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MegaFuz
December 1st, 2005, 12:42 PM
Alrighty...here's my poetry thread. I'll try to update at least somewhat frequently. Here's my first entry. One I wrote a while back...

"Embrace The Storm"

The clouds converge
Now a darker tone
A trident raised high
Points to the unknown
Below is what draws us
The forgotten grave
Where souls linger
Riveted tight
The ocean floor buckles
And into the night
Becoming the shadow
No land in sight

Neptune's fury
Rising up strong
Tsunami wave breaking
Sweeping us along
Daughters of the sea
Sing their cold song
Calling us to join them
Don't stay too long
In search of the answer
In a hidden treasure chest
Swallowed up whole
Just like the rest

Take a walk on the shore
Or the wild side
Washed away foot prints
By the midnight tide
Leaving no trace
Of what's left behind
Leaving you shackled
By a gripping bind
Coral reef wreckage
Intertwined by fate
Day of decision
At the holy gate

Walk up the stairs
Of the frail lighthouse
Over in the corner
Stirs a lonely mouse
Look into abyss
See the ship's light
Just like the mouse
Alone in the night
The only company
Are the stars in the sky
Keeping the hope
Sustaining the drive

The wisened owl
Soars up above
With strength of a tiger
And grace of a dove
Scanning the ground
For the perfect prey
Time of decision
It's judgement day
But unlike the beacon
Up on the hill
Moves in without warning
To make the kill

Perched on the hillside
The old cottage dwells
Riddled by question
No answer swells
Near the sea-sprayed cliff
A wolf howls at the moon
Deep down within
It came all too soon
One chilling experience over
Another yet to begin
The chronicles of life
Eroded by sin

THIRTY-SIX
December 1st, 2005, 12:50 PM
*pauses music*
omg that was amazing better than most poetry that gets posted here >.>
its just a shame my sister spoilt the atmosphere with here conersation on the phone >.<
oh you need to think of better titles... its good but it basically tells us what the poem is about
professionals have a title that links to the poem but not the meaning
thats what i regard this poem as professional ^.^

MegaFuz
December 3rd, 2005, 06:05 PM
*pauses music*
omg that was amazing better than most poetry that gets posted here >.>
its just a shame my sister spoilt the atmosphere with here conersation on the phone >.<
oh you need to think of better titles... its good but it basically tells us what the poem is about
professionals have a title that links to the poem but not the meaning
thats what i regard this poem as professional ^.^


Professional, eh?? I'm not sure if it's that good.

And yeesh...only one comment...that's nasty...

MegaFuz
April 3rd, 2006, 12:30 PM
Sorry about the double post, but I figured keeping this thread alive was better than making a new one. So yeah...here's more poetry from me...

"The Oracle"

I want to travel
To the valley of light
Where the sun meets the meadows
And all troubles take flight
Every last worry
Will be on its way
So we can start anew
With a brand new day
Free of all burdens
In a state of bliss
Touched by a goddess
An arch angel's kiss
But could it be enough
To set our mind free
Casting dilemma
Out to sea
Or will the darkness
Once again consume
Bringing back the feeling
Of everlasting doom

I'd love to float
On a gentle breeze
To where the sound of happiness
Echoes through the trees
The snow capped tips
Of Mount Olympus
Wrapped in sun rays
Cuddled by nimbus
With the flocks heading south
Our problems departing
Just you in my arms
My beautiful darling
Rivers flow crystal
The blossoms sway
Apollo's Oracle
Shows us the way
Is it worth starting over?
Or should we remain
Groves of grapevines
Showered in rain

Apollo, please
Show me the way
Apollo, I'm begging
Start a new day
Send us your army
Send us war
With the flocks heading south
Dilemma will soar

phantom_zangetsu
April 4th, 2006, 04:46 AM
very mystical, sounds more like...err....greek-ish the first one and the other one too! nice! a more historical,mythology watchamacallit. lol! but still yeah really nice!

THIRTY-SIX
April 9th, 2006, 01:29 AM
i finally got around to reading it xD
very awesome x3
you are using better titles now imo ...:3

MegaFuz
April 11th, 2006, 12:27 PM
Thanks for the comments guys. :P Here's another one...

"Lambent"

Cascading, retreating
Down her solemn face
She heard the celebrant murmur
Seven thousand words
Each one lonelier
Than the one before
None has any meaning
Any meaning at all
The sunshine devours
Each and every thought
Then spits it back out
For the wolves to feast
A carcass, a scavenger
Picking the bones clean
Fireflies exploding
In front of our eyes
They'll burn for centuries
In the shape of a shooting star
Do you think they'll expire?
Do you think they'll submit?
To the forces from outside
The edges of our universe
Pulsating victoriously
In and back out of sight

As always, comments appreciated. XD

Silverwing
April 12th, 2006, 05:16 PM
Ooh.. very nice! I really like the mood that you set for your poems.. very mysterious. O_O

MegaFuz
April 15th, 2006, 09:17 PM
Thanks Red Lugia!! XD Here's a new one. Comments always appreciated. :P

"Circles"

Boundaries and walls
Conformed in our heads
Pushing forms of life
Into graves of the dead
I'm leaping across canyons
Whether high or low
To breach the distance
To scratch this plateau
Canceling any limits
That were set in stone
Pumping blood through veins
Rattling old bones
Lonely apparitions
Ponder the crescents' gleam
Attempting to mend
These shattered seams
Separated lovers
Observe the lunar glare
Yet being parted
Is too much to bare
So I'll bank on the fact
That where my love halts
Is only the beginning
Where your love starts
I'll leap across clouds
Then fall all the way down
To the rings of Saturn
That warmly surround
The deceased walk in circles
For centuries on end
It’s just around the corner
Just around the bend
Hope is all we have
On an eve such as this
Destiny blockaded
By an untimely twist
Continuing to wander
The Atlantic's floor
To find out what lies
Behind the mystery door
Perhaps it's better
Left shut tight
But curiosity prevails
On every lonely night
And so the legend
Is left untold
Failure to bust open
This cast-iron mold

MegaFuz
April 26th, 2006, 11:14 AM
Sorry for the DP but the last one recieved no comments, sadly. Anywho...here's a new one.

