
Aww..thank you, fwiend! ^_^

Captain Jack Sparrow
December 5th, 2005, 09:32 AM
Feelings

When I'm sad, I turn to rain,
thinking bandaids will heal my pain.
When I'm mad, I turn to thunder,
giving off stress and starting to wonder.
When I'm happy I turn to sun,
thinking of all my friends and fun.
And no matter what happenes to me during the day,
I'll always be in my playful way.

Woa, that one's really good. I'm going to use this for a school essay! We're supposed to bring in a written poem and share it, so I'm going to do this one! :D

Sumomo & Kotoko
December 5th, 2005, 10:49 AM
Woa, that one's really good. I'm going to use this for a school essay! We're supposed to bring in a written poem and share it, so I'm going to do this one! :D
You don't have to write the poem? You can just use some one elses?:\

Captain Jack Sparrow
December 5th, 2005, 12:00 PM
You don't have to write the poem? You can just use some one elses?:\

What do you mean, someone else's? Someone who's a published author? Well, I liked that poem, and my teacher didn't object...:D So I used it. :D :D Now Midori Chi is well-known for his good poetry in our class! :cool:

Sumomo & Kotoko
December 5th, 2005, 09:43 PM
What do you mean, someone else's? Someone who's a published author? Well, I liked that poem, and my teacher didn't object...:D So I used it. :D :D Now Midori Chi is well-known for his good poetry in our class! :cool:
No, what I ment was you don't have to write the poem your self, you can use some one elses (exp: Midori Chi). . . .

Midori Chi
December 7th, 2005, 03:37 PM
No, what I ment was you don't have to write the poem your self, you can use some one elses (exp: Midori Chi). . . .

You're using that in a project? That's very nice of you. ^^

Captain Jack Sparrow
December 7th, 2005, 04:54 PM
You're using that in a project? That's very nice of you. ^^
Well, what can I say, Midori? You're a natural in poems! Seriously, no joke. Anyways, Raven's Phoenix, no, I didn't have to write the poem myself. It was supposed to be written already, to answer your question. ;) Anyways, Midori, keep up the great work! I can't wait to hear more!

Midori Chi
December 8th, 2005, 10:03 AM
Hmm..I guess I'll go ahead and post my next poem. It's winter themed for the holidays! ^^

~A Frozen Rose~

No more dew in the morning, no longer a yellow from the sun.
The grass is a yellow brown, and the sky has a grey to it.
A cold winter day, that I know won't stay,
because the frozen rose is dry.

I'm looking up at the ceiling. I hear a patter of rain.
The next moment I'm feeling..
a shiver down my back. But I'm happy.
This frozen rose is back.

Months later, the sun is out. The street is no longer icy.
The sky's no longer grey.
The sun is a bright yellow, and the grass is a bright green
Now that frozen rose is dry and fresh. The winter is over.

And yet, I'm not so sad. I can see you again. The sun shows me light, and you show me your smile. Are you happy too? I hope you are. The frozen rose just faded like a star.

Captain Jack Sparrow
December 8th, 2005, 01:45 PM
O_O Oh. My. Gosh. That is brilliant, Midori! I can't wait to hear more! I've already printed out one of your poems, the "My Feelings". I think I'll print this one out and put it in my room, along with the other one. :D

Midori Chi
December 8th, 2005, 04:56 PM
You're the only one who's done that. :cool:

Sumomo & Kotoko
December 11th, 2005, 10:26 PM
*smiles* I always enjoy reading your poetry. It gives me a smile.:D
(will read all of your poems);)

Sankari
December 13th, 2005, 09:59 AM
*gulp* Oh, God, Midori Chi...you are a natural at poems. They are completely fantastic. All I can say is keep up the good work. Your poems are beautiful.

Pete
December 13th, 2005, 10:54 AM
These are amazing!

I envy your talent....
Anyway I enjoyed all of them thoroughly. Good job!

Midori Chi
December 15th, 2005, 11:33 AM
*smiles*
Thanx! ^^ I'm going to post my next poem now.

~The wind~

I'm walking by your house. The wind is smooth.
I'm walking up to your door. The wind gets heavy.
I ring the door bell. The wind gradually gets strong by each step you take to answer the door.
You open the door, the wind starts to growl. You let me in, the wind shuts the door.

I'm inside, so the wind can't hurt us.
I'm nowhere near thedoor, so the wind can't complain.
I'm safe, I'm glad, the wind is still angry, though.

