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Shadowburn
November 24th, 2005, 02:31 AM
Hey, Comments and crits extremely welcome from anyone! If you give me a suggestion i'll try it. So. Whadoyathink?

http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/3052/lbm2hv.png (http://imageshack.us) A monster thing a made like 6 months ago.

http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/1069/guy5hc.png (http://imageshack.us) I felt like making carrot-head kinda guy.

And just because, a plane, an ice-cream con, and a tiger, http://img481.imageshack.us/img481/2807/ait8pk.png (http://imageshack.us)

Allstories
November 24th, 2005, 02:43 AM
The latter isn't really pixel art, the sun has a black outline, the shading blends too harshly and doesn't conform to the shapes of the subjects, the sky is just plain ugly, your lines aren't curved very well (try the curved line tool) and everything in general looks pretty ameteur-ish.

Otherwise, it's okay.