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GodofPH
December 3rd, 2005, 06:48 PM
Above My Reach

There you are, standing there, all alone...seemingly
But alas, you are beyond my reach. Taken you claim to be

Are you really? Can it be?
Was I too slow? Stupid me...

He's never there, like a ghost
When its I, who want you most

Must I wait, while my desire is chaste
A spectator I am, how long will it last?

Day in and ay out, yet still it thrives
Pain stings my heart, a thousand bee hives

When will come the day
when things are not this way?

A week? A month? Maybe a year?
However long, I'll still percervere

You say you're happy when he's not even there
when I'm always here for you, it isn't fair.

Should I let go? Should I move on?
I tried, I can't, my destinys drawn.

Above my reach, thats what you are
but with my ambition as a boost, I shall go far...

Sumomo & Kotoko
December 3rd, 2005, 08:24 PM
*is shocked that no one has commented yet*

I love this poem. It ryms!! Yaya!!

I can't wait to see more of your work.:D

Raiting: 9.8/10:P

GodofPH
December 4th, 2005, 10:20 AM
Well, I only posted it last night at 10, so I can see why nobody has commented on it until now. Thanks for the comments.

Alana
December 5th, 2005, 07:25 PM
I agree with Raven's Phoenix. Strange this has only gotten one review. ^_^ I saw a couple of typoes but it's no biggie. I think it's very good. I give it a 9.8/10 as well. :rambo:

GodofPH
December 5th, 2005, 07:27 PM
Sorry for the typoes, I write my poems in notepad, rather than Microsoft Word. But thanks for the good words.