Soon, the wind is strong outside. It teasr down the house.
But we're safe, because our love is just as strong as the wind.

Flygon_Zero
December 23rd, 2005, 04:03 PM
You really have a knack for poems =D
After reading em, I really feel honored you liked mine. =D

Anyways, you're very good at this, and I hope to continue seeing more of your works here. =D

Midori Chi
December 26th, 2005, 02:40 PM
Thank you. ^^

Hmm..can't think of anything to say, really...

Sumomo & Kotoko
December 27th, 2005, 02:36 AM
Lol, that made me laugh, don't know why thoe. . .

Don't get me wrong, it was good, and I really liked it.
But something about it made me smile.

Intuition
December 27th, 2005, 08:07 AM
Very nice poems! I enjoyed reading them all :) I hope to see more of your work soon.

Captain Jack Sparrow
December 27th, 2005, 08:43 AM
Really nice poem, Midori. ---<---<---@

Midori Chi
December 27th, 2005, 10:16 AM
Lust's Veyron: It made you laugh? Hmm,I guess I see your point.

Mewther and Scipio: Thanks! ^^

ThEoNeAnDoNlY555
January 19th, 2006, 04:12 PM
Wow... You are pretty good, I think sometimes your lines are too long, and should be broken off sooner, but the poetry itself is amazing. Keep up the good work, and I will check back for more ASAP!

Midori Chi
January 20th, 2006, 02:44 PM
Shorter lines? Hmm...Yeah. I understand. I'll do that in the next poem I write which I'll post soon. (possibly my next post)

Pheles
January 22nd, 2006, 03:43 PM
Cool. I can't wait to read your next one.

Midori Chi
January 26th, 2006, 03:16 PM
Okay. Here's my next poem. Actually, it's a song I made up last year:

Angel's Fate

You came into my heart. You know we're meant to be.
We knew it from the start. Now my wings are free!
My fate is with my love. It's all destiny.
Forever and ever...

Don't give up. Never give up.
Everlasting.
Don't give up. Never give up.
Overflowing.
Don't give up. Never give up.
I love you. I always have loved you.
Angel's fate.

Atop an angel sings. The melody, it rings.
All the laughs of joy...turn into tears.
And all the cries. Will you open your eyes?
Forever and ever..


Don't give up. Never give up.
Everlasting.
Don't give up. Never give up.
Overflowing.
Don't give up. Never give up.
I love you. I always have loved you.
Angel's Fate.

Yuka
January 27th, 2006, 08:51 PM
Um...that last poem was very good! Great job,keep up the good work!

Midori Chi
January 29th, 2006, 02:50 PM
Thanks. XD
I'm going to start posting my newer poems, though. Two of all the poems written in here are ones from either one or two years ago..

Pheles
January 29th, 2006, 03:31 PM
Wow. So you've been making poems for a while?

I like this one, btw..

Since you said it was a song, I imagined sorta a jumpy tune..

Sumomo & Kotoko
January 31st, 2006, 06:27 PM
Nice, like always Midori, I loved it (just like I love you!!)

I'm guessing that was the theam song to T.S.A??

*dramatic exit*

Midori Chi
February 1st, 2006, 03:27 PM
*smiles*

No, that was the themesong to a comic I made that was called "Angel's Fate."
It was a comic I made last year but then threw it away cause it was a copy off of Tsubasa....

Meh, I'm in a mood to post my next one:

Your Gentle Smile

When I woke up, time standed still.
I opened my eyes and felt a sudden chill.
I sat up slowly and my feet touched the floor,
I stood up with sudden energy and opened the door.

As time slowly passed and the evening came,
I was full of worry, full of shame.
But then something happened as I looked outside..
It was as flowing as the wind, the sea, or the tide.

I looked outside, and your face came to mind.
You gave out a smile, so warm and kind.
I gave a smile back, hoping you would see.
But your face wasn't really there to me.

I can't wait to see you.
I can't wait to see that warm and kind smile.
That comforting smile.
Your gentle smile...

Sumomo & Kotoko
February 1st, 2006, 09:44 PM
OMFG!! I loved that!! I'm on the phone right now and so I read it to my friend (Sarahjane) and she said she loves it to!!

I *might* be comming over tomorrow.

Bye bye!!