"In Line"

As the stars streak across the sky
I think to myself and wonder
How many last breaths are taken
At this very moment in time
Yet as I am overtaken
By the question at hand
I am uplifted at the same time
For I know that over the horizon
Is a birth of great proportions
A bringer of hope and potential
Holding the planets in line
Like knights at a round table
Everything in its place
A ray of blinding light
A blinding light of disarray
Does a paradox so perfect
Crawl out of hibernation?
Cause I know gravity holds me
But I feel I'm floating away
The caravan is long overdue
But there is no need to worry
As long as passengers wait to board
The station patiently waits
And as long as children gather
There is a fable to behold

THIRTY-SIX
April 26th, 2006, 12:15 PM
i read Lambent and i loved it, the way it gives out a depressing vibe :D, but the shooting star hmm makes me think of hope ... im not sure about the meaning of "in line".. about waiting? its confusing for me.. i'll have to read circles later

MegaFuz
April 27th, 2006, 02:51 PM
That's the way I like my poetry to come off. I write in mostly metaphors so people have to really think and delve into my writing. It also opens it up so everyone can interpret it to mean something different, and even somehow relate it to their own thoughts or life. Glad ya like it though. :P

THIRTY-SIX
May 4th, 2006, 09:31 AM
dude i love circles =D
i can picture parts of the poem being in a goth rock song xD nice man
i love you ....

MegaFuz
May 17th, 2006, 08:39 AM
Haha thanks Munna!! As I told you in the DCC, my writing is heavily influened by the rock band Tool. Not exactly gothic rock, but they definately write some very dark stuff. o.O Anywho...here's a new one. XD

"These Shades"

Worded fangs
Piercing the skin
Implied venom
Breaching within
Flooding the gates
That were built to withstand

Antidote
To poison

Every color
Has a different shade
Assorted variant
Will invade
Shattering the hope
It breaks in the end

Antidote
To poison

Drown the fortune
In foreboding tunes
Citadel mistaken
Unidentified runes
Every last stronghold
Ends up collapsing in sand

Antidote
To poison

Let the infrastructure
Fade on its way
Envelop the possible
Start a new day
Forget and let slide
From the depths of your head

Antidote
To poison

THIRTY-SIX
May 17th, 2006, 08:44 AM
the first and last stanza are the best =D
the amount of images flooding therough my head oh boy xD
the last was about the mind or somethin
diddnt like the 2 line repition stanzas though.. :/
but guess what?... the rasmus were playing when i clicked on the thread xD

MegaFuz
May 24th, 2006, 05:40 PM
the first and last stanza are the best =D
the amount of images flooding therough my head oh boy xD
the last was about the mind or somethin
diddnt like the 2 line repition stanzas though.. :/
but guess what?... the rasmus were playing when i clicked on the thread xD

Haha. Thanks once again, Munna. XD Really glad you enjoyed it bro.

Heart-felt
May 29th, 2006, 05:49 PM
...gasp. These are beautiful! *hugs* Sorry, I can't help it ^^! It's not very often you see a good poet!

Please, keep them coming! I'd love to read more ^___^!

Envy
May 31st, 2006, 12:22 PM
Awsome! I really like the poem, I like the part where it said "Drown the fortune
In foreboding tunes
Citadel mistaken
Unidentified runes
Every last stronghold
Ends up collapsing in sand"

MegaFuz
June 23rd, 2006, 08:08 PM
...gasp. These are beautiful! *hugs* Sorry, I can't help it ^^! It's not very often you see a good poet!

Please, keep them coming! I'd love to read more ^___^!

*hugs* Thanks!! I'm glad you like them. XDD

Awsome! I really like the poem, I like the part where it said "Drown the fortune
In foreboding tunes
Citadel mistaken
Unidentified runes
Every last stronghold
Ends up collapsing in sand"

Thanks a bunch!!

Sorry for the lack of updates lately. Just been rather busy with vacation, college orientation, my spriting project, etc. o.O I should have a new poem up very soon so keep your eyes peeled. XD

MegaFuz
July 8th, 2006, 11:38 AM
Sorry for the DP, but uhh...new stuff.

"Sew The Raindrops"

Sew the raindrops together
Then hang them on a wall
Where everyone can see
And stand to admire
Word will spread far
And then they will come
To see the tapestry
Of what they said could not be done

We ran out of canvas
But found something new
Climbed up a ladder
And used the moon
Painted what we saw
In the back of our head
Mother Nature found out
And got kinda mad

Gathered up the ash
From spouting Pompeii
Molded it together
In a sculpted display
With a little bit of glue
It all came together
Fiery and beautiful
Like a phoenix feather

Take the fallen Autumn leaves
And tie them back up
With the most beautiful ribbon
Eyes have ever seen
Winter can wait
Just one more day
Prolonging Fall
So we can go out and play

The unending ocean
Was just too blue
Took out some dye
And altered its hue
The atmosphere brightened
And we all rejoiced
The perfect combination
A brilliant choice