View Full Version : shadow meltdown

November 24th, 2005, 8:16 PM
chiper,magma,aqua,and the rockets have teamed up to make shadow that CANNOT be purified.We have to stop them brfore they turn deoxis,and rayquaza into shadows!
sign up sheet:

persain*rare wildcard*
we start in palllat town(as we all know)
like any other trainer.but then we discover chiper`s and the other team`s plan.then we set on a journey to stop them.but we get stuck on twsits and turns and thoose shadow pokemon on the way.we have to stop them!

November 24th, 2005, 9:08 PM
will people PLEAZ join???

Alter Ego
November 25th, 2005, 2:26 AM
1. Don't double post.

2. Read the rules (Taken from the RP rules (http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=48899) topic, bolding done by me)

RPG Plot

Like any fan fiction, you have to have an idea before you can make the story, and this is exactly what a plot is. A plot is a sort of idea given to the members so as they can build on it. Without a plot you cannot produce an RPG. For example, at the start of a game or some stories, you normally have a Prologue or summery of what the game or book is about, this is a plot.

Three main things are needed in a plot:

Originality: Which will draw members to the RPG, the last thing you want to do is a have a plot about a bunch of trainers going on a journey as you would see in the Pokemon Anime, no, you want a good story with a few plot twists. We are not stopping you from starting a Trainer RP, but it would be an idea to add a few plot twists and some adventure, this is what draws members to your RPG.

Detail: Description, History and emotions all come into the detail of a Plot; with out detail the plot will have no feel and therefore not attract members. Were not saying it has to be a 14 page essay, but make it more than 4 lines and add some description into it to allow members to have the idea of what the plot is about.

Interest: Originality and Detail all come into the interest of the plot. You want to draw members to the RPG so make it interesting by adding a few plot twists and furthermore, just making up your own story.

NO1: No plot, no RPG…follow the directions given above to give a decent plot and sign up sheet. If these demands are not met, then your RPG will be closed.

Your 'plot' is way too short and undetailed, not to mention being a complete clich. I'm afraid I'll have to report this. *Reports*

November 25th, 2005, 11:09 AM
is anybody gonna PLEAZ join???????????????

November 26th, 2005, 6:11 AM
Didn't you hear Alter Ego?

He said exactly what any RPG mod would have, so please listen to him...