*dramatic exit*

Midori Chi
February 2nd, 2006, 04:06 PM
Might?
Yay! ^^

What's up with the dramatic exits? lol

.:Melissa:.
February 2nd, 2006, 07:34 PM
I like your poetry Midori Chi!

Sumomo & Kotoko
February 2nd, 2006, 07:48 PM
Might?
Yay! ^^

What's up with the dramatic exits? lol
Lol, its my "signature".

Yeah, that might. I'm busy tomorrow (and sunday), BUT!! my Saturday is wide open!!
So (in other words) I'm all yours. :)

*dramatic exit, but trips & falls*
Ouch!!. . .

Yuka
February 3rd, 2006, 03:20 PM
Hey,That poem,Your Gentle Smile...I think it's so good!>.<
Dang,your really great at doing poetry.^^

Karasuma
February 3rd, 2006, 03:22 PM
*smiles*
Thanx! ^^ I'm going to post my next poem now.

~The wind~

I'm walking by your house. The wind is smooth.
I'm walking up to your door. The wind gets heavy.
I ring the door bell. The wind gradually gets strong by each step you take to answer the door.
You open the door, the wind starts to growl. You let me in, the wind shuts the door.

I'm inside, so the wind can't hurt us.
I'm nowhere near thedoor, so the wind can't complain.
I'm safe, I'm glad, the wind is still angry, though.

Soon, the wind is strong outside. It teasr down the house.
But we're safe, because our love is just as strong as the wind.

Wow Chi Chi, your poems are really good. When I read them, it makes me calm and I enjoy it. Your gifted with such an ability, I look forward to see new poems =)

Midori Chi
February 3rd, 2006, 03:24 PM
*smiles*

Thanks, you three. ^___^

Since Valentines Day is coming up, I decided to make my next one with a v-day theme:

My Valentine

A heart is a shape, a soul, and a part.
We were born with this heart from the very start.
A love is a person or thing held dear,
and I hope you know it's crystal clear.
A promise is a secret that we all have to keep,
that we can share, and is held deep.
A crush is different. You know it's true.
Sometimes the ending is under the blue.
My valentine is my love, and my love is my valentine.
My heart keeps this promise, and it's more than a crush.
You feel the same. I hope you do.
You're my valentine, and that mush is true.

Sumomo & Kotoko
February 9th, 2006, 08:45 PM
*claps*

very nice Midori!!

Does the ryming come to you easly?

Midori Chi
February 12th, 2006, 06:01 PM
Meh, I just find rhyming fun. So..I guess you could find something fun easy? XD

moody_cow_
February 18th, 2006, 08:59 PM
Wow!!!! You're a really good poet!! I REALLY liked your last three poems!!! :) And the Valentine one made me feel all squishy *still feels all squishy and gets the sudden urge to giggle girlishly* :P Anyways, I look forward to reading more of your work!!! Keep it up!! :) *hug*

Midori Chi
February 19th, 2006, 10:52 AM
Thanks! ^^

I'll post my next one a little later.
Maybe two posts from now..

Sumomo & Kotoko
February 23rd, 2006, 09:11 PM
Well, let me help you get there. . .
*posts*

LOVE YA AND MISS YA!!

{{L.V.}}

Pheles
February 24th, 2006, 06:26 PM
:) Okay. I'm here, too. As soon as I'm done posting this, you can post your next poem.

Midori Chi
February 24th, 2006, 06:55 PM
Wow. =D Thanks.
Okay, here's my next one:


I'm sorry

It's been more than a year,
since that day we turned away from love.
Awhile back, you said you were heart broken. My dear,
Was it my fault?

If it is, and if it was, there's some words I'd like to say:
I'm sorry. Forgive me. I love you. Okay?

I've stared out my window, hoping for your face.
Please don't feel sad.
It's just our love isn't a race.
Sure, we're only freinds, but the future we want will come.
We just have to be patient.

If you're mad for some odd reason, here's some words I'd like to say:
I'm sorry. Forgive me. I love you. Okay?

That day will surely come. Just wait, just wait.
I'm sorry. Forgive me. I love you.
Just wait...

Sumomo & Kotoko
February 24th, 2006, 07:52 PM
Wow, I really really love your work Midori.

Some how I always know what your talkin' about.

And I like how your words flow from one to the next, you don't force it to rym.:)

Midori Chi
February 26th, 2006, 05:29 PM
TT I keep planning to make my poems different, but it still hasn't happened.
Hmm..my next poem will be something happy and possibly not about love..just for the sake of difference..